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  1. Brayon
    Thanks, Bft, for reading and the comment. Jer and Rob's brotherly love is something that makes me smile when I write. In my mind, they grow a permanent brotherly bond, that will last for the rest of their lives. Just as soon as I get the next one back, and I finish polishing it, It will be posted. I'm already working on the next book, but that one won't be posted until its fully completed.
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    Courting Ruin

    Brayon commented on Mikiesboy's story chapter in Courting Ruin

    I read this story when it first came out and just reread it. It's a very funny story, and I can see a psycho cat doing all that. I had one.
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    Chapter 3

    Brayon commented on Geron Kees's story chapter in Chapter 3

    They used them in the First Chapter, after Jeremy took a couple shots at the Zombie. I assumed they had one with them in the truck. At the very least they might have a CB unit in the truck and one at base camp. Again, that's my assumption.
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    Chapter 3

    Brayon commented on Geron Kees's story chapter in Chapter 3

    That is awesome. I love it when a writer takes the time to do research to make things as accurate as possible. Taking a liberty is something that is in our toolkit as a writer. One thing I need to remember is something I quoted from @Mikiesboy in my signature, which was a quote from Samuel Coleridge: I'm guilty of forgetting to include things in chapters that I wanted.
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    Chapter 3

    Brayon commented on Geron Kees's story chapter in Chapter 3

    Another excellent chapter and you end on cliffy that is making me want the next chapter now. I love how the three boys interacted with each other, and how "professional" they were. It's nice to see that the new way of life was drilled into them enough that it's second nature. One point, I'd like to make. The gasoline for the truck and station. It shouldn't last more than 2 to 3 years, as gas would turn into a gel. Diesel wouldn't, and diesel cars/trucks can also be ran off of cooking oil. There's even a blend of it called Bio-diesel, which Willie Nelson owns out west in the USA, called Bio-Willie.
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    #699 is so going to be done.
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    Thanks, mfa607, for your comment and reading the story. Hopefully, more will be out soon. The final three chapters of Jeremy's story are done and off at the editor. She's queued up with with a bunch that a lot of us sent her.
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    Rogue’s Gallery

    Brayon commented on Brayon's story chapter in Rogue’s Gallery

    I updated the list, add a note at the bottom, and fixed some miss spellings and grammar in the listing. I'm not sure why it sent out a new post notification when it was just an update. Now, the final 3 chapters are done, and with my second editor, just waiting for them to get back, and when they do, they will get posted ASAP.
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    Chapter 2

    Brayon commented on Geron Kees's story chapter in Chapter 2

    All over, just look for the people staring at their phones while walking.
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    Bipolar, and depression here as well. No, I don't think your comment was out of line. A little snarky, but hey, we've all been there. For instance, I had someone post a comment on one of my stories, saying they didn't like an element that I used in it, and "they were getting off the bus." I, of course, thank them, mention I was sorry they didn't like it and told them to have fun on the next bus, and to be sure to check the route description before they get on. I clearly labeled the element that didn't like in the story description, and as a tag. Don't feel bad man, and don't fall into the trap of self-doubt about your writing. Been there, done that, and have the T-Shirt. It's hell.
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    It's a harsh world that we live in, but every now and then, there is something that can lighten the darkness. This story, is a warm telling, of two people who grew to love each other, and found comfort in each other. Highly recommended.
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    Chapter 1

    Brayon commented on cognac69's story chapter in Chapter 1

    A fantastic story. It brought a tear to my eye. Loved it.
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    I enjoyed this story, a lot. The characters felt real, and dialogue flowed. Scenes were a little minimalistic leaving a lot for the reader to add to the theatre of the mind. Overall, it was a very fun romance story, very little to no spelling or grammar errors that I saw. I would recommend this story to anyone looking for a fun romance. Not your typical high school teens.
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    Chapter 1

    Brayon commented on xTony's story chapter in Chapter 1

    A lovely romance. I liked both Zane and Andrew.
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    Chapter 2

    Brayon commented on Geron Kees's story chapter in Chapter 2

    An excellent chapter, even as a nightmare/dream it was powerful. I agree with several of the others here and their insight. Keep up the great job!
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    Thanks, Xander. The story is finished, and chapters 3, 4, and 5, are with my editor Kitt. When I get them back, I'll post them as they are finalized. 🙂 Tampa Chronicles 4: Family Always Has Your Back, is now in progress and I'm sitting on 3040 words on chapter 1. (pssst. They are taking a train to Boston. in Chapter 1.)
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    This was so freaking funny! Rats, Mice, all nasty varmints! These two guys and their two pooches are wonderful. Fantastic writing all around.
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    Excellent. I love the Party... err, Event that Faris pulled off. Like he said a few chapters back, "It's always better when I plan things."
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    I loved this one. It was delightful, funny, romantic, and thoroughly enjoyable. These characters and the continuous story is amazing.
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    When I read the title, my mind went into the gutter. I loved it. Larry is too cute of a dog, and now they have the puppy. Awesome man.
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    As I sit in the front room reading this and doing some school work as well, my family is wondering what in a textbook is bringing a smile to my face, and a tear to my eye. Absolutely fracking fantastic. The puns that Faris did, the twist of the marriage, it was just beautiful.
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    Excellent story. I'm liking these guys a lot. I think you did a great job with the prompt, and it felt like Halloween.
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    Cream Cheese

    Brayon commented on Mikiesboy's story chapter in Cream Cheese

    I'm really loving this couple. They're great together. Love it.
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    A Love Machine

    Brayon commented on Mikiesboy's story chapter in A Love Machine

    Excellent, tim. Fantastic, and completely reminded me of one of the ex-roomies. Always went overboard when he was "sick."
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    Delicious

    Brayon commented on Mikiesboy's story chapter in Delicious

    Fantastic. I'm already loving Faris and James.
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