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Seriously, Nathan can go to hell! If it would have been him at the door, I hope Jason would have slammed it in his face! I don't care what issues he's going through, treating someone he obviously cares for like shit shows me he isn't as good of a person as he makes everyone think. Also makes me think the issues with his ex and not being able to see his child aren't so far fetched. Aiden apologized and showed he's interested. He's looking like a much better option then the, now dead to me, Nathan.
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I agree! 24 chapters since Nathan showed up, and very little has changed. I, too, like the story and characters. I don't mind a little build up to the climax, but this story needs to speed up big time.
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Your Words are Strong, My Fortress Weak
jaysalmn commented on James Matthews's story chapter in Your Words are Strong, My Fortress Weak
I'm glad Alan didn't hold back with Craig. I wouldn't want to talk to them either if I were Cody. Jake was thinking the same thing about himself as I was at the end of the chapter! -
I agree that last line was so fitting. I wouldn't blame Jake at all for being angry. Cody caused him a lot of pain before he left. He's getting on with his life, has a new boyfriend, and all of a sudden Cody shows up again? I think, though, Cody may be a good match for Luke, maybe even Callum. Will be interesting to see how this all plays out, especially between Jake, Cody, and Ethen. Oh, and may Hazel get what's coming to her! If there's one thing I can't stand, it's people who use the bible to justify their hate. Her husband, while not quite as bad, is spineless for not standing up to her. How can throwing your own child out on the street be the right choice for anyone??
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Just when I thought we were finally making some headway with Jason coming clean about his feelings, Nathan has to go throw a damn wrench in it! Lol! 41 chapters with little changing is pretty frustrating.
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A great, yet sad chapter. To be honest, in the beginning I couldn't stand Jackson or his friends. I love the way they have evolved and matured. I really worry about Luke. With a mother like Cindy, so many turn to hurting themselves. I can't get over how hippocratic Cindy is, telling Jackson that he's full of himself, while she is judging him being all...full of herself! Adults don't get a free pass. I agree that Luke will most likely never come back once he leaves for college. I wish Henry would grow a spine and stand up for himself and Luke. Their house must be the most toxic environment ever!
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I'm so happy Marco is getting a fresh start. That's just what he needs. I think it's sweet that he let his mom pick his apt.
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I agree! I can see it falling out at the worst possible time.
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Loved the chapter!! Can't wait to see how Welker and the others react to the prank! I agree that it is an epic one. The only problem I saw with the chapter is the two times you described Jack opening the back door to put his dress clothes in his car...Mustangs are a 2 door.
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I love the idea of another hotel in the mountains! Oh, and Diane needs a BIG raise! Lol!
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A lot of questions with no answers as far as Nathan. I hope we get some answers soon, because my interest is waning.
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I love Harry and Gus! They're adorable together! I also think, though, Dan and James stole the show! Lol!
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They're both driving me nuts!! This beating around the bush is painfully frustrating. I'm about to give up on both of them.
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Great chapter! I've been missing these two! I feel so bad for Jackson not being able to figure out how to say what he feels he needs to, and being afraid of Luke's response. I feel bad for Luke because of, well....Cindy. Lol!
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If I didn't hate Eloise before, I sure do now! Just turn a blind eye to what Ford is doing to keep what you have?? I hate people that know their spouse is cheating, and just let it go to keep up appearances! He doesn't truly have Ford. Cheating is the ultimate betrayal. Ford's cheating proves he has no respect or genuine love for Patrick. Money doesn't buy class, and Ford is trash.
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What I wanna know is where is TMZ?? A millionaire production company owner cheating on his husband with multiple men?? They live for that! Lol!
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Yeah, I wouldn't have thought of poisoning him, but I do love Patrick's enthusiasm. I would have leaned more towards laxatives. Lol! Maybe find a way to mess with his finances. Perhaps a little sugar and molasses in the gas tank, draining the oil, a little used cat litter in the smoothie. Oh I could go on, but you get it. I can't wait to see what else Patrick does to Ford! Asshat deserves it!
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Your description of the story sounds very ominous, and I'm loving it!! Nothing I enjoy more than revenge and karma directed towards someone that deserves every bit of it, and Ford definitely does!
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Interesting cliffie! I had thought that maybe Kim, Nikki, or both were gonna ambush them when they were transferring Greene and kill him. The next chapter can't come quick enough!!
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That was such a sweet chapter! I'm so excited for Trey and Dallas! I'm glad that Trey had the courage to tell Dallas in person, instead of in a note. Now the question is, will Trey have the courage to be open about going out with him?
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Happy to see a new chapter! Great read. TJ is a better person than I am, because NO WAY IN HELL would I care about someone who was out to deliberately hurt me, much less help him. Choices have consequences, and I can't feel bad for someone who chose to do hard drugs and unfortunately got himself into a bad situation.
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Great chapter! Love the story so far. So happy that Ethan and Wayne are together, and have friends now. I hope Jackson and Reynolds get hit with a huge dose of karma, pun intended!
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I've loved this story up til now, but at this point I'm tired of reading about Russia.
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I understand the love Brian has for Davey, but the possibility of putting the life of someone you supposedly love in a life or death situation for "adventure" would be a deal breaker for me. Sure, they trust each other, but how trustworthy are all the other players. At the time, our government looked at homosexuals as untrustworthy. Who's to say they're not looking at Davey and Brian as expendable??
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Wow! What a bombshell!! A very wicked twist to the story! Can't wait to see where the story goes next!
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