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What a great story! I'm so happy for Alec and Finn!
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Not necessarily. I could very easily walk around him and be on my way to where I was going without saying a word.
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And I would walk right past Nathan....
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I'll pass on the crow. I'm not a forgiving person. The excuses will never change how I feel about Nathan.
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Oh hell no! We're not giving that little a-hole a free pass because of a "concussion". Regardless, he did what he did and treated Mattie beyond horrible. I still say there's no excuse and no redemption.
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There is absolutely NOTHING Nathan could ever do to redeem himself as far as I'm concerned. They definitely need to send him somewhere. He's treated Matt like shit forever...Matt doesn't owe him anything. I wouldn't even waste my time making amends if I were him.
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This Sasha/Sammy thing could be good or bad. Depends on how Jake fits in to this whole scenario. Disappointed that Sammy chose to ditch the guys that have been his real friends.
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Exactly what has Alec sacrificed??? Finn came out to everyone in highschool,resulting in him having to shower separately from the rest of the team and being treated differently because of his love for Alec. From the sound of it, he continued to be treated differently long after Alec was gone. So Finn is to be punished for having a close, loving family??? Alec did exactly what he was going to do, not ever taking Finn's feelings into consideration. Alec has spent his adult years in a small apartment with a string of one night stands and still playing the victim card. Alec doesn't deserve Finn or his family!
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What exactly has Alec done? He left Finn after he graduated. We know that was his plan all along. Since his return Alec has given Finn mixed messages over and over again. Alec knows damn well how Finn still feels about him, yet chose to spend the night with him then just up and leave again. Finn has his business with his brother and a wonderful family. Not wanting to leave isn't an unreasonable request.
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It's about time Alec gets his head out of his ass, but I agree with Finn that he may be out of chances. Personally, I wouldn't have bothered to let Alec in. Who wants to hear more excuses? I am old and bitter with zero patience, so that plays into how I would react! Lmao!! I hope for both of them Alec has the speech of all speeches ready!
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Chapter 23: Mistakes and Consequences
jaysalmn commented on Demiurge's story chapter in Chapter 23: Mistakes and Consequences
Alec better do something HUGE to redeem himself. The only sympathy I have at this point is for Finn. I don't know how Finn still wants him, because I grew tired of Alec's Debbie Downer attitude a few chapters back.- 29 comments
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Chapter 21 - Burn Too Close
jaysalmn commented on Xfighter1984's story chapter in Chapter 21 - Burn Too Close
I'm sorry, but I wouldn't have been impressed with Jasper trying to stake his claim. After all, who was it that inappropriately let his assistant give him a massage in the workplace?? We know Alexander is trash, but Jasper isn't far behind as far as I'm concerned. -
Chapter 20 - What Am I Seeing
jaysalmn commented on Xfighter1984's story chapter in Chapter 20 - What Am I Seeing
The next chapter can't come quick enough!!! It seems that his "friends" are just as toxic as adults as they were as teens! Xavier was smart to leave them behind. Don't know what possessed him to give any of them another chance. There's plenty of ocean for Alexander to "disappear" in! Lol! -
Chapter 19 - What Hides in the Shadows
jaysalmn commented on Xfighter1984's story chapter in Chapter 19 - What Hides in the Shadows
Maybe it's just me, but letting an assistant give u a massage sounds totally inappropriate. I'm sure HR would have a thing or two to say to Jasper. Not sure he's changed quite as much as we think. -
This was a tuff chapter. I can totally understand Alec wanting to get away from his parents, but my heart breaks for Finn. He sacrificed so much because of his love for Alec, yet Alec seems so ungrateful. Although his parents put him through hell, I like Alec way less after this chapter. At least to me, he came off as selfish and cared more about his own feelings than Finn's. It will be interesting to see how they both ended up in adulthood.
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My gut tells me Kyle was the reason the band directors found out.
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Chapter 13 - Is There Still a Chance
jaysalmn commented on Xfighter1984's story chapter in Chapter 13 - Is There Still a Chance
Sorry, but I don't feel one bit bad for Kyle. He was a d-bag in high school, and has obviously continued to be into adulthood. I don't know what to think about Jasper. He didn't earn any points hanging out with Kyle throughout high school. To be honest, I don't think either has redeemed themselves to the point that I would ever allow them back into my life if I were Xavier. Of course, I also come from a family who can hold a grudge to their grave! Lmao!!! -
What a great surprise! I'm so excited that Seth and Noah are getting married! The proposal was so adorable! I'm pretty sure Seth decking Brock was a Christmas gift everyone here enjoyed! Lol!
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Chapter 8 - Is it Better to Have Loved?
jaysalmn commented on Xfighter1984's story chapter in Chapter 8 - Is it Better to Have Loved?
No surprise Jasper is still hanging with Kyle and Jessica. Trash stick together. None of them deserve forgiveness. Xavier did the right thing by changing to remote learning. Who would want to look at those three every day? -
It's nice to see a new chapter. I always come back every so often to re-read because they're such cute kids!
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Great story! An all too familiar reality, unfortunately. Too bad we don't have a real Evan and Micha to take down all the "Trent Adams" out there. The lies and misinformation out there is shocking. The fact that people not only have it in them to make it up, but attract people gullible enough to believe it just kinda leaves me speechless. It's really sad what the U.S. has become.
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I can only imagine how difficult it was to write. It was a tough read, but you did an extraordinary job. It's sad that things like this happen way too often.
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Chapter 6 - Past, Present, and Future?
jaysalmn commented on Xfighter1984's story chapter in Chapter 6 - Past, Present, and Future?
Seriously, Jasper. You're screwing around with Kyle AND taking Xavier on a date. Don't even try clutching your pearls in shock! You're just as much trash as Kyle is. -
Great chapter! What a way to end it too! What the hell is Nathan's dad doing there?! The next chapter can't come quick enough!!
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That was a great story! I'm glad Seth and Noah got their happy ending, and very glad Noah's father is getting a good dose of karma! Yay for Lilith graduating top of her class!! I'm sad that it's done, but great job!
