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“When I get my inheritance, you all can go to hell.” OMG!!! I don't think there has ever been a more arrogant comment in any one of your stories. Tim later mentioned "Later that evening, after our shower, lying in bed, I told Stephen about my argument with Ann Marie. I hadn’t mentioned it to Mom, and I don’t intend to tell her." I think that's exactly what his Mom needs to hear I don't think she fully gets it yet.
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Oh I'll bet you she'll talk to him after she finds out
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The kind of set up Tim is doing for AM is what her husband would have done since he had to know her crazy spending.What was that marriage about?I don't think he loved her. I bet AM in high school was one of those girls who were part of the "popular crowd" but in reality was a spoiled b---h
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Chapter 4 - Unreachable
weinerdog commented on Arch Hunter's story chapter in Chapter 4 - Unreachable
Kevin read there are no wolves in these parts I'm guessing that is a clue.Was that howling from Owen? From boners touching the night before to Kevin choosing to spoon Ian? Not exactly subtle -
A lot involved in moving to New York city what happens if it turns out J.J. doesn't like his new position? Gonzales-Jefferies enterprises.I don't think there is going to be a problem but now wouldn't Henry now have to sign off on the proposed partnership J.J would have with Greg and Billy?Greg J.J.'s first BF.. again I don't see a problem but you never know.
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So Tim has come to the conclusion AM doesn't like him because of his orientation AM also doesn't speak to Eva is that because she's close to Tim? Did Eva tell John this?It would explain why John asked AM such a pointed question
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Interesting first chapter that cover story picture is that the picture Evan's dad was referring to at the beginning of the chapter? It's only been one chapter and I already miss Mary Ellen. "to a fondness to bread and butter pickles and the juice straight from the jar" What's wrong with that?I have that sometimes LOL
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The way you wrote this I briefly thought Mattias was dead.No surprise He is in juvie as for if Kyle will end up there maybe for a shorter time if that detective Wheeler read Kyle's journal and realizes Kyle's involvement but based on owning money to that thug Salvatore and the people he killed was really self defense kill or be killed and I'm guessing Mattias took the brunt of the blame when he spoke to the police.Like @chris191070 mentioned Amy and Hudson seem to love Kyle like family so I can see them taking Kyle in.
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While Belle was working up to telling everybody what the Doctor said I could really feel her tension.Its so good to see that while going through this terrible ordeal Belle has such a great support system. The cats are getting along even better.
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So AM spends her money on clothes the very idea of being seen in clothes over a month old perish the thought😱She needs a serious lifestyle adjustment .Tim thinks she need to see a psychiatrist I bet she has no idea if she has insurance or not. This is only a story so I won't harp on this too much but in California $170,000 would not get you diddily let alone a farm I suppose it could be different in other states.One thing is Donnie parents are not looking the get the max amount only enough to live comfortably.Besides Donnie set the price right?
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Tim is definitely doing the right thing but I'm curious what threshold does he have to meet to declare AM legally incapable of controlling her money ?Yes you can show what a moron she is by showing how she ran thru $10,000 but it's not illegal to be stupid I guess the judge must have a lot of discretion. I loved the line" Eva said she wants to check her luggage.”
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J.J.. and Henry seem perfect for each other but I felt that way about Shaun also so while I'm optimistic for the record I'll go with🤞 A little predicting the future in this chapter is this what you think will happen or hope will happen?I won't go into much detail but I hope parts of what Henry said turns out to be right. Are they going to look up Franklin?
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Chapter 3 - Friends and Enemies
weinerdog commented on Arch Hunter's story chapter in Chapter 3 - Friends and Enemies
It was definitely out of character for Owen to do what he did. Was that wolf really random or is there a connection to characters in the previous stories? Kevin didn't say anything to Ian about laying down naked on the top of the sheets if I was Kevin I would not have said anything either I wouldn't want to discourage him from doing it again.I wonder if Kevin is thinking the same way? -
The whispered voice Tim AND Stephen heard safe to say was Donnie by letting Stephen hear him I guess Donnie approves of him. If the money is Off shore it may be hard to get to it's a classic way for the wealthy to avoid paying taxes but I don't know how it would play out here.
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Well that was sure an interesting new development.What has to happen for some kind of action has to be taken against this gang? I can see another confrontation in the future after Kasper finds out everything between West and Neil. A fight maybe what if Neil or Kasper gets seriously hurt?How does West deal then?
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Charlie is content with his new life and the only way to get him to come back is the subdue the Whale and that might mean killing it if they can so what is the plan after that if they do .Charlie would be furious do they have some kind of deprogramming in mind?
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I don't know who's worst Ann Marie or the other heirs the love of money is indeed the root of all evil. The details of this case remind of another famous case the Anna Nicole Smith case the other heirs tried to screw her in that one also.Did that case influence your writing here? After Tim wins the case(I'm sure he will) I would make it short and sweet Ana Marie you won.NOW GET OUT!!!!!!!
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You can't ignore being told in your sleep to buy a farm for a specific amount like that. Naming their Son Donald is a given but although I don't know this for sure I think you can give your child more then one middle name so how about in no particular order after Donald you have Stephen Randall Timothy as the in between names.
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sounds good to me.
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Chapter 2 - Strangers in the Night
weinerdog commented on Arch Hunter's story chapter in Chapter 2 - Strangers in the Night
Is Owens condition making him act the way he is?And the breakup might amplify things.I wonder if Owen still has the same passion for the band can he still drum well or maybe the band will dump him. I get the feeling when Ian tells another one of his scary stories it will coincide with Owen transforming -
All the readers here had adequately pointed out Ann Marie many faults lets add being a ditz as another.What part of pre in the word prenuptial did the person with the college degree not understand?
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I'm really surprised J.J. didn't know about the less than four years apart rule many states have that.Conversely I remember reading a sex offender registry online think it was Washington State the "offender"was 19 and the "victim " was 17 I kid you not . Well it looks like things are falling into place for J.J. and Henry my first reaction ...cool
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There you go you can make Jamie be like @wildone friend ane be around awhile It looks like Jamie and Robbie are good for each other. It has become apparent that Robbie's Mom withheld a lot of information.It might be good for Robbie to speak to his Uncle and maybe his Uncle could tell Robbie what his Dad said about why he never contacted Robbie it could answer some questions he has.He also has cousins who want to meet him if they are bad people then never see them again but if they are good people it never hurts to have more family who could be your allies.I'm certain there isn't another Don in that bunch.
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What an incredible chapter.From his first time being intimate(I don't remember Kyle speaking of a previous time)from that to shooting guns and killing people I use the term people loosely to describe Kyle's victims. It's a damn good thing they found Kyle's journal now the police know that there were extenuating circumstances although I can still see Mattias maybe doing a little time. Who is this guy Copeland?Salvatore spoke of him like he's his boss.My bet is he's involved in law enforcement.
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@bottomguy has an interesting though about Ann Marie coming into play at the farm like maybe Ann Marie working there to pay off the invoice? I could just see her milking a goat. @drsawzall thought about getting a lecture from Stephen Grandfather I was thinking maybe Stephen Mom might be better to talk to her she could say I acted like you until I realized I could lose my family Happy Thanks giving to the readers and The Author
