Thanks Moggie for reading the story. There could be another story, but I'm not really sure. Kinda feel like I need to do a "Heaven's Redemption" as a companion piece, but not so sure. Yet.
Thank you for reading! Yes, Eddie wasn't a nice person, at all. The prompt left a lot of room for interpretation, and this story idea came to me fairly quickly. Though this is the fourth draft of it. The three previous ones, were all darker, and a lot more political.
Thank you, Mac. The Tenses are a weakness of mine, and I didn't notice till you just pointed out in this one.
I have to give credit to tim. He said twist needed a little bit of fleshing out about what happened to Eddie, and making him the Incubus' plaything just popped into my head.
Some secrets, one should keep till they are in the grave. Eddie Olsen, a 29-year-old single man, and Manager of a local Starbucks finds out why in a terrifying fashion, one Halloween Night.
I'm not an Admin. From my experience, GA is about inclusion, and not exclusion. I can say that the Story System has Tags, and Gay, Bisexual, Lesbian, and Transgendered each have a tag. The majority of stories on the site are Gay Male in nature, and according to the Tags it shows:
Gay - 1,706 stories tagged
Bisexual - 155
Lesbian - 62
Transgender - 29
Granted it's up to Authors to tag a story, when it's being setup, and not everyone tags them as GLBT.
Love the Halo novels, movies, and the soundtracks. I've watched all of the cut-scenes on YouTube as well. However, I can never play the game. FPS games make me sick.
Mabinogi was the one I spent the most money on, and not always for myself.
Star Wars: The Old Republic I maintained a subscription, and bought more Cartel Coins than I care to admit. Loved the game, and the storyline on it.
Currently I've played more F2P MMO's than I care to admit too. lol. Though Star Trek Online has my attention now. Been grinding Dillithium Ore, to convert to Zen, in order to buy the Cash Shop items. End Game sucks with T-5 ships, and mismatch gear.
That's sorta fixed now. They got the door sizes right, but some things are kind of unrealistic. Huge transporter pads now, and scale of Interior for the ships vrs exterior is off.
It does have a good storyline, and is sanctioned by CBS/Paramount, so a couple of good things.