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And this is different how?

Instead of saying it that way say "Sometime on Dec 13 2023...as long as it's still Dec.13 2023 somewhere on earth"

If there really was a butt-fuck Montana I bet a lot of people would go there.Oh and

Elijah’s hands waved about like an Italian mama on a verbal rampage. I liked that line but you should have said Tyler he's the one with the Italian heritage.(None of your Beta readers and Editors caught that one huh?)

I have a couple of thoughts on that can they create a weapon that can simulate the same thing Enya can do? Can Elijah shift into a elemental shifter and give Enya a hand?

What I'm not in the top 5 and you think I pulled a gnomie??? ......Hey where's my phone🤔?

Gee I think that was a.......Rash statement

Welcome back

Bad timing messes up Adam's plans....so what else is new?.

I usually have a guess (usually wrong) about what may happen in the next chapter but I have no idea what Diego found to get such a reaction. And how it could complicate the case. I do have one thought while I was typing this(probably wrong) Was Billy's Father Mob connected?

Clever move with the coins. Armand left Paris without speaking to Christian. It's good to see that all the boys who are old enough are going to be married before Armand and Colin make thier final stop

Like everyone else I was touched by the Elias story.Who is this Danny a step-father? older brother? On one hand I'm interested in his story on the other hand I shudder to hear the details.Did Elias approach Orson because he said he was asexual?

If you happen to be fan of author @CLJobe then you would swear he wrote this Christmas story but he didn't. It has all the things you want in a feel good Christmas story you won't be disappointed,.

Hope to see more of these guys in the future perhaps

I see you used @CLJobe technique you used Tom's Grandmother I'm a similar way that he used GG this had the feel of one of his stories sprinkled in with your own unique take. The one that I was thinking was perhaps this really is his half brother that would have worked also. But I'm glad it turned out this way. Great story

You covered everything really well .All this took me back to when I was doing many of these same things when my Mom passed

The author has said this isn't your typical Christmas story and he is so right. I wish I was eloquent enough to describe this story without giving something big away.I'm afraid if I do I'll ruin the story before you read it but I will say this much this is a MUST!,MUST!!!!! read

Oh my what a tear jerker. I would not be surprised if a young child in a similar situation to Eric's has done something like Eric did leaving the book and note for Gavin and Danny to find. When you know your time is limited and Death could come at any time I think it gives a child a perspective beyond their age. I have seen video of kids who are patients of St .Jude and they all give me that impression.if you have limited resources and can only give sparingly to a cause make it St. Jude. Well done sir.

I just noticed We haven't seen a comment from @Howzat for about 2 chapters I hope he is all right🤞

You know something I beg to differ on That saying about doing the same thing and expecting a different result gets used a lot in politics.I know of examples where the same thing was done with different results but I won't be going there I'l give an non political example instead. Say you have an NFL team with the number one passing attack playing a team with the worst pass defense and they light them up for 50 points the next time they play. the team that won would likely do the same thing.But what if it was wet and very windy then doing the same thing WOULD have a different result.Now Asa and Caleb would be doing the same thing but with different conditions they know the layout of the place now and Asa when he escaped may have not only seen the monsters but also in his memory in might have seen some of the traps Huntington set so if he concentrates he might be able to identify them. This would be tried in different conditions, Having said all that I do think this is too risky but this is @kbois idea so I'm on board with it.

That was a great gesture Armand and Colin did for the three old men although tinged with little sadness with Armand saying they won't be coming here anymore. I guess next will be some kind of confrontation with Christian

Do they actually have an idea what was happening and why when that snow and ice started on the kitchen floor and counters.?

This didn't happen of course But I though of something If Judge Ridge overheard any of what happened between Mrs Linden and Jeremy could she have done something? I hope Jenny Perch or Mr.Garrett get a sudden promotion at CPS. I'm sure Prescott heard about the phone calls(Although I can picture her co-workers "forgetting" to mention that to her)

I'm about to read the next chapter and I think you're right.

First there's a beta reader @Danilo Syrtis who hardly ever gives good advice and now there's an editor who's an idiot @Mrsgnomie what's the common thread here🤔.........OH YEAH @kbois has them working for her.