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Okay my thoughts are going to be all over the place....sort of like River. Must keep it together for mom. Must keep it together for Alec, for August. For Lukas and Cameron. If they saw me slip, they’d be uncomfortable. Or worse, concerned. River doesn't seem to think he's allowed to have issues of his own. Not sure how sincere River was about visiting his Mom but I guess Alec having to go Iowa made that decision for him.odd thing to say but Alec's Mom illness was good timing for River. Are you going to writing a scene where River's Mom and Kenji meet? I would pay to see that An NDA? You only do that if you have something to hide.Kenji must be some well known mover and shaker in his circle. giggled quietly to myself as I bemoaned the stupid movie and book series boasting all the variants of the most boring color. Sounds like you were avoiding mentioning the name of the movie.Afraid of a lawsuit😄

Wanky things??🤔 I'm not sure you should explain

Deja vu?

I'm leaning toward it has to be a scam. How could the alleged kidnappers possibly know of Margaret POSSIBLE connection to Joe? The only explanation that it isn't a scam would be if Margaret has a friend who she tells everything to and that so called friend set this up with others.

I struggled to leave a love or tear reaction to that comment I bet this incredible story is that much better using the method you did

Ever thought of going into politics?

Any reason why you didn't give him a name? He mentioned west coast and gay friendly so you think of San Francisco I bet he had no idea how expensive it is to live in San Francisco the dorm was a break for him in more ways then one.Speaking of that to me it sounds like requiring freshman to live in the dorm could be legally challenged if someone can afford to live off campus they should be able to. I totally mean this this was a lot like a Comicality story the only difference being Comsie usually used high school kids. I think if Comsie wrote this he would be proud of it

"That’d be a good title for a song." Did Rocky realize what he was saying? Perhaps Boris was a Stones fan

Sort of a possible cliffy there at the end. I can't imagine it it would be anything innocuous @Bill W had a reason to do this but what?🤔 I wonder if it was in the back of Devin's mind that he might have to bite and hold on to an arm of one of the men. I only mentioned this because perhaps a pit bull would have been better but a pit bull might have gotten a different reaction from the men

Bradley couldn't get any info on the missing FBI agent? Sounds like classic government cover-up.Will the higher ups be curious why Bradley was looking him up? that could lead to yet another can of worms A lot of bizarre dialog and conversations in this chapter. What everyone seems to be missing or not asking is Mother and M being Aliens and all why is everybody assuming M needed to have sexual relations to get pregnant? It could have happened any number of ways @mastershakeme could come up with.

We had plenty of clues this was going to happen in previous dialog. Since M is an alien the rules about how he could have a baby while using a boys body would be totally different. As far as the delivery goes there would have to be a totally different way that it gets done. Thinking back to previous conversations the baby might be part of M's "human experience" I have to believe Mother is smart enough to know that they can't have The Doctor talking about this to anybody. I would think they don't want anybody to know where they are from and of their presence

I wonder if Connor said during sex "Who's your Daddy?" Little did he know

When has it ever been in this story?🤔

Only 7,988 words piece of cake🥱 Seriously you said the last chapter was the shortest did you cut this one in half by any chance? Well I really thought they were going to California. If they are really going back to South Dakota the agent will think to look there. We find out Michael was presumed dead a year ago so it would figure thats when Mother and M took the body so there some time between that and when Connor found M.What was M doing all that time?

I would think it is pretty basic to dress a certain way when you are in court Calvin doesn't even understand that simple part.Having said that there are a lot of defendants no matter how well they are dressed they are still slime. I can see this coming down to Billy calling Bryan and Caleb to testify

Okay Connor is going to have the tracker removed but he has to be unconscious? This leads me to think M is actually going to be the one to do this.Is there a Mother? Well it looks like Greg is going to be dealt with hopefully Julie files for divorce meaning Connor and M can go to California without being tracked at least for awhile and Connor won't have to worry about the rest of the family. BTW perhaps the MIB is the one who is making M sick.

Only 11,819 words? Must have been feeing Ill that day I guess. Have to get that in there now I'll read the chapter

The show 60 Minutes did a story on people who did this and they regretted this.One person had such a bad experience with a person trying to contact him like Margaret is doing with Ken that he said the only way he would let anybody else contact him is in a case that the person needs medical history info otherwise NO CONTACT. In this case since there is a abduction I'm thinking its a enemy of Ken who did it

The Russian crime interests I have to think is still an issue otherwise there really isn't a story here🤔

I get the feeling Bass speedo would make an adequate blanket for my bed

As unthinkable as this sounds I think it's time for Connor to come clean to the family (Such as they are) and even Marcus about the alien stuff because all the s__h thats happening is starting to get impossible to explain away. As crazy as telling the truth is it's more crazy to say nothing. I hope someone had the presence of mind to take a cell picture of Julie's face. Greg has to be dealt with in some way

What you're describing is what would be called Heaven. For as smart as the human species is it seen they (We) are incapable or it.I so want to be wrong

Why didn't you have the shot of the pink hair to go with it🤔

Kudos to what you are doing we need more people like you. This also shows how well this story was written when it got the reaction a person of your experience got

We are finding out things .I know IHTT was focused on Alec but we had no indication in that story that River had any of the anger problems he described.And the way he found Alec if something like that happened now I wonder how Finn would handle that.It sounds like Finn would need to have more knowledge of Alec many conditions to be able to do the right thing. And it since we know River and Kenji's relationship progressed Kenji might have to do the same. So far the seeing if they are compatible part of their relationship is very unconventional to say the least but thats appropriate because unconventional is River's middle name