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Joey's shocked reaction at seeing Jack bruises means that Joey has to let an adult know what is happening again before it's too late. I had fever before as a kid but not with those kind hallucinations had that happened to me I would have freaked. I want to say Dean Is being irrational but his having gone thought that ordeal it's understandable why he is.The story seems to be heading toward Joey realizing he's gay how will Dean react then?

I was never bullied but I observed bullying and some of those guys can be intimidating I would be scared for the victim .You were able to convey Mike thoughts and fears very well. John Pascatorre might be a extreme example but people like him become the people who refuse to listen to reason and facts and never change.Mike was smart enough to see how his fears had affected his day to day life and how he interacted with people.When he found out Pat was the target he didn't just breathe a sigh of relief and moved on he emphasized with Pat and has gone out of his way to befriend him.Mike has learned from his experience something the John Pascatorre's of the world sadly almost never do.

I love it when readers continue to find and love this this story.Congrats on reading this and I concur with what you wrote.

All the talk from Dr. Fletcher about JJ and Henry taking exams, getting tuition reimbursements qualifying for PHD's etc. was almost as mind boggling as all the tech talk last chapter LOL. When the higher ups at Applazon sees JJ's new server designs and come to find out he trying to get PHD's at age 16 I gotta believe they will want to talk to him face to face.As @Altimexismentioned in couple of previous chapter comment they will want to look into JJ's past but may have a hard time because a lot of it is off the grid. Has JJ given any consideration on how he might answer certain questions? How forthcoming will he be or not be?

Mattias had to of known that he was going to be asked that question from Amy the second Kyle showed up unexpectedly. On one hand I don't want Mattias to get in serious trouble but it may be the best thing for Kyle to witness that. "puke a rainbow"??? That was a an interesting description

The last line of the chapter if it means what I think it might mean it explains Dean's attitude I don't want to say much more and possibly give it away. The police were already involved with Jack's Dad so he would be on a short leash they HAVE to let the right people know because he won't just stop on his own. I appreciate Maddy being a good friend but it's to the point of being a Mother hen

Are there a few lines of dialog that is missing or did I miss something?I didn't see anything TJ said that blamed Xander for what happened to Tristan.So TJ needs to be a better father that's going to be hard to do while being Mayor. Shouldn't LJ have said 'Uncle TJ" instead of Uncle Tristan?What does he call Tristan? What the doctor said about Tristan my doctor said about me.They did a Brian scan of me and they looked and looked and looked and found....NOTHING

I somehow missed the "The End" when I first read this I didn't realize it until I saw @chris191070 excellent review.I guess hanging out with Cindy sort of means he's gone full circle.Maybe sometime in the future you could do a one chapter snapshot on how they are doing. Thank for a great story

Seeing Cindy was awesome some people just have a natural chemistry. It looks like Hunter wasn't threaten by her like Dave was after Hunter's reaction the previous night I wasn't sure he wouldn't be. I know Steven is mad at the course of events but he could have introduced himself to Cindy he had to be a little curious of someone so important to Puppy.

Well it looks like all the issues are either solved or are a lot better.I'm curious to see what's next. I'm not so sure Philip needs to see Mrs. Hammond but what do I know.

So Steven has feelings for Puppy to the point of jealousy and Steven and Hunter almost went to fists over Puppy and let's not leave out Dave eavesdropping yeesh what a mess. Both Hunter and especially Steven overreacted but where's the drama in a story if people don't overreact right?

Zack not only changed in front of Andrew twice giving him an eyeful also he also asked Andrew to do the same sounds like Zack is setting the stage to do other things

Wow so much tech talk in this chapter my head hurts LOL.

Maybe they are not cursed.Maybe it's the keyboard your typing this from

I'm not sure is this the end? A good place to stop but also there are things to continue to explore. One can surmise from the planned get together at Cutters Farm that Dave has been also making progress.Only one small minor gripe I wanted Cindy to be there with them around the birthday cake.

Before I start anything else I really worry about Matt's coughing when Dexter suggested to Matt to go the free clinic Matt said "I'm not a charity case" that pride and his cough is not a good combination. Matt getting fired from that job might end up being a blessing in disguise. Short term he would have made money but few years down the road he might lose some looks and burn outs plus the possible toll on his health on the job than what? Matt has no plan what he going to do when he see the preacher most likely while a service is in progress the sperm donor and his wife will probably be there once the preacher sees Matt he will freak because he knows what Matt might reveal. I don't see any good outcome here .It looks like things are going to get even worse before they get better.

Well Joey definitely has Jack on his mind seeing his face when he tries to rub one out and thinking about putting his hand on his? Not subtle.If something starts to happen I see Dean being a problem.And the black eye Jack has I'm sure is related to him being gay.

As Danners said Neil might be trying to protect West but I also suspect Neil is trying to prevent some secret from getting out it could end up being fatal to him.

Did anybody tell you your Arnold Schwarzenegger voice is dead on perfect? At least in the chapter comments

When I first read that My first thought was does Tristan think he's above getting help from them? I figured this would be a mistake and we found out quick.Tristan knowing he's basically TJ who had two comas was a little stubborn here. Benjamin John Pierpont Morgan does that imply he's also related to the famous JP Morgan?

Two of the people Hunter was and is closest to did the same dangerous thing and Hunter wasn't there to stop it both times when you're a teen with with an already F-up situation one can see how that messes with one's head so it is no surprise Hunter did what he did. Puppy will want to help Hunter recover but he's going to also need some counseling on how to go about it.Taylor also for that matter. They didn't have internet at Greenstone? That's lame as long as they had the proper controls on it they should have it.Anybody getting out of that place will be sheltered and clueless

Wow you are full of surprises. Even as Hunter said that his twin brother that we didn't know about died doing what Puppy did I didn't see that happening you told this in a way where we totally get why Hunter acted the way he did.Now that this has happened there is no way the Hunter's home situation can remain secret and they won't just let Hunter go back to that.This can go many ways and one of them would be is Puppy's parents to take custody of him I'm not saying that will happen.In the US you are considered an adult at age 18 in the UK where I think that's where they are I have heard the age of consent is 16 are you also considered an adult at 16?

It should be interesting to hear Cindy's take on this and other things he hasn't been telling her I'm curious if she's having similar problems also? Could Puppy get in trouble for knowing about Hunter's living situation and not saying anything about it to the proper authorities? Even if the talk they will have at school goes bad it might be something he should let people know about anyway.But there are a lot of issues that come with that. I have a crazy thought the background Hunter and Dave have with their parents are not that dissimilar they may be a good match for each other

Oh my my I hope Belle is going to be OK' Coach Anders might have violated the law by not letting Whitney try out.There is a law in the U.S. called Title IV that they says they have to give her an equal opportunity.

I think (hope?) this might be the info Jo might need to deal with Don