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  1. GanymedeRex

    Chapter 10

    I like the three of them in bed. It makes me feel good to think about it...
  2. GanymedeRex

    Chapter 9

    This is a fantastic chapter. It moves well and further develops the characters. You are growing quickly as an author.
  3. GanymedeRex

    Harmony

    This was a really nice chapter. To be honest, I think Kyle is boring.
  4. GanymedeRex

    Chapter 2

    double extra long cliffhanger...... . . . . .
  5. I'm enjoying this, but at the pace of new chapters, I had forgotten the original story. I ended up re-reading the whole thing over the last two days. Can't go through that again.
  6. I was in Ryan's situation once and literally had no idea. So this isn't that unrealistic.
  7. I'm reading this a second time cause I lost track w/ recent updates. This was a perfect place to end! that "one more chapter" is now 30! Reading on.....
  8. GanymedeRex

    Chapter 6

    best written chapter so far. im getting into this story
  9. I think it can work , but it rarely does in actuality. I'm married to a wonderful wife. She knows about me and would probably let me go have fun with a dude, but to me, my family and her are more important. My desire for family stability is greater than my (majority) sexual desires. Part of being grown up is sacrifice. For me its worth it. As a kid, its different - then I'd tap everything in sight!
  10. I'm enjoying the story but have a question for people. Overnight, our Prince and Victor 'went 4 rounds'. Are people happy or impressed that the pairs in these stories have repeated sex a high number of times? I never take it seriously myself and don't think it really does anything for the story. I guess you could say that Vampires are sexually voracious.
  11. GanymedeRex

    Perfect

    Kyle is right about today's music. Going straight to anal in high school is not cool. Our protagonist better watch out.
  12. Enjoyable interaction and great setup for public trouble
  13. GanymedeRex

    Chapter 5

    Nice. The extra detail made a difference.
  14. I really doubt much bullying is going to be happening at the end of senior year. Kids are happy and thinking about leaving. Otherwise, I'm really enjoying this.
  15. I like these fellas and am pleased they are becoming friends. It takes talent to set something like that up.
  16. GanymedeRex

    Chapter 3

    This is on the right track in a couple places. I liked the discussion with the grandfather and the apartment. The part of the car seemed a little too good to be true, kind of like getting a bunch of Christmas presents. I did enjoy reading more, especially with a bit more detail.
  17. GanymedeRex

    Chapter 1

    this is really different. there are some unique and appreciated elements about the various races. refreshing
  18. GanymedeRex

    Chapter 1

    This chapter was rather confusing (I've read all the Riding Lessons) and felt there was a lot of information being thrown my way. The ending made, darn it, made me want to find out what happened, though.
  19. GanymedeRex

    Chapter 1

    Nice start to what I think will be a wonderful story. Finn is the most likable character. I'm definitely interested to see what happens with Cam and Rory. The donger at the end was a nice way to finish the Chapter.
  20. GanymedeRex

    Honesty

    I think Danny is just having a hard time accepting himself and I guess this is pretty common. Your theory that he cannot feel love is a possible explanation, though I don't think that is what bisexual means. It seems to me that he loves Jake both as a friend and otherwise. Sometimes it is hard to accept otherwise. There are lots of people to have lots of recreational sex who still fall in love romantically, but only to one or a few people in their lifetime. Although not reflected in GA posted stories, I posit that such lifestyles are as or even more common in the gay world than not.
  21. Interesting. The tags already let people know what's in a story.
  22. GanymedeRex

    Chapter 22

    Nice. We finally learn about the aliens and get some good action. But wait, aren't cat aliens supposed to be hot chicks that come to earth and live with a 15 year old boy who needs some action? That is a common anime trope, for example: https://www.funimation.com/shop/home-video/cat-planet-cuties-complete-series-essentials-bd-blr-005a30/
  23. The chapters on GayAuthors often has content trigger warnings. You've seen them. "This chapter contains coarse language", "sexual abuse", "violence", etc.... Personally, I don't like Trigger Warnings. The limited scientific research on this topic indicates that such warnings either have no practical effect or are mildly harmful. Rather than just complain about them, I'm wondering what other people on this community think about them.
  24. GanymedeRex

    Honesty

    It's all cool. These experiences are how young people learn - this is often through mistakes.
  25. GanymedeRex

    Chapter 2

    I'm enjoying this. Would like to see 2,000+ word chapters, though. I'd spend a little more time with the characters, perhaps exploring their thoughts or have them engage in dialogue.
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