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  1. FormerMember4

    Chapter 13

    There was a time that shaving had a very different connotation. A gay man would have been thought of as a pedophile. Society just sees it as fads and personal choice now.
  2. FormerMember4

    Chapter 14

    I’ll leave a review when you change status to completed. Another wonderful story. Especially considering this one didn’t require a 50 box of Kleenex order from Amazon, or a plot that sends you into a depression. Each signs of a good author.
  3. FormerMember4

    Chapter 14

    Lots of unanswered questions. That would be expected in this situation. Let’s hope they find their way with love and support. I wouldn’t be able to forgive Ashley that quickly. I can understand and sympathize with her jealousy. What she did though goes way beyond vindictive and malicious. No amount of Mrs. Lynch’s cookies can fix that.
  4. The nailing arse is giving a totally different visual. 😉
  5. Great chapter. Kick’em to the curb. Just taking out the trash! 🍾
  6. FormerMember4

    Chapter 13

    Love is when the other persons happiness is more important than your own- H. Jackson Brown Jr. Great chapter!
  7. LOL! Brings back clubkid memories. Where’s my visor and ring pop and glitter?
  8. FormerMember4

    Anzac Day

    What a lovely tribute. Sacrifice should be honored and remembered.
  9. What a cluster/f*ck of events. I feel for Brady. I do see both sides though. I was placed in a locker in school. You don’t forget those sort of things. I also realize we change as we mature. A talk would be good for them both. Work your magic Maggie!!
  10. FormerMember4

    Chapter 24

    It is sad to see Prism gone. However, he will live on. The death of Prism and Salidar is a catalyst. They needed to die for Styx and Max to find reason and purpose. It will ignite them to finish the job ahead. Shadow Honor!
  11. I thought of that. Dustin did seem uncomfortable about leaving Billy alone with Hartley.
  12. One thing wrong with that theory... Dustin is an adult. If there's others with younger... most definitely.
  13. I have an evil way to give Hartley his just desserts. He told Billy to learn and play the game. Billy could report for inappropriate touching. Video is on Hartley's phone. I'm sure it's not the only one.
  14. Well Paula just redeemed herself to a point. Having talk with Brett. Then following that up with performance at school. I just wish she slapped the Dr after slapping Brett. I hope Billy goes to mom about the slime ball teacher. She said she knew a whole lot of skeletons. Maybe teacher is cross dresser or a true deviant. 😄Good chapter Jeff!
  15. FormerMember4

    Chapter 12

    I was just left hanging on the feckin ledge! 🤯 Other than that shyte, a really good chapter. Good to see Troy get some normalcy back.
  16. FormerMember4

    Chapter 1

    A charming and sweet story. The innocence and wonder of first love... I have the warm fuzzies. Well done!
  17. I really like the progression of the story. A father doing his best to acclimate his son. I don’t know how grandparents could possibly win. Unless you bribe a judge, or get a bigot for a judge. Good job A.
  18. FormerMember4

    The Pick-Up

    I love this tim. The flow, the build up. Filled with lust, anticipation, questioning... The flirty feel just makes me happy! That Steven Tyler mouth... nothing more needs to be said. Bravo! xo
  19. I could kiss you for this. Less navigation needed. More streamlined. 👍🏻
  20. FormerMember4

    Chapter 13

    Great chapter. I’m glad Kevin and Devon bonded over the situation. Devon was wise to go with Cameron. Mrs. Lynch was the perfect cushion for Devon. Similar circumstances. Showing him what she accomplished in life. Mrs. Lynch is like June Cleaver. It’s like Leave it to Beaver in that house. You got beat up... have a cookie. You knocked up a girl... have a cookie. You committed murder... have a cookie dear.
  21. FormerMember4

    Chapter 12

    This was like a Beverly Hills 90210 episode. The whole school knows. Sherry will alert the town. Devon’s reaction was disappointing and selfish. I don’t expect change overnight. In the US, having something in your hands is 9/10 of the law. It’s also Ashley’s body. Her decision. Mrs. Lynch and those damn cookies. Cookies and cum... The snack of champions.
  22. FormerMember4

    Chapter 11

    OMG! Can you say Rosemary’s baby? The spawn of Satan.
  23. FormerMember4

    Chapter 1

    A sweet story Dave. You can’t hide from love. It will haunt you. An ending showing their connection. It’s a documented phenomena. Spouses passing together. Broken heart syndrome.
  24. These were a beautiful offering. The cinquains are lovely. I find it to be a really beautiful form. April 9th was beautiful in flow and presentation.
  25. This was an interesting experiment. One you pulled off well. Each offer a different take with added information. Seeing a different perspective. Well done.
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