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Apnea is nothing to mess with. I have it, and didn't know until one of my friends told me I would stop breathing in my sleep, and of course I snore like mad. I never felt rested. I've been using a CPAP machine for years now, and have felt better since. Glad he got Ralph in to be tested!
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I totally agree with Seamus! Matt started taking Seamus for granted, blames him when he's feeling "left out", then grabs poor Aiden and walks out. I guess Matt didn't grow up as much as he wanted us to believe.
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Now that I'm thinking about it, it's been forever since I've seen a jukebox! I remember one restaurant my parents took me to often when I was really young had little jukeboxes at each table. I miss those days.
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Well, who knew when Matt finally met his match it would be his baby brother?! I, too, feel for Matt. What he's going through sounds like complete hell. Seamus is right though, they need to nip this in the bud immediately. I hope it gets easier for Matt as he and Aiden go farther into the two weeks.
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I feel bad for Bobby, having a mother and uncle like that. I was worried that maybe his mother had intercepted the letter, destroyed it, and was gonna tell him the letter never came. Could totally see that happening. I hope we eventually get to see what secrets his mother and uncle are hiding, because their behavior is totally suspish.
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Being a Gemini myself, I've never been one to reflect. I've always been a "do u wanna do this or not because I don't have time to sit around and wait" kind of person. I guess that's why I have so little patience with some of these characters, not naming names (Matt) Lmao 🤣🤣🤣
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So happy for Jason!! I like Connor. He seems very sweet.
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I'm sorry, but Matt is totally on my last damn nerve. He talks about wanting to live it up before he has to adult. He's had no responsibility beyond school for 20 years! I kno school, work and a child can be a lot of pressure, but people do it every day. He's not the first, and he won't be the last. Their maturity level is showing big time! If I were Seamus, I'd tell Matt to go do what you gotta do.
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Men. They are un-understandable
jaysalmn commented on Mrsgnomie's story chapter in Men. They are un-understandable
Think about it. Moving in to get the adoption finalized, getting "his dick wet", then leaving for the summer and moving out when he gets back. I don't think that Matt's a bad person or has bad intentions or would even think that way, but I think it would look a little suspish to someone who doesn't know what WE know.- 37 comments
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Men. They are un-understandable
jaysalmn commented on Mrsgnomie's story chapter in Men. They are un-understandable
Idk what to think of this chapter. Their conversation at the end kinda makes it sound like Matt used Seamus to get the adoption inspection ok'd and to end his "dry spell", and he's moving out now that he got what he needed. I kno it was Seamus' idea for Matt to move in, but still. I realize Matt is young and a novice at relationships, but I'd be upset if I were Seamus' too.- 37 comments
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Teens drinking and doing drugs isn't my idea of a good story. Just saying...
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So happy to see a new chapter! I love this story and can't wait to read more!
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I've spent most of the afternoon and evening reading the story, simply because I couldn't stop once I started. I haven't read the stories in order, but am happy that I'm caught up on how everyone ended up at Camp Refuge. Absolutely loved the story, and all the characters... with the exception of Elias' mother and her scum boyfriend. Great writing on all of the Camp Refuge stories!
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Sad chapter. Not surprising that Lee messed up...again, but sad that Avery got mixed up in it. I'm not a forgiving type of person, so I can understand Greg's reaction. I would probably ask Lee to leave if I were in his position. Harsh maybe, but I don't have time for BS. If he has known that Lee stole the money, he wouldn't have been there to get Avery into trouble and endangering his life.
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My heart breaks for Pat. I can kind of understand where Brad is coming from, however I think he is making a mistake and hurting Pat in the process. He already calls Brad dad, so would any of the other kids even notice if he adopted Pat?
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Same here. Lol! I love Lilith!
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Patrick's story is heartbreaking. So happy he is safe and healing at Sanctuary.
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Jake, don't waste your time and energy. The so-called boyfriend who supposedly loves you is making out with another guy...one that he supposedly hates. Call it a night and go home.
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Can't wait to see what the break in the case is. Emily better not start anything. We may have to pay her a visit if she does. Nobody messes with Sanctuary!
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I was totally in Dylan's corner....until now. Being drunk is no excuse for ending up in an empty room and kissing Liam. Forget alcohol breath, kissing someone who broke your bones would be enough to make me vomit! The only thing Liam deserves is a good, hard throat punch! I kinda hate Dylan as much as I hate Liam at this point.
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Great chapter! I felt bad for Seth waking up alone, but can totally understand Noah rushing out to meet his mom and forgetting to leave a note. Enjoyed the second dinner. Lilith is hilarious! I just love her! I don't know who's gonna be the bad influence on who when Lilith meets Lia! Lol!!
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I think I'm gonna have to bow out on this one. It's pretty obvious that Tristan is gonna forgive Peter, even though he doesn't deserve it. He's gonna go back to Peter, even though he had another life that he kept secret from Tristan, just as he kept Tristan a secret from his own family. Liars and cheats are always gonna be liars and cheats. Great writing, but not my kind of story.
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Seriously?? That was Peter's shitty excuse??? I would have felt for him if they had been in college, just out of high school and his father was paying his expenses. This asshole is a lawyer... with a career... who could move ANYWHERE and practice. He did it all just to ride daddy's coat-tails and cash in. He's a cheat, a liar, and a coward! He should be embarrassed and ashamed! If Tristan falls for this, he's an idiot!
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Hmmm..... That's about all I got for this chapter. Lol
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I agree with you. I see absolutely zero redeeming qualities when it comes to Liam. No way in hell would I ever forgive someone like him. I would take that grudge to the grave!
