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Omg, I think this has to be one of the best stories I have ever read on here! Words can't express how much I love this story! So glad that Bruce got what was coming to him. So glad that Travis and Antonio were able to be together once again, and both families were able to heal. Outstanding!
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Antonio's family has a lot of nerve going to Travis to demand anything! He doesn't owe them shit for what they did to him. If I were him I wouldn't want my son anywhere near a family who is not only so quick to banish someone from their family but also make their life a living hell. None of them deserve forgiveness as far as I'm concerned. I'm all about karma, and I think the tip of the iceberg had barely been hit as far as how much Antonio and his family deserve! Bruce just needs to be wiped away. My heart breaks for Sean being in the situation he's in.
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Great ending! I, too, am enjoying ur stories!
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I have loved the story so far, and loved the concept of friends helping someone through a life changing tradgedy. I am totally turned off by Scott's "friends with benefits" suggestion. David just lost his love of 40 years! He needs love, support, and understanding. He doesn't need an open offer to get laid by some skank who puts out at every "job" he goes to. Its ur story, but the wrong direction for me.
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Chapter 6: A shocking discovery or could it be two?
jaysalmn commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 6: A shocking discovery or could it be two?
I love deserved karma, and this story doesn't disappoint! Hopefully this is only the tip of the iceberg as far as what Bruce and Andrea get! I was very surprised at Antonio's reaction to Sean. Its nice to see that he actually has a heart somewhere in there. -
I feel so bad for Adrian. Happy that he has Paul. I can't think of another reason for his dad to do what he did other than the fact that he's an asshole. I normally don't wish bad on anyone but since they're fictional characters its ok. Lol! I wouldn't feel bad if Adrian's father got a HUGE dose of karma!
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Ok, I'm hooked! Lol! Unfortunately we have an asshole father. Hope he makes his father pay for thinking less of him.
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Don't knock the short chapter. It was drama filled! Loved it!! So, if I understood correct, the female wolf and the pups are from the pack that Sasha is supposed to be with?? The matching howl has me very intrigued. I hope its not the bad guys back for more. Maybe others that are with the female? Can't wait for the next chapter!!!
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So glad to hear from you, and that you're on the road to recovery! Wishing you all the best!!
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So glad to see a new chapter! I've missed these kids! Yeah, Cindy will continue to be a problem. I kno at least Jackson's parents will have Luke's back if he needs them. I think he will have a pretty good support system from the rest of the group too.
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City Boys Visit the Farmers
jaysalmn commented on Tallguyct's story chapter in City Boys Visit the Farmers
Wow!! What a get together! I have a tremendous amount of respect for Mike and Bob. I love that they have the respect for their relationship and for each other to limit their interaction with Bruce and Todd to just touch. Too many have the "anything goes as long as you're there" attitude. I also love how Mike and Maggie are handling everything as far as their own relationship, and how her relationship with Dale fits in. -
Thoughts and prayers going out to Rob and his family. 🙏
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There's a fine line between being compassionate and being taken advantage of, and I think their toes are on it. Cody seems more like a gold digger than an equal. He was very quick to give up everything when he saw what Alan had to offer. As far as the adoption, I think having a legal say in what happens to the boys just in case is WAY more important than whether or not they have a hyphenated name. That's kind of a ridiculous argument. So what if Cody is younger? What would happen if something happened to Cody, and Alan has no legal rights to the boys?? Of course Cody and the boys are happy, Cody is their legal father now and Alan is an ATM.
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I don't get why both of their names weren't put on the adoption papers? Alan goes through all the work to get the adoption to happen, but Cody gets all the glory of being their ONLY adoptive parent?? I loved this story, but seems like Cody is getting a lot more out of this relationship than Alan is getting in return.
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Give It To Me Straight - Chapter 9
jaysalmn commented on Comicality's story chapter in Give It To Me Straight - Chapter 9
I love this story more and more with each new chapter! Jamie is beyond adorable, and his thinking is so entertaining! I think Ricky has it just as bad for Jamie as Jamie has it for Ricky. I think its cute! Question is, how is Silas gonna react when he finds out? We don't kno if he's the jealous type, but we do kno he's obsessed with Ricky too. -
I agree with everyone. I love the story, but I hate when a writer just cuts it off and tells the readers to draw their own conclusions. Its your story, they're your characters, not ours. This same thing happened to another story I just read, and its beyond frustrating.
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Great chapter! I disagree with those who say Colt went about his interaction with Sam the wrong way. If it wasn't for his daughter being with him, I'm sure Sam would have got it much worse, which he would have totally deserved! Don't even think of coming around saying you're my best friend after saying what Sam said. He can f**k right off!
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Great chapter....but now I'm hungry for ribs! Lol!!
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I think he should definitely go meet Ali, although at the same time I'd feel bad for Oliver. He seemed like a decent guy.
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I agree! Paul needs a big dose of karma!
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I'm not surprised by his parent's behavior. Now we know where his brother gets his way of thinking. To treat the boys the way they did is unforgivable. I would have loved to hear the conversation between them and Evie. I can imagine it wasn't at all pleasant. Lol!
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I just started reading this story today, and I love it! I couldn't stop reading til I was caught up! Lol! I've laughed and cried. Pete has such a big heart, as does Jimmy. I absolutely love Bobby and Butch. Bobby playing matchmaker for Pete and Jimmy was the greatest! I like Pete's family members that we've met so far. Paul sounds like a total ass, and I feel sorry for his son. Pete's parents sound like a real piece of work too. Wonder if they'll have enough guts to show their faces.
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Interesting start. I think it would make me physically ill to kno I just fucked someone I hate. Can't wait to see where u take the story, why James hates Alistair, and if Alistair knew who James was.
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U did fine with the fight scene. No need to get graphic. Lol! I feel so bad that Tris got attacked and injured. Saving the wolf and her pup shows his character. Hopefully Sasha will realize that....or maybe it will be him that hears the female's distress howls.
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I just started this story yesterday and already love it! Its hot that Tris has never been attracted to a guy before Sasha. I'm very entertained by Sasha's defiance. I, too, can be very stubborn so I can totally identify with Sasha's behavior. I'm sorry to say that I would have probably had the same reaction as he did, with the exception of shooting a load in Tris' bed. Lol! Can't wait to read more!
