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    Here We Go Again

    Things need to be wrapped up! And definitely Duane and Greyson need to be fixed.
  2. Great story, but It would be nice to have things cleared as they are dragging out at this point.
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    Epilogue

    Finally reading all the preceding parts in this incredible saga. Amazing. In so many ways.
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    Weekend Puzzles

    Wonderful story with thoughtfully realized characters and situations. There is hope for us “old men!”
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    Epilogue

    Yes, some more please!
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    Strength Of Faith

    The best dragon story ever. Characters, pacing, use of language and above all editing. All brilliant. Sorry it took me this long to find it.
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    Cliff’s Pendant

    As a 47 year resident of the Village and Soho, I agree the detail is incredible, but not as overwhelming as it can be your other stories (which I read avidly. Billionaire Boy is my favorite all out geek-nerd.) And I appreciate the inclusion of historical context as well. Especially as having experienced a near half-century here in NYC, still living to remember and talk about it humbles me.
  8. Perhaps a more difficult passing of sorts. Your expression of loss is sadly beautiful.
  9. Gary, beautiful. When did he pass?
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    Chapter 8

    Both have their own internal demons. It will be an insightful journey Don’t we all. Though the journey is not always insightful for many.
  11. Fine? Hmmm.
  12. Looking forward to how Mitch will handle this with the boys and Will. Those two need to be together!
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    Chapter 49

    Damn. Your writing is only getting better. Beautiful chapter, an interlude that gives much depth to your characters. And the story.
  14. So true. In sickness and in health, ‘til death do us part. And so hope they both come to this realization.
  15. So fantastical, yet so relatable. Thank you for this ongoing wonder of escapism. Indeed, a 7 ft. white-haired, blue-eyed hunk with an orange tabby on his shoulder (his familiar perhaps?). It doesn’t get much better than this.
  16. The next book indeed. Bernie’s transformation— can’t wait. Awesome story.
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    The Condemned

    Beautiful scenes between Karhu and Bernie, and Bernie and Joe. Can’t wait for the upcoming battle.
  18. I agree with Ivor about trying to be original. While it is not my style to paraphrase or over analyze what the author has written, I will comment on how wonderfully original and refreshing your story is. Gay cowboys, and now Mitch and Will, make this a delightful and anticipated read. Thank you.
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    Fifteen

    Very difficult to read. I do hope you have a satisfactory resolution soon.
  20. Simply wow! Beautifuly done. Thank you for incredible story.
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    Chapter 31

    I agree. His behavior and lack of balls is becoming tedious.
  22. I think my favorite part of this story is that Noah talks with the animals. This bit of whimsy makes your story even more endearing.
  23. re2

    Chapter 1

    Beautifully written. Look forward to following this story.
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    Chapter 54

    Whoa, really jumpy chapter and hard to follow trying to make sense of the jumbled narrative. For example: On the way to the cafeteria we picked up a tail, ‘Hi, how was the trip.” “Very interesting, I’ll tell you about it later over coffee. Oh, that mural is something else. It is beyond my wildest dreams, that man is in the wrong job. Let’s check the kitchen.” Who was the tail? I guess the painting of the wall is the mural, but it didn’t seem he went to see the room and, commenting on it the way to the cafeteria made it more confusing.
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    Chapter 14

    You are certainly bringing it all home — so much of what many of us have lived through and experienced in the last several decades. Good and bad. I called my father, the retired career Marine, the day “Don’t ask, don’t tell” was repealed and thanked him for always being supportive of me. I saw the first plane crash into the Twin Towers and the resulting sparkle around the top of the building as sheaves of paper were drawn out by the blast and reflected the brilliant morning light. You’ve have indeed touched a few nerves. Thank you for such an incredible series of stories.
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