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I love this genre.
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Thanks tim! I’m on the mend. I don’t bounce back with ease like I once did. Getting stronger each day though.
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April 15 through April 21
FormerMember4 commented on Parker Owens's story chapter in April 15 through April 21
I’m sorry to be tardy to the party Parker. A wonderful collection of bare emotions. April 15th almost made me cry. A recipe box is a tangible connection to the past. Full of love, memories, and what we’ve lost. A beautiful and thoughtful piece. April 17th is honest and bares your fears naked. You are most definitely a poet. Certainly no fraud. I’m no stranger to self doubt. We must depend on others to show what we can not see. Your poems are a joy to read. They say so much about the soul writing them... Thanks for sharing them. ❤️ -
This collection represents Dark and Light. The demons that haunt us and the love that protects and saves us from them. Ode to a Tree and the pantoum were my faves. Written with love and respect. Emotion ran through. A wonderful cornucopia. Great job tim. xoxo
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I love this collection tim. This week has a definite theme of reflection. I love April 8th. We never lose that connection, or longing. That’s a bond that carries us through. I see those mental photographs all the time. You make her proud. Honoring her is loving her. April 9th is funny and so relatable. I’d love a large carb lovers delight... Well done this week. The challenge shows a definite I will. xo
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story review Featured Story: Boy Story - The Road Taken
FormerMember4 commented on Renee Stevens's blog entry in Gay Authors News
A wonderful review Puppi. This is a hard story to describe. It’s one of my faves. The author is so honest in delivery. The characters are lovable and compliment each other. Scenarios aren’t whitewashed caricatures of life, but real emotion and actions. I really love the theme of self discovery and what exactly does that mean in who we are. -
I’m gone a week and come back to CJ. A welcome back indeed. Luckily I had @Reader1810 posting story on profile. Couldn’t miss the new book. I’m happy prenup is resolved. Civilly and without too much damage. Poor Aussie... one of those times in life where you’re lost and life is full of change. Carl is a piece of work. I knew plenty of those dinosaurs in thinking with my career in NYC. CJ did not surprise with actions. the mention of Coconut Grove brought back memories. Many lazy and relaxed days at cafes and shops. On the Miami trips to visit Liquid and Salvation. Good beginning papi
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A long absence and I come back to Dissonance. Thank you Sir. A wonderful chapter Sir. Sure hoping Travis relinquishes some of that stubbornness. If things progress with Ben, it’s give and take. Not making judgement on Mrs. Cooper, but not appreciating the way she handled Ben. Not sure if that was mama bear, or dismissive. Look forward to the next chapter.
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Very sad! He had so many health issues. He was very talented. Saw him here in Vegas. Wondering how they will handle unfinished album.
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Great chapter. I get a bad feeling about Mr. Grecco. I hope that doesn’t cause more issues for the family. seems like Bryson wants to be frisked by a beefy security guard. MMM...
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Another Half Baked Oliver Plan
FormerMember4 commented on Aceinthehole's story chapter in Another Half Baked Oliver Plan
I love how Oli is trying to fix Teddy. It shows he’s maturing. Quite unselfish for that age. The last time in studio clearly maps the future. The end of Messiah, and beginning and rise of Unity. That last interaction also leads me to believe Tommy’s time is coming to an end. I wonder how that affects Oli. Ace, I’m going to start charging a quarter for the word *cackled*. 😉 -
April 8 through April 14
FormerMember4 commented on Parker Owens's story chapter in April 8 through April 14
Like a collection on display in the finest gallery. Such care taken with each word. I’m particularly drawn to 12. There’s true emotion felt in the reflective melancholy. -
Just good ole self serving greed and politics. Everyone is expendable with that thinking. Sad when people start with good intentions, and then are lured by all the wrong things.
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What an ending point!! Ugh!! The imagery was fantastic in this battle scene. I was wondering where Fasha was. He didn’t disappoint by disguising as Veil. I can only hope help swoops in to help Prism. The Slayer and Dark Monk’s destiny, and story can’t end like this. If Grimm was being effective, Why would Neredos entomb Grimm? Does he have ulterior motives with that action?
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Better late than never... Being true to yourself. Mistakes are made, but children aren’t a mistake. Reunion! Never done one... never will. Didn’t care for most when I was there. In my head they are all fat, bald and whatever else you want to insert into the blank. Looking forward to Ember and Brady’s stories unfolding. Will Brady’s biggest dream come true?
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True! I’m blind. I have to read with a screen reader. ☺️
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The funny thing is that Kenny seems to be gay, or at least bi. Vanderbilt is a conservative leaning private university in Nashville, TN. Specializing in medicine, business, and law.
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TC2 - Chapter 3: Meet Tibot, Adam’s Brother
FormerMember4 commented on Brayon's story chapter in TC2 - Chapter 3: Meet Tibot, Adam’s Brother
Good chapter A. The brother goes from Tobit to Tibot throughout. I don’t trust the brother. Suspect timing. Especially knowing what he’s done before. -
It said a junior at Vanderbilt. College.
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There’s one thing bothering me about this chapter. Devon raised his hand to Ashley. He backed off before doing it. Do they ever see that at home? Was it just the moment. The anger in that home suggests counseling and anger management.
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Mrs. Williams is a piece of work. Always protecting and backing her delinquent. All while disregarding a child who really needs support and encouragement. Mr. Williams is supportive and accepting. He treats boys equally. It’s Devon’s lying and disrespect that has him in trouble. Not Kevin’s sexuality. I absolutely love Mrs. Lynch. She’s supportive and a good ally. However, baking cookies doesn’t fix everything. Ashley is a manipulative class skank. Calling Paul means one thing... Trouble! I hope karma beats those two bloody. A good dose of humility goes a long way.
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The song is the perfect analogy of their relationship. How bout them apples Dr. Riley?
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Those are Apple voices. The others are with accents. I already have an Irishman. Danny Sir is enough.
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Leonard Nimoy maybe. I like strong authoritative voices. I’d get a kick out of Spock
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My screen reader is female... Samantha is her name, no joke. Daniel is drab and boring. Reminds me of a really awful first date.
