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Sweetlion

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  1. I understand where you are coming from, but with his home life and having only Alex, with his own teenager problems and anxieties, as support, I think it could be "just" behavioral and separation anxiety.
  2. Finally medically free. I hope Nathan lives up to be the amazing kid I think he is and don't break with Robbie. And Robbie should start living truthfully, everyone will wonder if he is gay, so he might just come out. I am afraid that after the Alex business, if he denies Nathan that it will be to much to forgive. Wishing all the luck to Alex and Luke, if them actually start having a family maybe they will not need to be so rough all the time
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    Chapter 25

    Loved it. So happy that Ryder could trust Tyler with his body. Hope Tyler can do the same. With their initial baggage and confidence problems, with is beautiful that they have grown so much
  4. "Meh, it wasn’t bad, but David Suchet is the only Poirot for me.” Nice chapter... Now the next one... Like... Now!
  5. I know and I like that. There is a very cool mix of fiction and reality. I told you, when I went to Tombs in Washington I was like "wow, so cool, CJ comes here"
  6. Thank you Carlos, great chapter. The speed of this story is faster than the previous, but it doesn't feel rushed. Love how CJ and Owen are adapting to each other
  7. Cool, this is a new part right, I don't remember reading it before... Yeah it is good for them to be apart for a bit to grow, but the whole university experience of several years will be hard. They need to use all those national holidays for long weekends visiting each other
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    Whole New Life

    Nice start, with slow recovery in a safe place, after the darkness of the first chapter. Luke is sweet. Daniel will never forget, but hope he finds a way to live a somewhat normal life.
  9. yeah, should I read first your old stories? Don´t remember the characters so don´t know if I read it. I am confused with how Clay appeared and their relationship crumbled.. But nice chapter, so many mysteries... is Eddie a good guy after all?
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    New Tomorrows

    Cool, the Next step of the boys' life. Interesting start. Hope Blu don't find himself with a serious problem in his ankle
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    Come Clean

    No I can understand him, and even wish him good luck and all the best for the future, but he is responsible for his past. At least he started coming clean, although to the wrong one . Can't wait for next chapter
  12. I agree with you, If the rules were exactly the same, it would make the post count and the reputation redundant. Having two different metrics "rewards" diferent things, one more comment based other from engaging the site and keeping the community alive.
  13. I might come back to actually share my opinion of the monarchy, specially the British one. But if I might just add this piece of information, from someone that comes form a semi-presidentialist country but where the president doesn't have governing power (just the "atomic bomb" ones, dissolve and call Parliament elections; declare "war and peace" as the commander-in-chief" of Armed forces), in economic terms, some of these presidential regimes spend more money/per capita than the British monarchy (not the same absolute value, but considering that for instance Portugal has around 10 million people, and the Queen is the head of state to hundreds of millions)...
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    The Bond

    Hi, are you going to continue this story? it was very good
  15. I always thought that pure Siamese cats they look a bit mean. Athough I think my common european cat has both Siamese and a long hair, probably Angora, heritage in it, and the mix is awesome. But pure Angora are Royal
  16. I forgot to actually comment They were already and obviously a stable couple, but it was lovely to see them actually move to the new house, their home, and see piece by piece their future coming together. You made getting a new bedroom furniture or and antique table something to be cherished (by the way love the idea of getting good, antique style, stuff, even if they need to buy few things from time to time, it matches the old stone house spirit). Their neighbor is a lovely lady, I think she will be someone they will admire for the love she has for her dead husband. I agree with @ColumbusGuy on cat , but a beautiful white Angora would be better! You know... royal... dragon-like
  17. Love it, love it, love it! Thank you Gary
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    The Master Plan

    Trick is so much of a good guy that it is bad for him. In this case he should actually have told Cody everything he went through. Even if he "hurt him and make him feel miserable", he was not getting even with Cody, as he wouldn't be attacking Cody with anything personal, but tell him his own problems... Of course Cody would be devastated with the effect of his actions, but maybe then he would man up and tell Trick everything from the moment he hears about the crush, how he stopped bullying but was too lost to stop his friends, up to the moment he realised he is a "‘fucking faggot’" as well. Great chapter @ObicanDecko
  19. It might be a matter of personal preference, but as a non-native speaker I agree with @droughtquake that "broken" or "spoken" English is ok in dialogs, but I disliked it when it is present in the third party narrator, I actually find it distracting and annoys me. I like intimate and sex scenes in a story, it might build the characters and make us connect to their relationship. But like spices sex scenes shouldn't be overused, in my opinion. I read stories where I felt the author forced a sex scene in almost every chapter, and no, it didn't add anything to the story, so mid story I as skipping some parts thinking "yeah I know how big it is, how you like to do X or Y, boring..." I might read stories with stereotypes if they are good, but I admit that it gets tiring and they will never be a favorite story. I am particularly sensitive to gay-related stereotypes in gay themed stories, since "mainstream" are already full of it concerning lgbt people. Like all the young/small/nerd/asian (chose one or more) are emotionally fragile bottoms in need of saving by the older/muscle/jock/white rich top. PS: after arguing for proper english, I apologise if there are some spelling mistakes
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    Chapter 18 - Adam

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    Chapter 18 - Adam

    No need to thanks, I like the Wills story and spin-offs, and I think Ian's os my favorite so far
  22. I tried the Old Republic and it was very good. The thing is although RPG is my favorite game type, with work I end up not being a regular player, so it annoys me paying any subscription game. I do play Guild Wars 2, you buy the game, but them there is no subscription.
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    Chapter 18 - Adam

    Yes and No... I agree with you that money is the way to her, but she would squeeze them dry and more, probably delaying signing just so she could have amoney fontain... However if she doesn´t work and spend all the money she gets, she probably have no savings... I think some work to have Ian´s parents on their side is in order. If they are her wallet, they control her
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    The Divison

    Yeah, I agree, Blake had a stupid moment, but he has been a decent guy so far. Moreover when he sobers up I think he will chose to be wherever Liz is
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    The Divison

    Wow this chapter took a lot..... But it was worthy!! So good, congratulations
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