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Chapter 161 The Eagle Has Landed
weinerdog commented on Dodger's story chapter in Chapter 161 The Eagle Has Landed
While it is NOT Robbie's fault for the separation you can argue his presence accelerated the inevitable. Don's reaction to Robbie being gay and the heavy handed action just exposed who he is.It would have eventually happened anyway even without Robbie there Sue would have saw Don prejudice reaction to Daniel Asian GF among other things. That Robbie has never seen a statement involving his account sends a possible red flag.I know Don can't legally touch Robbies money but it doesn't mean he can't mismanage it.- 26 comments
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I didn't remember that but cool that I didn't I got to enjoy it again It's just like @drpaladinsaid sometimes it's in front of us this whole time but I'll give these two a pass because with gay people it can be a matter of not revealing yourself. Does Jason play guitar or any other rock and roll instrument? I ask because maybe Goofyfoot can become a member of the band Swicthfoot
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Really? What would happen to you if you do say?
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I agree with @kbois then about being one of the best rock voices of all time
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One line you wrote was so true because it happened to me. "He opened his dad’s office, expecting to see his dad, but he wasn’t there." My Dad died when I was between 4-5 years old my Mom and I used to visit the office building he worked at a lot. One time after he passed we went back to the office building I didn't put 2+2 together but she was there to clear out his desk. I recognize the office workspace immediately and when Mom started to open the door to his office I honestly thought I was going to see my dad.When Ronnie experienced the same thing all this came back to me.
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I knew the first three like Dan did but the forth one has me stumped. Will you reveal it if no one gets it? if not I WILL google it
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You mean it wasn't you he was writing about?(Be honest readers you had the same thought for a moment)
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We got to know everybody a little better it's a cool group Snark is aptly named. I think saying "Giant ass" is better then saying "Backside of a fat lady" you might say that within earshot of a fat lady
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And there you go my statement was right
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He has a lot of time to think these up.He must be a couch potato (I probably shouldn't have done that puns get progressively worse when you try to answer them)
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Unlike the last chapter even this dork can figure out what you were writing about. As far as your question"Is there another object out there who bears such a weight on Earth?" I would say lets table that discussion......I'm ducking from all the things being thrown at me
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Then this is the story I was thinking of. If I remember right it was part of a story challenge where authors had to write a story based on a picture and in this picture the kid was wearing flame printed socks like this story mentioned.So much for my good memory.😄 I don't remember everything so I can comment without messing it up for other readers.But what I do remember is it was a good story and I enjoyed it so you readers who haven't read it yet keep reading
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There's something about skateboarders and they don't seem too much different now then when I was in high school. I briefly thought this was another skateboard theme story you did in the past. I wonder if you're aware of of this you had a story in the past where some of it was set in the city I live in Imperial Beach Ca. Did you know in 2005 there was a skateboarding movie shot there called Lords Of Dogtown and I.B. was chosen because it looked like Venice Ca. looked liked 20+ years ago and thats where the movie was suppose to be set. I digress it will be interesting to see where this goes. I will say Ray seems to be a little a-holeish
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They pulled out all the stops for the new orphanage all the rooms have their own bathroom that's hugh.And the game room wow. As mentioned before this is a different time so pinball machines. Are they still around ? Will James be in the new house?
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Then move in with me and let me do the cooking you'll never smoke again
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I Was way off because I'm not a smoker and a pack of smokes was the last thing I was thinking of .I guess that's a good thing. People who were and are smarter then I could ever hope to be were and are smokers. Go figure.
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Speaking for myself and I suspect all the readers take your time the author has to be satisfied with it first right?We'll be here when you find it. If you have problem with how to end a chapter just have Cindy fall in mud and get totally dirty the readers would love the chapter regardless of how the rest of it was😆
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My best guess of my very limited intelligence(in fact spell check corrected that word)is you're writing in a metaphorical way.I'm probably way off but I'm thinking of you growing up in a house with a lot of siblings and then they leave one by one until it'd your turn to leave home. If I'm way off I'm sure somebody will tell me. Your synopsis said "tales with object you interact with regularly"....you're not calling @kbois an object are you? (kidding)
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The new orphanage is ready to go.It will be interesting to see how things will be run.While I'm sure there are some state laws and regulations they have to follow will Pat have more say of how to do things?Will Armand and Colin have any say?
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The Wharf sounds like a great place and Grandfather moving his boat there was awesome. As eventful as that trip was it is going to be more eventful going home and seeing all the changes
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Even without reading it before I knew Nurse Dorothy was somehow connected to Dion.That patient Lillian was a real crack up. There are still a lot of details I don't remember. Deon acting like a regular kid with Harry but being quiet around James tells me it may be shyness as opposed to hostility perhaps the kind of shyness you have if you have a crush on someone. Congrats on Finding Good Trouble being featured it's a worthy story
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I have never seen so much stuff going on in a vacation especially that project. So they were serious about having geese and goats whoa.
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Thick headed me didn't realize a new chapter 129 was put in place of the duplicate and I'm betting some other readers are not aware of it yet so I'll mention @drsawzall @JohnnyCand @chris191070 so they'll check out what I said about them and then see the new chapter. Well I'm glad Grandfather's tuna obsession is over. They are making good progress
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Double post my bad
