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    Speaking

    Elias is an awesome kid and I think he would have supported Rayne under any circumstance but although nothing has been said yet I suspect Elias and Rayne are going to be more then friends Speaking of more then friends about Bailey and Harlan unlike the other readers who read this as it was posted I know there is going to be another story in the series I see that there are only 7 chapters left in this one is that enough time for Harlan to tell Bailey about his past and how he deals with it?Or will this come up in a future story? I don't see Corbin making an appearance in this one.
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    Chapter 23

    As Caleb proved better to be pissed off then pissed on
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    Chapter 23

    Talk about a stupid question he's part of the korner krew what do you think?
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    Chapter 23

    Maybe to them the sun WAS up in the middle of the night. Who knows what they were under the influence of
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    Chapter 23

    Nothing I ever done...sucessfully
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    Chapter 23

    What's the matter with you? It's @kbois job to talk smack about the editing team. Speaking of where's @Danilo Syrtis?
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    Chapter 23

    SHE doesn't even know where the voices in her head will take her
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    Chapter 23

    I thought I would say this separately.Once Huntington's men destroyed Mikey kitchen they were dead meat.You don't F with Mikey's kitchen and get away with it.
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    Chapter 23

    OK indulge me perhaps my thick skull hasn't got it yet.You said some major character was going to perish am I to assume it was Reilly and the caveat was that you didn't say he wasn't going to be healed by Asa? Or is this still to happen? Yeah I would loved to see Elijah be the one to kill Huntington but he did get to F with him and got Huntington pissed off which helped lead to his demise
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    Chapter 23

    I have to agree you are absolutely right❤️
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    Chapter 23

    Hey I resent that.....Because you're right
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    Chapter 23

    Hi everybody👋 A hush blanketed the forest surrounding them See I read the first sentence now I can truly say back to the story
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    The Devil

    The one flaw I see in Harlan referring himself as the devil is that preacher can rationalize that the devil doesn't want him to preach against homosexuality so that proves to himself he's right. The preacher is really closer to devil here his actions and the results from it would make the devil grin
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    The Devil

    If it was that it would have cost the congregation less than 22 thousand dollars
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    Chapter 22

    I guess you shouldn't fart around Enya then
  16. I don't know how it is in the state they live in but in California if the house stayed in Dominic name there would be a lower property tax. I'm really surprised the Doctor asked Dominic if he wanted to have sex with Dylan I guess you did research on what kind of questions they ask children. Sounds like Jessica was trying to sabatoge Dylan and Dominic relationship. I want Dylan to have BF but I could see Jessica using that to try to get Dominic
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    Hope

    We see the difference when Harlan thinks through what need to be done like he does on his duties for The Don as opposed to when he just reacts like he did with Bailey in the former way he's smart in the ladder way he's an idiot
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    Chapter 1

    I'm curious if the clones of Collosia lack something the original Collosians had.So far the best way to describe the Collosians would be Vulcans with sexual desires This could go so many directions.A couple of thought were the spacecraft problems caused by The Collosians because they were afraid of them being a threat?Will the Saturians send some kind of rescue party?
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    Entry 32

    It seems like Ross made the first move with the hand gesture so is it Adam's move now?
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    Chapter 22

    So I guess Scope or Listerene won't work
  21. Lacey's sister but that's from another story. I suppose Adam's grandparents could qualify
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    A Treasure Lost

    Great song thank you. It will be interesting to see how Harlan fixes this colossal f-up.This might not be part of the story but what I would like to see is Harlan discovers some experimental surgery that might help Bailey and contact a certain Don who might be able to help.
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    A Treasure Lost

    That would make sense there are similarities between Rayne and Huck and Harlan and Gary
  24. Poor Adam. When you wrote "Another Psycho Visit" that can be taken two ways .I hope it means another visit to the Psychologist NOT that a Psycho has visited them. It would suck if Dr Wayne suggests that Rosa can't be around Adam
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    Chapter 22

    YOU!!!!! said that
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