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Great chapter!! I'm glad Dylan got to unload on Liam. Liam deserved worse, and probably would have gotten it if it hadn't been in the middle of the night. It made me feel so sad when Dylan described what Liam had done to him. What makes him think he deserves any kind of forgiveness?? WTF is with these clueless and entitled assholes?? Between Liam "missing him" and Sebastian asking him out in a date? You have no idea how much I hate these people.
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Great chapter! I'm liking Jake a lot! I think he's perfect for Dylan. So, last chapter u didn't seem too keen on my idea of Dylan rigging Liam's car with explosives. Lol! How about Jake asking Liam to stand behind the Mercedes to make sure the reverse lights work properly???
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Oh, I can't wait!!! 😃
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It will be interesting to see what kind of excuses Peter is going to make up for what he did to Tristan. Personally, there isn't an excuse that would be forgiveable. I would have told Peter waiting at the hotel was a waste of time, and walked away.
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I hope to hell this isn't a story where the good guy forgives and ends up in a relationship with the asshole that cut him off as a friend and beat the hell out of him repeatedly! He should have pressed charges on him! Maybe Dylan is good with rigging a shiny Camaro with explosives??? 😇
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Great start. Definitely will be interesting to see how this plays out. First impressions are I like Dylan. I feel bad for him because of how he was treated. Hope the guy in the Mercedes isn't someone bad for him. Liam is a major d-bag. Don't like him at all. He was an asshole to his so-called best friend, and doesn't deserve Dylan's friendship or anything else from him.
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Footloose? Let's get it STARTED
jaysalmn commented on FSELL's story chapter in Footloose? Let's get it STARTED
Great chapter! Was surprised with the wedding, although I was also confused when u jumped from one wedding to another. I had to re-read it a couple times to make sure I didn't miss a scene change. I still don't get the jump, but it ended wonderfully. -
I hope everything blows up in Peter's face! What a POS! I also hope to hell Tristan isn't dumb enough to ever take him back if the opportunity comes up.
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Omg, I think this has to be one of the best stories I have ever read on here! Words can't express how much I love this story! So glad that Bruce got what was coming to him. So glad that Travis and Antonio were able to be together once again, and both families were able to heal. Outstanding!
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Antonio's family has a lot of nerve going to Travis to demand anything! He doesn't owe them shit for what they did to him. If I were him I wouldn't want my son anywhere near a family who is not only so quick to banish someone from their family but also make their life a living hell. None of them deserve forgiveness as far as I'm concerned. I'm all about karma, and I think the tip of the iceberg had barely been hit as far as how much Antonio and his family deserve! Bruce just needs to be wiped away. My heart breaks for Sean being in the situation he's in.
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Great ending! I, too, am enjoying ur stories!
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I have loved the story so far, and loved the concept of friends helping someone through a life changing tradgedy. I am totally turned off by Scott's "friends with benefits" suggestion. David just lost his love of 40 years! He needs love, support, and understanding. He doesn't need an open offer to get laid by some skank who puts out at every "job" he goes to. Its ur story, but the wrong direction for me.
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Chapter 6: A shocking discovery or could it be two?
jaysalmn commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 6: A shocking discovery or could it be two?
I love deserved karma, and this story doesn't disappoint! Hopefully this is only the tip of the iceberg as far as what Bruce and Andrea get! I was very surprised at Antonio's reaction to Sean. Its nice to see that he actually has a heart somewhere in there. -
I feel so bad for Adrian. Happy that he has Paul. I can't think of another reason for his dad to do what he did other than the fact that he's an asshole. I normally don't wish bad on anyone but since they're fictional characters its ok. Lol! I wouldn't feel bad if Adrian's father got a HUGE dose of karma!
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Ok, I'm hooked! Lol! Unfortunately we have an asshole father. Hope he makes his father pay for thinking less of him.
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Don't knock the short chapter. It was drama filled! Loved it!! So, if I understood correct, the female wolf and the pups are from the pack that Sasha is supposed to be with?? The matching howl has me very intrigued. I hope its not the bad guys back for more. Maybe others that are with the female? Can't wait for the next chapter!!!
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So glad to hear from you, and that you're on the road to recovery! Wishing you all the best!!
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So glad to see a new chapter! I've missed these kids! Yeah, Cindy will continue to be a problem. I kno at least Jackson's parents will have Luke's back if he needs them. I think he will have a pretty good support system from the rest of the group too.
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City Boys Visit the Farmers
jaysalmn commented on Tallguyct's story chapter in City Boys Visit the Farmers
Wow!! What a get together! I have a tremendous amount of respect for Mike and Bob. I love that they have the respect for their relationship and for each other to limit their interaction with Bruce and Todd to just touch. Too many have the "anything goes as long as you're there" attitude. I also love how Mike and Maggie are handling everything as far as their own relationship, and how her relationship with Dale fits in. -
Thoughts and prayers going out to Rob and his family. 🙏
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There's a fine line between being compassionate and being taken advantage of, and I think their toes are on it. Cody seems more like a gold digger than an equal. He was very quick to give up everything when he saw what Alan had to offer. As far as the adoption, I think having a legal say in what happens to the boys just in case is WAY more important than whether or not they have a hyphenated name. That's kind of a ridiculous argument. So what if Cody is younger? What would happen if something happened to Cody, and Alan has no legal rights to the boys?? Of course Cody and the boys are happy, Cody is their legal father now and Alan is an ATM.
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I don't get why both of their names weren't put on the adoption papers? Alan goes through all the work to get the adoption to happen, but Cody gets all the glory of being their ONLY adoptive parent?? I loved this story, but seems like Cody is getting a lot more out of this relationship than Alan is getting in return.
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Give It To Me Straight - Chapter 9
jaysalmn commented on Comicality's story chapter in Give It To Me Straight - Chapter 9
I love this story more and more with each new chapter! Jamie is beyond adorable, and his thinking is so entertaining! I think Ricky has it just as bad for Jamie as Jamie has it for Ricky. I think its cute! Question is, how is Silas gonna react when he finds out? We don't kno if he's the jealous type, but we do kno he's obsessed with Ricky too. -
I agree with everyone. I love the story, but I hate when a writer just cuts it off and tells the readers to draw their own conclusions. Its your story, they're your characters, not ours. This same thing happened to another story I just read, and its beyond frustrating.
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Great chapter! I disagree with those who say Colt went about his interaction with Sam the wrong way. If it wasn't for his daughter being with him, I'm sure Sam would have got it much worse, which he would have totally deserved! Don't even think of coming around saying you're my best friend after saying what Sam said. He can f**k right off!
