Brayon
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I sometimes feel my little comments pale in comparison to the work, I just read. This is one such time. It was an excellent story, uplifting, and you made me feel like I was sitting with Hugh and Even while they talked. Excellent work Tim.
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It was Saturday, December 2, 2017, and Chandon Bolton was being ambushed by his mother. "I have a simple question. Who the hell is asleep in your bed?" Jill Bolton asked as Chandon walked out of the hallway half-bathroom and headed for the kitchen. She looked sternly at him, demanding an answer. “Mom, that’s my boyfriend Brayon, you’ve met him before… He came out to his parents last night, and they kicked him out. He called me from the IHOP on Dale Mabry needing a place to crash. I tried
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Sixteen-year-old Brayon came out to his Progressive parents, but they did the one thing he didn't expect. They disowned him and kicked him out. This is his story.
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Wow... just wow... Speechless hun. Was a great story, I loved it.
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Wow, Tim, you've got me busting stitches over here. Loved it!
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Excellent story! I thought it was completed, but I just noticed it's in an On Hold status. I can't wait to see if there is more!
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I read this story in one sitting. It was very well written and structured in a way it flowed well. Rick and Andy are two characters that I will remember and had a very interesting dynamic.
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My last cat loved fried chicken and meat lover's pizza. We always would make her a few tenders when we made it, and for the pizza, if was the toppings, cheese, and sauce. The dog ate the crust.
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Did not see the Vampire angle coming. I enjoyed the story, and I could feel the emotions of the characters.
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Thanks, I hope to have a new chapter ready soon!
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Thank you. I'm a mythology geek as well, and I hope I'm doing them justice.
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Thank you. I hope I do him justice in future installments.
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An incredibly hot scene! Very enjoyable, and a fantastic story/
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Thank you. I was going to make it longer and tempted to go back and do so, but when I got it to the end above, I realized I wouldn't be able to keep it a short. So, I cut it there, with a promise to revisit. You may have noticed, but Gavin and Kyle are from an earlier prompt.
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I liked the twist, where the Kitten becomes a human. Did not expect that at all. Very good story.
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Tim... You have a knack for getting me to tears. Loved this story!
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This was a great story, hands down. I felt Andy's anxiety, and then the Joke. WOW... I know what I would have said, and then to find out it was a Joke... dude! After that kiss and a good long laugh, I'd be wondering when would be going to bed.
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Tears, hun... You gave me tears of joy for this story Tim. I Wish I had a Morgan now.
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Thank you! Same here on wondering what life would be like in a PA setting for Homosexuals. I felt in this case, that the Leaders of this shelter felt that Breeding a new Population was more important than anything else. And if you're not doing that, well you're no use to the collective. I've read a story once, where all men regardless of sexual orientation were required to sire so many children. If you refused, then you were killed.
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You're welcome, and thank you for reading! I know all about that grit, lol. As an FL Native who grew up on the coast, we had salt and sand from the beach blowing on the cars all the time. Was a pain at times.
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Tempted too. There's a few I've done I would love to expand.
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Thank you! I agree it is wrong on so many levels. I wrote it, and it still makes me mad. LOL Thanks, Drew. I'm sorely tempted to turn this into a full story. Given its nature, the 2017 Fall Anthology Theme The Fall Out would be a perfect fit. Thank you, Cia. I've been a SciFi junkie since birth. Mom said I used to play with Rockets and Spacemen long before I could remember it.
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Thank you! At one point, I though I might have to break out the Black-n-Decker, to clean off some of the dustiness. Thank you. Once I got the overall theme, (thank you, Morgan Freeman,) I felt it had to be harsh, once I wrote in the Extinction Level Event. I'm just glad it turned out good, for being short.
