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Gary L

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  1. Gary L

    A Good Deed

    Pretty, yes. Manipulative, yes. Dumb, yes. Intelligent, no. Sharp as a tack, debatable on what type of tacks you buy.
  2. And I hadn’t even started yet. If that isn’t a sexual cliffhanger, I don’t know what is…
  3. The chp title says it all! As they say here, “¡uff!” can’t believe I even feel a bit sorry for Deidre….
  4. Gary L

    A Good Deed

    I can’t wait for Thanksgiving. There should be mega fireworks 🧨
  5. Gary L

    A Good Deed

    Enjoy your 14 minutes of fame! 🤗
  6. Cats AND wiener dogs….. And don’t I know it
  7. Chapter titles are worthy of note! They do not deceive!!
  8. Gary L

    The Dinner Date

    Phew it’s getting hot in here!
  9. So, so good. I’m looking forward to re-reading the whole story once complete. I suspect I will find nuances that have escaped me thus far. This has become a worthy part of @Robert Hugill’s collection.
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    Thanks, Dads

    1000 words of fun. I loved this the most: My dads have two modes: lovingly overinvolved and aggressively candle-scented. more, please 🙏
  11. Yes, it feels as if we are there, on the beach, on the deck, everywhere, with these characters. The prose is just a joy to read except when we are taken to feelings that are too uncomfortable. Easily my best read of the year, so far. But just how much torment still lies ahead?
  12. A breathtakingly exquisite piece of writing that camouflages the emotional and sexual torrents within.
  13. A great start @Laura S. Fox. The story looks v promising. Have to say though, if I were there it would end up as a murder mystery… or no mystery. 10 days….. of Hell. A great start!
  14. Gary L

    Troy's Revenge

    Not sure if my heart is up to it!
  15. Gary L

    "The Shed"

    My first taste of @CasualWanderer82, powerful stuff, indeed. Wow 😮
  16. Gary L

    Troy's Revenge

    A very nice turn of phrase, so as to speak!
  17. Not sure how I missed this little gem. It’s a lovely tale of the “perfect” son setting out to find himself and how he struck gold. It’s beautifully written, of course, and well worth a read. its put a smile on my face and brought some memories back. Well done 👍
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  18. And not only his…..
  19. Gary L

    Amiens

    Exactly, @PrivateTim. Well put. many happy returns, @Mark Arbour. May you have a great year ahead..
  20. Gary L

    Amiens

    Hope you didn’t get indigestion rushing your food. Bad table manners are not acceptable to the Granger family! I passed on breakfast to read…
  21. Methinks @Summerabbacat is spot on!
  22. Gary L

    Chapter 5 of 10

    Is it “this” generation that is the problem or their parents for zero supervision?
  23. Ok, have you ever published a detective mystery story? You are such a tease! and I have to disconnect as it’s pretty late in Europe. 😣
  24. Now then, @Thirdly, are you playing with us, or saying definitely that its not you? 🤨
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