Ivor Slipper
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Thanks, Chris. I'd never intended to write a sequel until I was 'prompted' to do so with the picture being unexpectedly used as a Challenge. I very much doubt there will be a chapter 3 though.
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Thank you, Geron. The first part was very bleak.
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Thank you @flesco. From the incident in the boy room came a relationship that blossomed only to be sadly cut short.
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What a lovely comment - thank you. I have sent you a PM regarding the picture.
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Thank you, Chris.
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Somehow I managed to get through it, although even months later I still really don't know how. When everyone started to emerge from the Chapel I wanted to run away, but Ren's mum spotted me and came over to me. She was trying to smile through her tears. “Jake, I can understand why you didn't want to be in the Chapel for the service, but I want you to walk with us to the burial.” I nodded and trailed behind her to where Mr Renouf was standing with my parents and sisters. They positioned m
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Ah yes, the days when not everyone got into university
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Geron - you've served us a seven course gourmet taster meal. Thoroughly enjoyable, and I didn't mind one bit that I had to eat it with a bent fork......
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So, your old PR manager was more into smoke than mirrors? Oh, and 'have suit will travel' if you've got the space
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Ain't it great when a plan works that well?
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And we love a well planned and executed story
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For some reason this came to mind while reading this chapter. https://youtu.be/puM1k-S86nE
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There are preparations under way and there are other preparations under way over the way.....
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Rest assured, it'll be good - especially if Geron has a hand in it
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Like @droughtquake I've read the story before, but it's well worth reading again.
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Epilogue & Author's Note
Ivor Slipper commented on kbois's story chapter in Epilogue & Author's Note
Hmmm....... No check to see if the dog is microchipped? No attempt to find its owner? There could be a little kid somewhere crying itself to sleep every night because it has lost its best friend. -
Thanks for the comment Marty. Glad you enjoyed. I'll say the same to you as I said to @droughtquake earlier. Plus the ending was to a large extent dictated by the picture on which the 'challenge' was based. Thinking about it now though, it would have been a neat twist to have taken the pair back to Intrepid and left the sneakers there to be found, with their pictures inside.
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Hopefully not, but he does come across as a bit of a heel
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Not sky blue either then? ;-)
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Thanks JeffreyL. Glad you enjoyed it. I will think abut a follow up, but no promises .
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I suspect they operate under a 'non interference' code
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Sneaking Off Immediately I knew something was wrong as I looked around. For a start I shouldn't have been standing alone; I should have been with the rest of the ten man landing party. Actually, there weren't ten men in it, but rather six males – including me – three females and a robot. However, there was no sign of any of them. The other give away was that I should have appeared in the middle of a city, but instead I was standing in the middle of a field. Something had evid
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Space travel can deliver the unexpected
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An entertaining opening gambit.
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Yes, she does seem rather pushy, but perhaps that goes with the territory.
