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Men. They are un-understandable
jaysalmn commented on Mrsgnomie's story chapter in Men. They are un-understandable
Think about it. Moving in to get the adoption finalized, getting "his dick wet", then leaving for the summer and moving out when he gets back. I don't think that Matt's a bad person or has bad intentions or would even think that way, but I think it would look a little suspish to someone who doesn't know what WE know.- 37 comments
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Men. They are un-understandable
jaysalmn commented on Mrsgnomie's story chapter in Men. They are un-understandable
Idk what to think of this chapter. Their conversation at the end kinda makes it sound like Matt used Seamus to get the adoption inspection ok'd and to end his "dry spell", and he's moving out now that he got what he needed. I kno it was Seamus' idea for Matt to move in, but still. I realize Matt is young and a novice at relationships, but I'd be upset if I were Seamus' too.- 37 comments
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Teens drinking and doing drugs isn't my idea of a good story. Just saying...
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So happy to see a new chapter! I love this story and can't wait to read more!
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I've spent most of the afternoon and evening reading the story, simply because I couldn't stop once I started. I haven't read the stories in order, but am happy that I'm caught up on how everyone ended up at Camp Refuge. Absolutely loved the story, and all the characters... with the exception of Elias' mother and her scum boyfriend. Great writing on all of the Camp Refuge stories!
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Sad chapter. Not surprising that Lee messed up...again, but sad that Avery got mixed up in it. I'm not a forgiving type of person, so I can understand Greg's reaction. I would probably ask Lee to leave if I were in his position. Harsh maybe, but I don't have time for BS. If he has known that Lee stole the money, he wouldn't have been there to get Avery into trouble and endangering his life.
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My heart breaks for Pat. I can kind of understand where Brad is coming from, however I think he is making a mistake and hurting Pat in the process. He already calls Brad dad, so would any of the other kids even notice if he adopted Pat?
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Same here. Lol! I love Lilith!
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Patrick's story is heartbreaking. So happy he is safe and healing at Sanctuary.
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Jake, don't waste your time and energy. The so-called boyfriend who supposedly loves you is making out with another guy...one that he supposedly hates. Call it a night and go home.
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Can't wait to see what the break in the case is. Emily better not start anything. We may have to pay her a visit if she does. Nobody messes with Sanctuary!
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I was totally in Dylan's corner....until now. Being drunk is no excuse for ending up in an empty room and kissing Liam. Forget alcohol breath, kissing someone who broke your bones would be enough to make me vomit! The only thing Liam deserves is a good, hard throat punch! I kinda hate Dylan as much as I hate Liam at this point.
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Great chapter! I felt bad for Seth waking up alone, but can totally understand Noah rushing out to meet his mom and forgetting to leave a note. Enjoyed the second dinner. Lilith is hilarious! I just love her! I don't know who's gonna be the bad influence on who when Lilith meets Lia! Lol!!
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I think I'm gonna have to bow out on this one. It's pretty obvious that Tristan is gonna forgive Peter, even though he doesn't deserve it. He's gonna go back to Peter, even though he had another life that he kept secret from Tristan, just as he kept Tristan a secret from his own family. Liars and cheats are always gonna be liars and cheats. Great writing, but not my kind of story.
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Seriously?? That was Peter's shitty excuse??? I would have felt for him if they had been in college, just out of high school and his father was paying his expenses. This asshole is a lawyer... with a career... who could move ANYWHERE and practice. He did it all just to ride daddy's coat-tails and cash in. He's a cheat, a liar, and a coward! He should be embarrassed and ashamed! If Tristan falls for this, he's an idiot!
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Hmmm..... That's about all I got for this chapter. Lol
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I agree with you. I see absolutely zero redeeming qualities when it comes to Liam. No way in hell would I ever forgive someone like him. I would take that grudge to the grave!
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Great chapter!! I'm glad Dylan got to unload on Liam. Liam deserved worse, and probably would have gotten it if it hadn't been in the middle of the night. It made me feel so sad when Dylan described what Liam had done to him. What makes him think he deserves any kind of forgiveness?? WTF is with these clueless and entitled assholes?? Between Liam "missing him" and Sebastian asking him out in a date? You have no idea how much I hate these people.
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Great chapter! I'm liking Jake a lot! I think he's perfect for Dylan. So, last chapter u didn't seem too keen on my idea of Dylan rigging Liam's car with explosives. Lol! How about Jake asking Liam to stand behind the Mercedes to make sure the reverse lights work properly???
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Oh, I can't wait!!! 😃
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It will be interesting to see what kind of excuses Peter is going to make up for what he did to Tristan. Personally, there isn't an excuse that would be forgiveable. I would have told Peter waiting at the hotel was a waste of time, and walked away.
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I hope to hell this isn't a story where the good guy forgives and ends up in a relationship with the asshole that cut him off as a friend and beat the hell out of him repeatedly! He should have pressed charges on him! Maybe Dylan is good with rigging a shiny Camaro with explosives??? 😇
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Great start. Definitely will be interesting to see how this plays out. First impressions are I like Dylan. I feel bad for him because of how he was treated. Hope the guy in the Mercedes isn't someone bad for him. Liam is a major d-bag. Don't like him at all. He was an asshole to his so-called best friend, and doesn't deserve Dylan's friendship or anything else from him.
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Footloose? Let's get it STARTED
jaysalmn commented on FSELL's story chapter in Footloose? Let's get it STARTED
Great chapter! Was surprised with the wedding, although I was also confused when u jumped from one wedding to another. I had to re-read it a couple times to make sure I didn't miss a scene change. I still don't get the jump, but it ended wonderfully. -
I hope everything blows up in Peter's face! What a POS! I also hope to hell Tristan isn't dumb enough to ever take him back if the opportunity comes up.
