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Been there, done that! Maybe if you narrate, it will sound fresh and new. 💋
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Caught having sex with Amanda... Dustin’s sister!! 🤣
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I thought of evil theory. Leaving the dance, Sarah is involved in major accident.
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*sigh* Does anyone know how to control Bailey withdrawal? I need a fix desperately!!! 😰
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The Love and the Loss
FormerMember4 commented on Aceinthehole's story chapter in The Love and the Loss
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This is where Joey could make amends. He said publicly that Brett is his brother. Joey is popular. He could start revolt against school administration.
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I love how Billy finally put Brett first. No matter the cost. They’ll have a shared memory of prom. I love Mary. She’s a sharp and wise girl. Too bad we didn’t get introduced to her sooner. I don’t know why Billy didn’t say anything about the autism. The talk outside would have been perfect time. Would explain things to Brett. It might even bring them closer. With Brett and his issues. I’m hoping for a school riot on Monday. Maybe some dirt from Mr. Taylor’s son. Juicy dirt to bring down house of cards... Like dad was the father of aborted baby, not Joey.
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It’s a separate story with different characters. Author is dealing with family stuff and currently isn’t posting.
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The Love and the Loss
FormerMember4 commented on Aceinthehole's story chapter in The Love and the Loss
Moving chapter. Timing is everything. I’ve dealt with three deaths In a month. This one hit kind of hard. -
Det. Dimwit is out of a job and hopefully faces aiding and abetting, along with obstruction charges. Instead of Who’s coming to dinner?, it’s Who’s Cumming at dinner? 😉
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Beautiful tribute tim. Moggy once told me that she just wanted to be remembered. It’s clear that she is.❤️
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Just having a moment...
FormerMember4 replied to Comicality's topic in Comicality's Shack Clubhouse's Cafe
For every hater... you have at least five lovers. Don’t tell my Sir, I’m a lover. You have the POWER to silence the haters and leave them alone in their puddle of misery. If they don’t know you, the opinion of you holds no value. -
This absolutely breaks my heart. May you have peace and fly free. ❤️
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Very intense chapter. Fasha regenerated quickly... even after becoming a crispy critter. The meeting between Max and Kirra was interesting. More curiosity than anything else. Max saved Kirra, no animosity there. Sad to see all the harm to the eagles. Beautiful and magnificent creatures. I don’t feel sorry for what Salidar brought on himself. I don’t think he ever meant what happened though. It’s a lesson for Max to remember as ruler. If Styx, Max, and Kirra were meant to be united... Will that provide any magical strengths, or abilities?
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Welcome changes Myr. Hope a breather in your future. Who doesn’t like a system that’s smarter and easier to use??
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The band is an important teacher to Oli. They teach him how to improve on his craft. They teach him how to deal with conflict, by talking through things. Most important, they teach him what mistakes not to make. It will be interesting to see if school changes Oli. A more constructive and caring environment might inspire and influence music. No doubt horny, boys should go slow. There’s plenty of time ahead.
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Anubis and Khonsu's Children
FormerMember4 commented on HinderToyBL's story chapter in Anubis and Khonsu's Children
Sending my condolences Robin. May you find a moment to breathe Thirdly. What a ridiculous thing to fight about for centuries. Although, it did give us Eli and the hornies. I look forward to more. Let’s worship the temple of multiple nuts. These boys have nutting down. -
Mrs. Lynch is a breath of fresh air. Willing to be a little uncomfortable in an effort to support her son. the boys can deal with a lot, by sticking together. Knowing there’s support from staff will help. This is where true friends will show themselves. Paul is just a punk. If Kevin, Cameron, Stanley and Charles stand up to him, I guarantee Paul won’t have backup. He’s not even liked by his supposed friends. Ashley isn’t just a girl with no self-respect. She also isn’t the brightest crayon in the box. This isn’t (Little House on the Prairie). Siblings usually don’t share a bed. Girl... a little less sex, and definitely more studying. Walmart greeter is looking to be your future.
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April 1 through April 7
FormerMember4 commented on Parker Owens's story chapter in April 1 through April 7
Parker, I always find enjoyment in your poetry. Such conviction and sensitivity your pieces provide. They grace you with the gentility of their maker. Beautiful arrangement this week. -
I’ve read this multiple times today Sir. I feel your exasperation. Think of your words as musical notes. Start stringing together and eventually you will find your chord progression. Those strung together words will find their harmony and rhythm. You’re a maestro Sir. I look forward to your next arrangement.
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Ryder owns his past. It doesn’t own him. This was a powerful chapter. Endings and beginnings. The moment with Ryder, Oli, and grandma was beautiful. (I believe in you)... Those words from Ryder will always be carried by Oli. ❤️ ❤️
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I like the friction though. Life isn’t perfect and rough patches happen. It’s in how you handle it.
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The toughest weapon they have might be Levi’s farts. They can force the spies out from hiding. I’m giving Kyle a little leeway. Because I’m sure he wasn’t thinking clearly. However, your vows were to honor each other. You don’t honor Blu when you don’t include in decisions. I love the top secret cake caper. Mission Impossible and Pink Panther was hilarious.
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I find it interesting just how many talented authors had troubled lives.
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Happy Birthday! May you find your prince soon.🎂
