Jkeeletupelo

And to think, I very nearly called you a motherfucker after that last one....I like the story - both the premise and the pace - thank you for sharing!

Holy shit! I just read all 3 chapters, and I was laughing so hard I was wheezing...my roommate thought I was having some sort of attack!! Good stuff, sir. Good stuff!!

Both of my grandmother's were lost to Alzheimers and dementia - it was a horrible ordeal for my mother's mother, who had been an English teacher all her life. Watching her lose her language, and the ability to form words was probably the most difficult thing I have ever witnessed. I loved this story, for its accurate portrayal of this devastating disease. That you, Dudette. Just, thank you.

I am absolutely in love with this story! The little flashbacks and background pieces for both men, the supporting characters, and Arya, of course - more please!!

Ok, I'll admit it. I don't comment or post feedback nearly as.often as I should, given the talent and creativity of the authors here. Having said that, I would like to say, that 11 chapters in, I am totally in love with this story. I've read those chapters over the course of about three hours, and if it wasn't so late here, is probably keep going. You've given us a lovely tale, full of hope and laughter, and the promise of so much more. Thank you for sharing it with us!!

I liked this chapter - frankly, it was time for Chronos to do some esplainin'! I can't wait for more, as always!

I only had a few personal interactions with Comsie, way back in the way back, when God was a kid, dirt was rocks and dinosaurs roamed the earth. I was struggling with the weight of my childhood, and all of my issues and baggage, and he was very kind. He helped me a great deal more than he ever knew. Even though it has been several years since we have corresponded, he will be remembered fondly and missed fiercely.

I am loving this story! I'm re-reading a bunch of favorites right now, and after The Luckiest Man in the World, I realized I had never started this one - it is destined to be a classic! Thank you!

I've been slacking on commenting, and for that I apologize! Every chapter gives me more and more reason to stick around!! Down the rabbit hole we go!!

Not sure if this is appropriate here or not, but I hate most other social media and I have to vent because I feel incredibly likely to do something stupid otherwise. I have spoken publicly about this several times on this site over the years, so here goes. I started using hard drugs at age thirteen. That's right. Thirteen. And I've never really stopped. I've switched my DOC from one thing to another, and I've had bouts of sobriety, but I have never stopped completely. Cocaine and heroin each killed me twice before I finally walked away (2006 and 2009 respectively), but this last one. This last hurdle to jump or whatever metaphor you want to use, is fucking killing me for trying to quit. I've been in bed for two weeks, unable to eat, unable to really sleep, with a laundry list of symptoms that I know are really just one thing - my body trying to detox from years of daily meth use. Until very recently I have had a good job, had no problems paying all my bill and for my dope, and there has been no problem. When I decided I'd had enough, though, everything fell apart. My body rebelled against me in ways I never thought possible. My entire life fell apart of the course of six months. Literally, six months. And here I am, at 6:40 am on a shitty, rainy Saturday morning, unable to sleep, because my brain has decided it wants to get high. And it's the last thing in the world I want to do. I'd literally rather die than smoke this bowl, or do this shit or whatever form this insidious little beast takes. But I don't know if I'm strong enough. And all of the people id normally reach out to have died. I know this site is mostly meant for teens, so maybe the admins can find a place to put it where it will make a difference. Kids, if you are experimenting with drugs, STOP. if you're already using regularly, STOP NOW. Don't wake up one morning and be forty six, and unable to see how to make it through one more painful fucking day. Anyway. I hope my struggle helps someone. I'll let you know how it goes. JK

I'm guilty of this. I'll react and follow from the main story page, but I tend to only comment on chapters. .. I'll try to do better.

I am so completely wrapped up in this story!! I can't wait for the next one - and I love the unique approach to shifters and magic you've taken. It's very definitely more European than American, and I find it very refreshing.

You're getting too good at the cliffies!! Great chapter and we get even further into the mystery!! I'm completely hooked - more please!

Excellent chapter!!! I can't wait for more!

Well, there are a few things unraveling here! Another good installment - can't wait for more!!

Ok, I've waited until the end of what was published to comment, and I'll say, im impressed. I like the air of mystery you've built up to this point, and I love the characters we've been introduced to so far. I'm very curious about what is yet to come, and I'm also wondering just who exactly Clara and Beatrice are in the grand scheme of things.

A brilliant finish!! It was perfect. Thank you!!

I can't believe it's over, but what a perfect ending. That you have given years of your life to this project just shows us how much the characters demanded to be heard, taken seriously and presented properly. Everything in its own perfect time and place. I've read everything you've posted here, and I've been with this site a long, long time - this is my third account, because I lost devices and passwords and had a could of long gaps. Anyway, in all of this time, you are among the top of the authors I've had the privilege to read here, in pretty much every way possible, and I love you for it. Thank you so much for sharing so much of your life and yourself with us.

It is always a great and welcome treat to see the notification oop up that there is a new chapter available. I love this story!!

That. Was. Perfect. This, is Alf!! (For absolutely no reason!)

I can very well imagine myself having that same conversation with some super chipper, gung-ho HR person. And one of us not surviving it!!

That was incredibly beautiful. Thank you.

Another excellent chapter! The boys sure are busy these days! It's great to see everyone rally around them, and to bring a whole new set of friends into the picture with Harry, Janice and now Peter. More, please

I fuckin love that Caleb got his HEA. I can't wait to see what the rest of the crew is up to...

I love it. I'm super curious to see what the epilogues wrap up, but it was a good ending!