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  1. Gary L

    PS Ch 5

    A nice tale, interesting 🤗
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    Chapter 10

    Cruelty to readers should not be allowed!! But it's summer so we might be more understanding 😈😈😈
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    Chapter 10

    Great read....but a cliffhanger on last available chapter is v cruel!
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    Chapter 32

    A nice story with v good characterisation. Thank you!
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    Chapter 4

    Im in love with Rita 😍😍😍😍
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    Chapter 74

    Really? Or helped him to find it.... The dialogue is really authentic 🤗
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    Chapter 72

    Some of the above comments strike me as ?.., well, I don't know what to say but let's start with patronising, insulting and ignorant. The characters that I have followed have indulged in "unsafe" sex ( itself a value judgement, perhaps), vendettas, murders, theft, embezzlement, etc etc. why do people suddenly get "precious" about the reality of drug taking as a way of recreational life? This is a (great) work of fiction and should be judged as such. Do we really want to copy the Catechism or create a new one? ps I have never taken any illegal drug in my 60+ years, except for sharing a joint which left me crying for three hours. Does this mean we should have baNned the film "Trainspotting"?
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    His Story

    I recently read a v long story which was v good , except for one thing. there was zero emotional content. Whereas here we can see the emotional damage suffered by young vulnerable gays. I think that this is an exceptional piece of writing. i strongly recommend this and other writings by the author.
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    Friday (Evening)

    I am really enjoying this story. This an example of what uk families are about - at least my own. A poor maN in the supermarket queue once asked one of my great nephews if he and the other boy next to him were brothers. A simple, sociable question one might think.... The guy wilted as a 10-year-old explained that they were half brothers sharing the same dad.... I think you have captured the new dimensions of being a family perfectly. I look forward to the next part 🤓🤓🤓
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    Thursday

    I totally agree. You write really well and capture the sheer awfulness of being a shy person starting in college. Im Completely hooked.
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    Fernando

    Such an enjoyable read. The dads hit LA with a bang. I have enjoyed many of your stories but this one has a lightness of touch. It feels like you are really enjoying writing this one. ***** Thanks
  12. A v sexy read. Verrrrry nice 😀😀😀😀😀
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  13. Keep up the good work! This is a nice tale.
  14. The plot thickens
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    Chapter 6

    And we all khow good he isn't at controlling "Little Tristan"....
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    Chapter 4

    I was once in this age group - all boy grammar school. It's a v different story you are telling but that's what keeps me reading. I'm enjoying this a lot. Well done!
  17. Nice to see an ordInary guy as the centre of attention. I really like the way you develop this. Keep it up, as they say in UK.😈
  18. Me too! I fear that I im the same general catergory - although 20+ kgs lighter, my life style is probably worse.... Well written, I thought 🤗
  19. A lovely tale in its own right. Bailey's situation reminds me of the terrible rate of infection for gays like him from AIDS in UK during the mid-late 80's. A real loss. thank you.
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    The Word of Man

    Yes, so true. I used to be a spokesperson on news in uk on cases where no bishop had the guts to appear. Then worked for 10 yrs with abused males. Many were victims of clergy abuse, as I came to realise for myself when a therapist called me out on it. But. Others were from parents and relatives. Finally, burned out I moved to Spain and learned that I wasn't a superhero but an ordinary guy. And that's ok.
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    The Word of Man

    Well said - your comments at the end are perfect..thanks
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    Yves

    Memories of first trip to usa. Landing at LAX I could see burnt out bloxks after the 94/5? Riots. Then treated to PCH ,up to Sonoma Valley. Great trip and an amazing experience of how good Americans are at making you feel comfortable.. We Europeans must seem cold and distant in comparison. A great read mr C. Thank you.
  23. Ace chapter, once again mr D 🌈🌈
  24. My god that was fun! As a writer for years you have kept your readers enthralled! I got hooked a couple of years ago. My favourite moment of the saga? The revenge of Will on his dads. Stay safe and don't keep us waiting too long 🤗
  25. Another great episode! Mr Dodger. Thanks 🤗 🍷🍷🍷🍷
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