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This is a short story, that takes place over a Thanksgiving Holiday Dinner. A quick read, and one that I hope to see the characters again at some other time. I would most diffidently recommend.
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I read this the other day when I did the other prompts. Just getting around to leaving a comment. This story is complex. Contains a lot of Description, and emotion of the main character. I thoroughly enjoyed. You could tell the main character's emotion state of being kicked out of his church, his family, and then learning it was all a joke. Excellent job. Seems to me, a bit of experience might have been the inspiration for this one.
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Sandalwood is by far one of my favorite scents! I love this scene. The emotions of the characters do come out, and you can tell the characters love each other. Thanks for writing it!
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A very well written prompt. It's funny how family knows, sometimes before you do.
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A great Sci-Fi story set in a world that the Author has invented. It is one that I would love to read more about.
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This is a fun story about a Shifter and a Non-Shifter who have fallen in love with each other. Sasha does an excellent job in exploring the attitudes, loves, and desires of the two main characters, and explores the role of Family with both of them. A great read for a nice Sunday afternoon. Five Stars.
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This was a great story. I missed it when I was searching for a good Valentine's day story, but @Timothy M. brought it to my attention. Very well written.
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Awesome conclusion to the Angel and Imp storyline. Absolute adorable.
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YES!!!! Angel and Imp. Loved the ending to this chapter, and cant wait to read the next one.
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“Who gave you the right to read my journal?” Gavin asked in a stern voice. “You did, last night,” was the reply from Kyle. “I was drunk! You’re using it against me,” Gavin said while narrowing his eyes, and approached Kyle. Kyle looks over the edge of the journal book, and smiles some, “Sit down. Besides, you read mine last night. Also, I wouldn’t call this a journal. It seems more like a book of shadows. I knew you dabbled in Witchcraft, but I didn’t think you were this serious abou
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I went and looked at her Album, and I agree with the second Russ and En pic. Jacob 2 is awesome!
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This was a great story. I love the pairing between the characters, it fits them perfectly. Also, I totally see Impie and Angie breaking all the damn rules and becoming a couple.
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Family loyalty is everything
Brayon commented on Timothy M.'s story chapter in Family loyalty is everything
What a Royal Ass! I can believe Henry would do that to his Sons and Daughter but would have hoped he wouldn't have made a public spectacle of it. So glad for Kristen, and now just gotta wait for the next installment. -
As someone that has experienced the pain of rejection from Family, I can say Evan is spot on. Loved this chapter, and I'm "man enough" to admit, there were a few tears.
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Tor better not break Kristian's heart. And vice versa. I can see a good pairing there like the twins and their future husbands. Though, it seems all three of the siblings may need counseling. When Russ was noticing Chris' way of taking over, so to speak, and how everyone else was deferring to him, it seems to me that all of them may have "daddy issues."
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Thank you as well, for reading. I appreciate the feedback, and it helps me too. Also, in my Blog, there is a Character Profile of Aeris. Check it out!
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Act 2 – Prelude to War Part 2
Brayon commented on Brayon's story chapter in Act 2 – Prelude to War Part 2
Thank you! Working on Story chapter 10 currently, and will get it to a Beta/Editor asap. -
I want a Tor! Another great chapter. I've been enjoying this story a lot, and it's really making me miss a couple of old friends. Russ reminds me of one of them.
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Very lovely chapter. Russ finally got what he wanted. I'm happy their love is growing.
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Love the chapter. Again seeing the twins interact was great. Having Chris and Jacob becoming fast friends is also awesome. I love the idea of them getting a house together.
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Confidential conversations II
Brayon commented on Timothy M.'s story chapter in Confidential conversations II
The Twinbond, Twin Time, and the Twin Talks, and really making me wish I had a twin. This chapter was pure gold. I also love that both Twins are fairly the same, even with the sensitive button. -
I'm still getting a gay vibe from the Twin Uncles we're yet to meet. I feel the talk between Evan and Russ was awesome. I love how they interact with each other. It's defiantly character building.
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Confidential Conversations I
Brayon commented on Timothy M.'s story chapter in Confidential Conversations I
Wow... I love how the twins act together. Excellent chapter. Now, I'm addicted to this story. LOL -
Planned and unplanned meetings
Brayon commented on Timothy M.'s story chapter in Planned and unplanned meetings
I hate Russ' dad. Total Ass.
