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I hope karma hits Hartley....like a bus!!!
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Chapter 61- "Tell-Tale Cravings"
jaysalmn commented on Comicality's story chapter in Chapter 61- "Tell-Tale Cravings"
Great chapter! Happy that Ryan's father finally came around. Now to get Randy to have the talk with his mother. Trust me Randy, she already knows! Mothers always know! Lol! Randy is stressing over nothing. -
Give It To Me Straight - Chapter 4
jaysalmn commented on Comicality's story chapter in Give It To Me Straight - Chapter 4
Loved the chapter!! Looks to me that Jamie has a better shot with Ricky than he thinks. Jamie's thoughts were so entertaining to read. He and Silas are a couple of my favorite characters. Looking forward to reading more. -
Great chapter! I absolutely love Ariel! He and Tyler are so cute together. Also great that he has his grams full support. The mall incident was typical Ariel, but who could really be mad at such a sweet kid?
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Wow! That was a way bigger dose of karma than I was expecting! I didn't feel bad for Jack AT ALL! I have to agree with @Thorn Wilde that the only one I truly felt really bad for was Will. The poor kid couldn't even look at anything besides the floor. I, too, would love an epilogue on this one!! 😁
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Wow! Jack is a total POS!! I wouldn't spit on him if he were on fire if I were Damon!
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Enjoyed the story. Love Fran. Felt so bad for Malcolm. Still think Aaron is an asshole.
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Too much meddling in someone's relationship being bad, I totally agree. HOWEVER, Jake didn't meddle in their relationship at all. What this whole situation tells me is that Jake has more loyalty to Alex than he does to Christy. I would absolutely tell a best friend if I saw their boyfriend out with another girl, and I hope they would do the same if they saw my boyfriend with another guy! I trust my friends to kno they would never lie to me, as I'm positive Christy knows too. So now Jake is gonna play the good friend, comforting her while all the time knowing that Alex was a cheat. I keep reading this story, thinking Jake is gonna redeem himself at some point but losing hope fast!
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I can't believe Jake didn't tell Christy! Not much of a friend if u ask me! I hope Christy finds out that Jake knew about Danetta! Would serve him right! As far as Alex, not surprised.
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I hope whatever he is plotting is against Alex! I never would have given him 2 days! I would have been on the phone while he was standing there! Shooting the messenger is bs. Christy knows Jake wouldn't lie to her! Just a copout!
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Disappointing that their first though on their vacation is to have a three way. I agree with @tesao that it most likely opened up pandora's box. I guess I expected better from them. I don't share my partner with ANYBODY!
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Unless the condom broke, or she's the Virgin Mary, its safe to assume they had unprotected sex. I agree with the teachings. My nephew was given the sex talk, given condoms, and STILL ended up being a father at 17! All of the education u can give doesn't guarantee it will sink in. I also agree with @droughtquake that Link isn't mature enough to be responsible for a baby.
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Pushed??!! A simple NO would have sufficed! Then he made the conscious decision to not only keep dating her, but taking it to a sexual level all while knowing she tried committing suicide that last time a guy broke her heart. That guy just left. Jake is out right lying to her and using her! Jake is a horrible person!
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I'm with u on that!
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Jake deserves all the guilt that can be put on him! He knew Amber's past with suicide, and still made the conscious decision to use her anyway. I don't kno why Jake OR Christy would want a cheating loser like Alex. People are so frustrating!! Lol! RIP AMBER
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Well, that was the wrong way for Amber to find out! Lol! Jake was horrible for using her the way he did. Amber may be a forgiving person, although I wouldn't be if I were her. She may spread it around school. Can't wait to find out! He should have listened to Christy and told Amber right away. If Amber is looking for payback, can't say that I would feel bad for Jake.
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Give It To Me Straight - Chapter 3
jaysalmn commented on Comicality's story chapter in Give It To Me Straight - Chapter 3
I'm so excited for Jamie! Silas' text messages were hilarious! -
Yeah, didn't care for Jake in this chapter. He's messing up big time! First, I can't believe he's taking Alex's side! I would have kneed Jake in the balls if I were Christy! Alex deserves to be miserable because he's a d-bag. Second, having sex with Amber was a HUGE mistake, especially after knowing what he knows about the other guy she fell in love with and how she reacted when he left. My respect for Jake is starting to nosedive.
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Wow! A lot happening in this chapter. Well, definitely not hoping that Jake gets a chance with Alex anymore. Poor Christy. Alex sounds like a total asshole! I wouldn't give him the time of day if his life depended on it! I sure hope Jake doesn't go any further with Amber than he already has. That would be a definite recipe for disaster. I think Amber is a nice girl, and it would be wrong for Jake to lead her on.
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I'm so happy that Jake had it in him to fight back! He should have never had to suffer with the abuse from his parents for as long as he had. I knew Christy's parents wouldn't have a problem with him staying. I'm so excited to see this new, hopefully more positive chapter of his life.
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Loved this chapter! Harriet and Vicky as a team are a riot...and just the support that Richie needs. Figures the only reason Nicholas would call is to talk about himself. So give me a hint about that karm chapter. Does Nicholas get hit by a bus? A train?? A semi??? Lol!!
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Wow! Didn't see that coming. Just when u think Nicholas couldn't be any worse of a person! I think u had better add Stu in to that karma chapter I hinted about! Have to say Richie got his karma for bailing on Harriet. Only good thing that came out of this chapter is his dad accepting his being gay.
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Jeremy - The Truth Is Out Here, pt.2
jaysalmn commented on ObicanDecko's story chapter in Jeremy - The Truth Is Out Here, pt.2
Alex's relationship with Jeremy is none of Brandon's business. He had no right to go talk to Jeremy about anything. -
Vicky and Harriet are by far my favorites from the story! "homosexual face" had me literally laughing out loud! Proud of Vicky hitting Darren, although I wish it had been Nicholas instead! Lol!
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Considering what an a-hole Nicholas is, no surprise how he treated Richie. The way Richie treated Stu and distanced himself from the rest of the protest group had me feeling less bad for him. I sure hope you have a damn good karma chapter in mind for Nicholas. He more than deserves it!
