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Chapter 151 Plain Sailing
weinerdog commented on Dodger's story chapter in Chapter 151 Plain Sailing
One other thing to dislike about Don he want wants to teach Daniel and Robbie how to sail but not Nicola?A little sexist there?Although I confess I'm not sure I'd want Nicola to control the boat. I hope Don didn't use Robbie's money to buy the boat. Don said he knows how boys talk he also should know that Robbie wouldn't fink on Daniel when it comes to him maybe having sex.Nicola is uncharacteristically naive about Don's motivation about Daniel and Ratana. I think Robbie's right it's because Ratana is Asian.If Don exposes himself on that he might lose his familie's support over that -
Confessions and Revelations
weinerdog commented on James Matthews's story chapter in Confessions and Revelations
I think there is one thing Joey and Jack sort of glossed over. Joey said Anna betrayed his trust and Jack agreed it was evil of her to do that but Jack still did his part in it wasn't it evil for him to do what he did? And he didn't quite apologize for it. Having said that if I had been presented with an opportunity like that I THINK I would have not gone through with it but I'd be lying to you if I said I wouldn't have been tempted add alcohol to the mix I shudder to think Shaun is a good friend -
Well this is an understatement from me but a lot of surprises in this chapter. Right now Puppy's folks are furious with Hunter but what are they going to do when (And I mean when) they find out about his situation? Steven and Hunter are both grounded for awhile under heavy restrictions that will lead to boredom and when you consider what happened at Jessie's house well you can Put 2+2 together I suspect there will be another intimate encounter.
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JJ getting all those certifications so quickly somebody influential at Applazon will have to notice that I bet they'll be watching him very closely. I think JJ is mistaken about having to move out sooner than expected he's made quite an impression on the family especially after what he did for Henry. JJ might need some professional help about his dreams but how does he get it without letting everybody know what happened in the past?
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That messages Joey got from the Spanish guy "I can see it in your eyes " Joey might have been unconsciously been checking him out why else would he write that? Joey said he didn't look in his eyes but that doesn't mean he didn't look at other parts of his anatomy LOL
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On one hand Kyle is right about about thinking twice about hanging with Matias but it may not make any difference Kyle owes Salvatore money and I think he's going to have trouble paying it back. In that regard it may be good to have Matias as an ally. I think I see Salvatore ordering Matias to do the same thing to Doug house though if Kyle can't pay off
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So Puppy went along with Steven's plan for him to go to the party the guy who got caught with drugs I knew this was ill fated after that.I get that Puppy was pissed off after he saw Hunter with Sam but he had to know a rubber tube and a needle wasn't a good idea . Luckily Hunter was there trying to do the right thing afterwards.I hope Puppy tells Steven everything that happened and they better come up with a good story about the marks on his neck.What a mess but I get the feeling he's going to get away with it this time since he was about to call Max before Steven called back.I usually have a thought where a story is going but at the moment I have no idea
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It certainly put a different perspective on Hunter.He made the decision to out himself so people would stop asking questions about his family you can argue that it was a smart thing to do maybe even brilliant. I am encouraged by Hunter being concerned about being to rough with Puppy Puppy could have told Steven that Hunter's parents weren't home it wouldn't have been a lie. But eventually no matter how hard Puppy tries to stay quiet about this the longer Hunter and Puppy are together it will be almost impossible to keep this secret Puppy folks will want to talk to Hunters parents on the phone or meet them. What then?
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Very good first chapter The character so far are interesting especially Mrs Grissom.Funny how it's his Dad's doing when he has more work to do but it was his Mom's idea to get joey help BTW Roman could still help a day or two. This is just one of my guesses Joey through his narration talks and thinks like a straight boy the Spanish guy not with withstanding.Based on your story synopsis I bet the Saturday boy was someone Joey did a little messing around with when they were younger something I guess Joey doesn't want to be reminded of.If I'm right is that why The Saturday Boy took this particular job?
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Was that guy who said he was Bobby's bio-dad really the one? Well too late you blew it.It's. just awesome the kids are continuing the traditions Adam started when everybody gets together there are so many kids named Adam ,Marie and even Billy you need a scorecard. I think the readers and myself have said almost everything there is to say over 170 chapters I have only one more thing to say. BRAVO!!!!!
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I don't think we'll ever get a bad story from you maybe you won't match this maybe you will but either way we'll be here for you.
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Mr. Winters definitely knows JJ isn't ordinary I wonder what he has in mind for JJ to do.It might be something where JJ does something out of the norm and it will end up getting the attention of the higher-ups
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Awesome everything turned out as it should.The only question I have is while Weatherford may not have been involved in the corruption being Sturgis deputy he had to have some idea something was hinkey and stayed silent JMO.
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Was Adam diagnosed with something or did he just know in his gut? Well whatever the reason it is just like Adam to get all the affairs in order. He touched so many people they are going to need a stadium to have his funeral
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Claire suggested pressing charges something Josh doesn't want to do but how about a restraining order?He can do that without pressing charges I guess.The main thing is for them to not cross paths.Jai could violate it of course but at least there woul be consequences.
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The Dream that won't Die
weinerdog commented on James Matthews's story chapter in The Dream that won't Die
Steve said to Puppy he has to decide who is more important in his life so what was he saying?Break up with Hunter so everything will be cool with his group of friends? That doesn't sound reasonable besides even if Puppy did break it off Dave will still be same "arsehole" -
Prologue - A Word From Puppy
weinerdog commented on James Matthews's story chapter in Prologue - A Word From Puppy
So except for moving to the new house it's pretty much status quo. I'm surprised there hasn't been a Hunter incident during that time.As far as Dave goes he might still need some counseling if he ever find someone new he might do the same stuff with that person as he die to puppy. So Puppy knows we've been following his story?That means he can read our chapter comments better watch what we say about him. -
Yep the one and the same I'm surprised Tristan doesn't know this you would think it would be something that would have been brought up by now
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When Hunter becomes invisible does his clothes become invisible also?Did the recording device become invisible also?I know shut up.I guess it's a upgraded form of invisibility.I guess they can't use the recording itself to get Sen.Caruthers so another scary plan in the works?
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That's like calling The Grand Canyon a hole
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Okay of course this is a fiction story but fiction stories do often share the same facts of the current world we live in like who the president is etc. so I guess in that respect this is an alternate world. Now I'm sure this election in New York has some connection to West,Kasper etc in Idaho It will be interesting to see how.
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I imagine all the students that were there when Adam first arrived I bet almost all of them will send their sons and daughters to the academy and college.You still haven't told us how Billy,Stephan and Anna did at the Olympics.
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Life in the Fast Lane
weinerdog commented on James Matthews's story chapter in Life in the Fast Lane
I am so glad to hear that .I'm happy Puppy seems to be in a good place.But there is plenty of stuff still to explore I think Hunter is basically a good guy who cares for Jensen My only concern is the first place Hunter takes him has a lot of people doing meth and ecstasy especially after Steven's experience Jensen has called Hunter the gay version of Steven so I hope they are not too much alike when it comes to that. Jensen hinted something about when Steven meets Cindy now that will be interesting -
That was great.Your story still said In process but I'm guessing it is complete.I'll tell you something when I was their age(Wayyyy back when)If somebody found my dog and took care of it and returned it I would love that that person ever even if we had nothing in common or no chemistry.One idea one could do is you have a couple and one character doesn't seem to know what to do until finally he makes the move and they become boyfriends then the story goes to the author and he said to himself I was stuck on this part for awhile.Very clever device thank you
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Loved the chapter. A suggestion talk to Adam if he calls Gerry's son Gerry maybe the bad guys might be able to figure that out I would think of another name
