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  1. Brayon
    I'm getting both the Blog and an Error message now. Was just the blog. Now it's both.
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    I see your full link there.
  3. Brayon
    I was able to get to mine, via the menu above, but had trouble locating yours with the search options. I was also able to get to all six of yours via your Profile page, and the blog tab there.
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    The government, even in its best state, is but a necessary evil; in its worst state, an intolerable one. Thomas Paine
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    Chapter 6

    Brayon commented on Mikiesboy's story chapter in Chapter 6

    Wow. It is a major hurdle for the boys to overcome. I think they will overcome it eventually, but I think there is going to be a lot of sleeping apart. Great chapter tim.
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    For tim

    Brayon commented on MichaelS36's blog entry in Michael's Playroom

    tim is not the only poet in the family, I see. That was beautiful Mike. tim is lucky to have you, in his life.
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    If I wanted "slice of life" or realism, all I need to do is walk out my bedroom door. No thank you. Give me a Good SciFi or Fantasy story any day of the week. Escapism, that's what I want. How the character develops in an Escapism story, is of little concern. The story can be Dark or an HEA, but the main focus should be to put the reader in a whole nother world. Life is too short to read about the Real World.
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    I just wrote a prompt, where the lead is killed.
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    “Just tell me which room is his, now!” The Officer yelled as Doug tried to block his way. “You can’t go down there, Sir!” Doug yelled back and held onto the larger man who outranked him. “I have orders, from someone higher than you.” The officer struggled more, before some MPs came over, and helped restrain him. “I’ll have your stripes Sergeant. You can guaran-fucking-tee that.” Doug cringed inwardly but showed resolve as he stared down the Officer. “Begging your pardon, Sir
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    When the original version came out as a forum game, I enjoyed it a lot. This version of the same story fleshes out a lot of what was in the mini-version. I found to be fantastic, and well done in thought, flow, and character interaction. My only complaint is it's very hard to read. Due to how it posted to the website, it's like one long block of text. Despite that, I'm still rating it five stars.
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    I can confirm it on my laptop. Firefox 54, and Windows 10. EDIT:
  12. Brayon
    I'm loving the story a lot. Almost done with the first book.
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    Chapter 11: “Since the Battle of Gilese Prime two years ago, we have seen nothing but losses. We’ve lost 1/3 of the outer colonies to the Thorian Empire, and the refugees and evacuees are overcrowding the Home System, and Lower Orion Arm colonies. We need to seek out a peaceful settlement with the Thorians, and send a delegation immediately.” The Jovian Ambassador, Nicholas Smith, stated to the news host. Though the three on the screen were not in the same room, much less on the same planet
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    I do believe you enhanced the original version. Good job, and poor Bradley.
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    YouTube auto-populates, not sure about the rest.
  16. Brayon
    This is a very beautifully written Valentine's day story. A very interesting take on how Cupids interact with other angels, and how they get compatible humans together.
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    This is the second Angel and Imp story by Timothy M. A must read, along with the other two in the trilogy of stories.
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    This is the First Angel and Imp story by Timothy M. The characters are beautiful, and well craft. A must read.
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    This is the third Angel and Imp story by Timothy M. The ingenuity and development of the characters from the start of the series has been beautiful. A must read.
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    This story was so well-written, had I not known it was a FanFic, I would have suspected it of being the start of a new series. The world and characters come alive. You feel for the struggle the main character has with his family. Excellent read.
  21. Brayon
    Very well-written, and believable characters. Was a fun read. Some clunky dialogue, which is why I rated it 4 out of 5 stars.
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    Chapter 1

    Brayon commented on Andrew Q Gordon's story chapter in Chapter 1

    I enjoyed the story and the characters. Very well done.
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    This is a great short story, which shows the interaction between Teacher and Student. It is part of an Anthology Series and is one of many great ones.
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    I loved the interaction between the characters. I kind of wish I had a class like Chris did.
  25. Brayon
    A simple story of love during two different generations. One of the final letters got me good, and I teared up. Great read.
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