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That was crazy 🤯 After faris got introduced i instantly started speculating about him being the "other half", but faris also being the big red horse completely threw me and i still haven't recovered 😂 This was an excellent short story and although Gerard lost a foot i think what he gained definitely made up for it in the long run.

I was really invested in this story and was on the edge of my seat by the end, the ending is definitely unfinished and feels like it got wrapped up hastily without any care for how the reader is going to be grasping at straws trying to figure out what happened next. It was a great story but the half assed ending left me unsatisfied.

I can't help but think Vincent is holding back somehow, he mostly seems to be reacting to Stefan's attacks instead of going on the offensive and trying to end the fight asap. Vincent needs to kill stefan to prevent the end of the world but i still don't think he's prepared to do that. Bringing mason was a mistake in my opinion, Stefan obviously doesn't fight fair and he's not above using mason against Vincent in a bid to expose this fabled divine affinity.

Loved it!! So cute but also insanely sexy 🥵 I wanted to throttle Heath and Aiden so many times 😂 Their families were both hilarious in each their own way, i got a good laugh when Aiden literally ran for his and Heath's lives 🤣 Aiden's description was way too adorable, especially scrunching up his freckled nose when his mind is working overtime, i had a seriously cute freckle faced friend in school who scrunched up his nose when he laughed and it was so damn cute i almost swooned every time 😵

This was a great read! I love stories like this, the build up was perfect and absolutely smoldering the whole way. Thank goodness for Hans talking some sense into Klaus and jake, I've never seen two people so hard headed! P.s the love scenes were exquisite 🥵🔥

I don't think there is a single Geron kees story that i don't like, his style of writing is one of my favourites to read. It makes you feel like you're really there and all those character emotions somehow become your own. It was a beautiful short story bringing back memories of childhood summers and an appreciation for the little things that we adults take for granted in our hectic everyday lives.

Such a cute story! A cute boy who can cook is my kryptonite, i stand no chance against falling for one 😂 i loved Jeremy! The flashback to being 13 and becoming fast friends at summer camp was excellent and so adorable. I was holding out for an innocent peck on the lips or check goodbye before parting ways, but alas.... You are a great story teller i look forward to reading more of your work

This was such a cute and adorable story, rough at the beginning but turned into a real feel good tale filled with warm fuzzys. Great work! I would have liked to have more details in the epilogue concerning mason and where he's at mentally one year later.

There is literally nothing i hate more than when an author just throws up a brick wall as the story is winding down and it's like we have to just make something up in our minds about what's on the other side. Life is frustrating enough as it is, I don't want something i do to get away from said frustration to add even more to it....ugh

Great story, i can identify a lot with Ethan, not because i killed anyone or had a horrible childhood or anything, but i do have some of my own demons i have to battle every now and then. I was on the edge of my seat the entire story, it was extremely compelling and i got chills several times. I wish Jonathan and Ethan nothing but happiness, although i hope they'll find a place to settle down outside of the hustle and bustle of the big city, I've been to Toronto, i wouldn't live there for all the money in the world. Ethan seems much more at peace when he's one with nature, i hope he and Jonathan can find a compromise so he's not trapped in that concrete jungle forever.

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Such a cute little story, stories like this make me curse my horribly awkward and lonely childhood 😅🙈 i can count the amount of sleepovers i had before i turned 18 on 2 hands lol camping out i think less than one hand would be required, but that was before puberty and everything else that comes with it.

Ooooh does daeran have a thing for joe? They would make a cute couple. I'm totally shipping them 😁 I'm anxiously awaiting the first kiss between Andre and Rafe 😃🍿😘

I loved this story but you better be making a sequel or I'm coming for your kneecaps 😡

I'm with the Aussies, LEAVE SHIT ALONE!! You clearly over estimate the human race, you will never win so just shut up and let the big things happen. Win some money, stop jenny getting molested, etc you get the picture, but the fate of the US and the world is not your problem or concern, you are less than nothing to them so stop caring about what they set themselves up for down for road. Look out for your own and keep your head down.

Oh for Christ sakes 🤦 I'm all for being able to go back and fix past mistakes and make your life better but leave the country and the world out it, humans are 100% self destructive and no amount of altering the time line will help because at some point, some day, possibly in your life time or several life times from now..... Someone is gonna fuck it all up and undo all the progress. You owe absolutely nothing to anyone but yourself on a second chance at life, if you can make other people's lives better while you're at it then great, otherwise keep your head down and live your life for no one but you.

Did Shay reconnect with andy and tori!?!! I must know 😤 Also, very cute yet tragic story. I wish griff and Shay a long happy life together 💘

Oh my freaking god leave it alone already!!! This is the best time line so far just accept you're not god and live your life!!! Sorry but parts of this story give me headaches at how stupid these guys can be 🤦

I will never understand parents who think like this, "it's ok if you have a boyfriend, you just aren't allowed to be boyfriends literally anywhere, especially in your own home where you're supposed to feel the most comfortable. Actually just pretend you're friends and stay ten feet away from them at all times 👍" i mean 🤦🤦🤦

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OMG I'm buying a drink for all Alec's friends!! That was an awesome surprise, i had a niggling in the back of my mind at Finn's prolonged silence and I'm glad i was right! River is too cute i love his friendship with alec and how they know each other inside and out. Everyone needs a friend like that i think.

Talk about a cliff hanger!! Dammit grumpy I don't have any nails left to bite!

Alec you poor baby come give me a hug dammit!! 😭😭😭 I know exactly how he feels, i was just like that growing up. My first best friend growing up ended up being a two faced bastard and i ended up totally lost and hurt wondering why i couldn't see it. I pushed people away for years and resisted anyone trying to be my friend. It wasn't until high school started that a few people in my classes essentially FORCED me to accept them as friends lol they wore me down eventually and i made friendships that are still in place today almost 15 years later. I can't thank them enough for finally getting me out of my shell, i would always be a loner, that part hasn't changed, but at least now I'm no longer "alone". Trust me there's a difference. I wish now i had of let people in sooner and maybe i wouldn't have been bullied as much for being what everyone saw as a weird antisocial kid who never spoke...

Damn this was a high speed rollercoaster from the word go! I loved the storyline and concept, I'm a sucker for these "second chance" stories involving age regression. Such a damn shame about Davey's mom and sis though, i have a sister who's 4 years younger than me and i cried when i read about Jenny's death. We don't know what happened to Brandon or the fallout of his boyfriend Sean's coma that he suffered to save Davey's life. There's also the fact that it was so certain he was to become a pilot after getting to fly for the first time but then he becomes a scientist instead. I was kinda scratching my head on that one. Davey is in for one hell of a military career his second time around that's for sure, i wonder if he's gonna be a lifer instead of leaving as soon as possible like he keeps saying. This was an excellent story and I'm proud to have read it, my hat's off to you!

I don't get it? Did his best friend and the others literally just kill him permanently like some casual thing or put him in some kind of forced stasis mode? The ending left me so confused. Also that was a dick move killing off Viktor, tsk tsk.