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Making Kiorl work hard sounds good ! Lahja, go make him suffer ! Go Gurl ! Am I being judgemental ? Sure as hell I am ! Am I being unfair ? Hell no ! I detest WHAT Kiorl does totally (seducing poor people and then killing them and plundering their souls) AND I dislike his arrogant attitude (I'm a major demon second only to ... etc). Make him suffer ! Yeah ! Whoops, have I been ranting ?

I knew something would come up with the extra Thorne ! :scream:

That warning should have been : Proceed with extreme caution if you don't want your mind to be blown away by an explosion of sexual and emotional release ! True colours indeed ! Well Kellar will always be a healer, even in throes of passionate sex he's so concerned with Tobyn's well being that he has to apply some energy to mitigate the pain ... he's a sly one, Kellar ! I hope that Tobyn will still get to see the colours whenever he's extremely excited (or in a less ideal situation under extreme duress) and this is not a one off gift from the Earth Mother ... Bravo Gary !

I "third" JayT's thoughts ... Oh, goody ! A longererer chapter coming ! Yay ! Now that Miss Sybil is worried about Keller and Tobyn's safety, should we be worried too ? I'll get my pitchfork ready and it MAY NOT just be used on Reznik ...

Another Thorne ??!!

Happy belated birthday wishes, Gary ! Many happy returns !

What the f--k happened there ? Did Jian try to coerce Emmett into having sex with him ? Emmett is so skittish for a big polar bear, for crying out loud ! Why is he so afraid to take a chance when the odds are so in favour of these two ? W T F ... ?!

:screaming: The horrors of what men could inflict on their fellow men make one almost wanting to become a demon / vampire, who, in some cases anyway, are kinder, more loving, loyal, even have a sense of justice ... I re-read the first two chapters of Sparkle to refresh my memory and I wonder if Oliver's friend should be George instead of John whose name I would confuse with Adam's Uncle John, a monster of a man, despicable, cruel ... (I'll stop here before I use every vile word to describe him) ... George was the one who carried Adam back to his Aunt and That S.O.B. so logically he would wish to meet him on the other side of Death ... (just in my humble opinion ...) Thank you, cannot wait for the final instalment of this tale (and yet dreading it as we never know how it's going to end ...)

Something warm and touching and mushy like this tale goes a long way to brighten up my day ... Damn, I'm letting you all (authors) getting to me, my emotions are all over the place, so I'd advise others not to open the doors to this calendar one after the other in quick succession ... Thank you all ! I think this is written by Cole but out of the three of you I've only read his stories so far. I do apologise and will remedy this oversight as soon as possible !

"Regrets, I've had a few" ... (actually I have many), but this is a song that my uncle almost always sings at his birthday party ... (we like our karaoke over here) ... Now it becomes a song he used to sing as he passed away a week ago. Christmas for us is a time for family gathering without a lot of religious overtones (a gathering that my cousin, my Uncle's daughter would host) but this Christmas it wouldn't be the same ... Thank you for such a poignant story that speaks to each of us in a different way !

Thank you ! Thank you for this story ... But we still don't have the the privilege to find out how the actual proposal unfolded ... yet, I hope More please ...

I have read this story many times, and each time I reach the end I'm either in tears or close to them ... Life is so unfair to Christopher and yet he's managed to redeem James so that he could feel love for his fellow man again ... just a simple act of kindness ... Thank you Ron

Just when I thought it is safe to cavort with demons again ...

I find this whole episode exceedingly depressing, even the sex scenes fill me with melancholy ... Maybe it's due to the fact that I'm the same age as Gordon and I don't even have children ? Two lonely souls that can share intimacy in bed but are not compatible enough to become friends ? I wished Harry had kicked Gordon out in the first place ... To me this is so sad ...

I second JeffreyL's motion ! Still waiting for the next chapter ! Please !

NO ! Emmett isn't like that at all, not that monster in his dream ! He's a gentle polar bear, well, I mean when he's not hunting for food ... no, no, no ... Good for you, Jian ! So brave ! Go away you stupid moose ! Go Tiger ! Go !

Great premise ! Hopefully you'll expand it, but please, please, please give us a happy ending, or at least leave the two with a more promising future ... Pretty please ...

Great story ! I'm a hard core romantic, so a happy ending is essential for me ! Thank you !

The Powers That Be / Senior Management are playing a dangerous game, if they're indeed playing with these two ... They'll face more than pitchforks and torches from me if all of this go south ...

The spirit cannot be appeased without revenge ... well maybe by helping his nephew lead a happy and fruitful life to spite his other relatives ... then he'll be released from his limbo state ? Revenge !!!

Bought it ? ... NO ! It doesn't sound good for Kiorl and Lahja at the end of this chapter ... not good at all ...

Can't wait for the concluding chapter ! Yay ! P.s. thank you for a great story !

May I offer a more charitable view of Zane's mother's behaviour, at least when she agreed to his emancipation ? Maybe she feels that both of them were unhappy living under the same roof so that it would be better to set him "free". I'd hate to think Zane would have no relationship with his family further down the road ... He was trying to build bridges to connect with his father before the latter's suicide, so obviously he cared for his family. I would've so easily screamed and shouted at Stan for hurting his family further by killing himself; BUT that would be as bad as blaming patients with mental illnesses for their own predicament ... There is real stigma to being mentally ill (over here) even people suffering from depression are told to buck up and get over it (I've seen it happening) ... Sometimes when medication isn't working, it will be trying times for the patient and those people around ... empathy and compassion are sometimes sorely lacking ... Whoops Anyways, Cynus, thank you so much for this sweet (with ever so slight bitter aftertaste) ending to this story. I wish every happiness and good fortune to Clint and Zane !

Happy Thanksgiving, Carlos ! Maybe I should think of becoming a vegetarian ... not that we eat turkey in this part of the world, we have chicken, duck, goose, pigeon ... etc etc ... Whoops ...

One always remember the first time, and now Harry will remember it fondly. And yes, he should feel slightly "sheepish" (is this right sentiment?) for rejecting Nick but went out of his way to hook up with Kurt. Yes, IF you remember your first time fondly, then the "what ifs" would drive you to look for him, even if it is really a very slim chance that he would be "the one" ... I really hope that Harry wouldn't have to go through 17 guys before he meets someone to fall in love with, but this is your story and I'll just have to wait and see ... (keeping my fingers tightly crossed) Thank you, Rich !