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As much as Dawson wants to be there for Brent, not sure that I agree with his decision. I don't think I could uproot my whole life for someone that told me not to. They never even talked about where they were as far as relationship, friendship or other. In fact, sounds like not much was said at all considering all of the info Dawson had didn't even come from Brent. I wouldn't be one bit surprised if Dawson came back. In other news...Carter is available!!
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I wish I could have done a thumbs up AND a laughing emoji because that last bit is hilarious....and I agree!
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Love the chapter, and that u didn't change how it was written. I agree Troy stomping off would have been too out of character for him. I really don't think that would be the right reaction in this situation period. Troy has too big of a heart to react like that, and Grant didn't keep the journal away from him for any bad reasons. The fact that he not only kept the journal, but returned it to him with John's note still in the back shows how much Grant cares for him.
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Hank deserved every bit of what Chase gave him, and more!! That asshole should be ashamed to be sitting with Chase's father after the way he treated him! Does Charles know the extent of how Chase was treated? He has a lot of nerve inviting him over too! If I were Chase, during that walk I'd be looking for another place to live. That ring seemed to me like Charles was guilting Chase into trying again with Hank, which is kind of a shit move if u ask me! I agree with Chase to give the ring to Cindy! Also, Charles needs to take out the trash...I mean ask Hank to leave. I would have been beyond angry if I were Chase to be ambushed by Charles and Hank!
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Good chapter! Maybe Hank is just bummed because he caught something from his little tryst with Kevin and has to be on antibiotics for the next couple weeks! All kidding aside, I think if Chase told Charles exactly how Hank had treated him and the things he said to him, Charles wouldn't be telling him to keep trying. Seriously, I wouldn't waste my pee on Hank if he were on fire! I sure as hell wouldn't forgive him and get back together with him! I like Charles, but he's dead wrong on this one.
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Great chapter! I had forgotten about Grant's mother. Definitely a piece of work! Lol! I think there needs to be another round of Truth Or Dare for Brian and Aaron's sake. Sounds like they may have some unfinished business
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I'm so proud of Alex! I'm glad that he realized that he needed help and went to a counselor. He has matured so much since the first chapter! It also really helps that he has his parents and Jeremy to support him. A nice, happy chapter to come back with!
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Yes, he really is that bad! If by that night he didn't know Chase isn't the cheating type, then he really never knew Chase at all. Knowing Chase's mental state, instead of being heartbroken he should have wanted to find out what's really going on with him. Instead, all he's done is try to stomp him down more. If Chase hadn't been getting help, I'm afraid to think of what Hank's treatment of him would have done to him, or what it would have made him do to himself.
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Honestly, I don't want to see Chase get back with Hank AT ALL! Bottom line is Hank has treated Chase beyond horrible. Any kind of relationship with Hank at this point would be toxic to Chase's well being. He seems to be the type that would constantly worry that he's doing something that would cause Hank to break up with him again, and Hank is DEFINITELY the type that would throw it in his face every chance he gets. I think a happy ending doesn't have to be and shouldn't be Hank and Chase getting back together. The ending I'd love to see is Chase and Dawson ending up together and dumbass Hank figuring things out a little too late. He deserves a huge dose of karma after how he's treated Chase.
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Hahaha!! I love it!
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Great chapter! Nice to have a break from asshole Hank and his backstabbing boyfriend Kevin. Maybe they got mauled by bears at the cottage!! Lol! It was great to see Chase and Cindy reconnect with their dad. It was something they all needed. Perhaps Marshall could be Chase's happily ever after? He's back in town, living with Cindy but they aren't together, and Chase already likes him. The fact that Cindy didn't go into detail makes me think maybe there's more to his story.
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Reading the comments on this story so far have been so entertaining! Lol
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This is, of course, after kidnapping Rex and taking him to a carnival!
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OMG, I WANT HANK TO GO AWAY SOOOO BAD!!!! He and Kevin can walk into the sunset, hand in hand, and have a miserable life questioning every single thing the other does to the point that even breathing has an ulterior motive!! Chase deserves so much better. I hope this gives Chase what he needs to stop trying, and to tell Hank to go to hell if he decides he made a mistake. As far as I'm concerned, Hank is beyond forgiveness.
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Yeah Hank, you can definitely go fuck yourself! Or go fuck "Kev" for that matter! Obviously Kevin isn't being any help with how Hank is dealing with Chase, probably filling his head with bullshit that has more to do with his own situation than Hank and Chase's! Chase needs to stop wasting his time. I'd cut ties with him, the dog, everything. Hank doesn't deserve to have any part in Chase's life. I hope to hell that this puts to rest any thoughts Chase has about wanting to get back with Hank. Again, who the hell would want Hank back after the way he's treated Chase?!
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I didn't think it was possible, but Hank is getting more unlikable with every chapter. Seriously, why the hell does Chase still even want him after the way he's treated him?? I'd tell Hank to go f*** himself if I were Chase! I felt bad for Hank the first couple of chapters, but it seems its not even about him being hurt anymore. He's just an asshole! I would love for Chase to leave Hank in the dust and move on....maybe with Dawson???
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I'm just disappointed that we didn't get to see Hartley get what he deserves. Otherwise, another great story!
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U kno, at the beginning of the story I totally had Hank's back and thought Chase was an asshole. Boy, what a chapter can do to change that!! Hank and Kevin wouldn't have looked so "ashen" if they didn't have anything to hide or be guilty of. I am proud of Chase for keeping his cool when he saw them together. I hope Hank feels the guilt to the pit of his soul! I think its so wrong of Hank to make Chase pay for what his mother did, then go out and bang one of their mutual friends. Whether Hank says they did or not, their reaction to seeing Chase screams that they did! I'm glad that Chase's father got back to him and let him kno he is doing ok. That it was his mother's wish that his dad take the trip makes things better also. Can't wait to see what happens next!!
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Great chapter! Felt so bad for Tyler being attacked. Glad that Aiden finally stood up for himself and also glad that douche nozzle Hartley got a taste of his own medicine. That sociopath needs to get taken down once and for all! Looking forward to see how the story gets wrapped up!
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I'm so excited to see your story here! I've read the story before, and absolutely loved it! Looking forward to reading it again!
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Chapter 4 Mac and Cheese
jaysalmn commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 4 Mac and Cheese
Omg, I grew up eating goulash! Born and raised in the Minneapolis suburbs, but my family has a farm near Brainerd. Don't forget the many different pasta salads and assorted bars! Lol!! -
What a disappointment it would be if Hartley got his way! Of course, death on his first day as principal would be acceptable. Yes, there is a theme as to what I think should happen to Hartley! Lol!!
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I thought about searching there, too. Have the next couple of days off. Maybe have to go back and read that one. Lol
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I was trying to remember what happened with Hartley too. I even went back and read the last chapters of WAR when Billy and Brett graduated, but there was never anything said about Hartley getting the principal job. I'm hoping his game blows up in his face, because he would totally deserve it.
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I hope karma hits Hartley....like a bus!!!
