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Forgive me if get a kid's name confused with a other.You said Patrick when in a wheel chair did Amir also go in a wheel chair ? I know he started to use crutches but in a place where you walk a lot like a zoo the can get rough. What would be a interesting conversation is after the school is up a running is one of the teacher's could talk to Brad about how it's different teaching these kids as opposed to a public school
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The school might be a fluid situation along the way they might find out it would be better to do something a certain way rather then the way they are doing it.I bet the kids will be good students because they all know the worse thing that can happen compared to what they been through school will be a blast
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We found out more background on Trent and it explains some things.The fact that Trent told Kayden about this reveals he thinks different toward Kayden than he does others.Sounds like the stuff they talked about and told each other might gradually change both of them In Kayden's case some of Trent's influence will be good some not so good. I'm very good at basic math I could multiply, divide do percentages in my head really fast but that higher math stuff I'm clueless at it always gave me a headache seeing that stuff Kayden and Trent was working on brought back flashback horrors of me trying to learn that. So that place Joanie's I clicked on that link and the inside looks a lot like a popular place we have in San Diego called The Family House.I'm guessing Joanie's has huge omelets.If it wasn't for co-vid I would probably be planning to take a trip there tomorrow.Joanie's is in Palo Alto and I'm in San Diego I couldn't order online and they would bring it to me would they?Eh I guess not LOL .
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Any thoughts that somewhere down the line they could have a fund raiser with the kids participating?A car wash is the first thing that comes to mind but I'm sure there are more creative and fun ideas.Was Patrick kidnapped from Ireland?
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How could Christine not be impressed after that tour?If she doesn't want to work there she could definitely tell some of the other nurses she works with about this.It was really heartwarming that every single kid was there to welcome Patrick
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I tend to read too much into things but I came away with two thoughts/ideas.Maybe Chistine could help Aaron at the infirmary. The second thought is if I know Brad if Aaron does a good job I could see him helping Aaron to become a Pediatrician
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Talk about a nightmare combo of people for Rick to hear about having a lunch meeting Willy and what's her name. Irene may be on to something let's call Rita what's her name. I have a thought whatever project Willy and what's her name may have maybe Rick can ruin by saying what happened between them years ago. Rick has some scheme of his own it seems.I guess he wants Jared to come to the concert to keep Marta occupied but if the point is for some alone time with Gus well Joey is still there.You notice how Mrs. Lee smiled when she heard Rick wanted to borrow her car so he could take Gus and the kids? She even told Rick to have a good time. Hmm you think Mrs. Lee has figured Rick out?
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The Dylan artwork is exceptional the Liam one is good also.So Dylan just did a awesome thing possibly saving Angela life I believe Dylan misinterpreted all the people's looks when they were staring at him.I think it was admiration.Dylan it seems still has some self esteem issues.Jake and Liam are about to fight? Maybe Elle told Jake what happened
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Wow with the new policy of police taking boys found on the street to Sanctuary the cocoons will be filled up pretty soon do they have enough space to order more cocoons and place them somewhere?
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My Mom rest her soul was In a coma the last week of her life and the Dr. and the nurses all told me she can hear us I made I had all her friends talk to her either by visiting or by speaker phone.So what Brad said about the boy in a coma hearing him was correct.Brad saying Amir's name probably got the boy to wake wake up even sooner
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This might have been covered in an earlier chapter and I forgot but they are using Zeke's landline to talk and there is no caller ID is that because a smart phone is easier to trace?I think what @Anton_Cloche said about Zeke's boss makes sense if not his boss then someone inside who can give the killer info.With Tyler purging(not good) I guess Zeke hasn't seen Tyler shirtless if he did Zeke would know how serious his health problems are.Isn't it dangerous for Tyler to take the meds and then purge?I hope Zeke doesn't come home and Find Tyler collapsed on the floor
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Man Dallas gave Trey a lot of openings but I can't really criticize Trey for not acting on it Im thinking I would be too shy to react also.One thing I WOULD have tried when Trey was trying to get Dallas to Identify the boys he thinks are hot Trey said"Awwwww, you're no fun."And Dallas replied "I'd be a LOT of fun if I could get one of them to call me up.Hehehe!"At that point I would have said "What's your number?" If that didn't get the response I be hoping for then I could play it off as a joke.But that's weird me I guess.
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If they are going to take a picture of the kid does that mean he regained consciousness? Based on the last comment of the chapter it looks like the investigation has lead to a big time public figure like a mayor or senator.I know wait for the next chapter .Good cliffhanger
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Okay I'm a bit confused(yeah I know since when am I not confused)Near the beginning of the chapter Tony said the elevator was tested yesterday and is operational but near the end of the chapter Brad asked when will the elevator be ready and was told another three weeks so those two statements seem to contradict what am I missing?Also when Brad says Partner to Tony does he mean partner in Sanctuary or domestic partner?Loving the story
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What the hell is wrong with Stephanie ?Why is she going"Eww, Eww,Eww"?If Shane looks as good as Deme thinks he does and I came across Shane naked except for a towel I would think I hit the jackpot.Good chapter
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The lengths the bad guys are going to ,To try and eliminate the boy this must lead to somebody really powerful and well known.The way the boys went to hug Brad it is like they fully realized that the boy in the hospital could have easily been them.
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What I don't get is the kid needed medical attention and way it was described the hospital didn't do anything because they could not find next of Kin. Surely they could have done something he could have died in the bed while doing this BS administrative stuff.And even after they spoke to the judge there was no communication with the staff the nurse Brad encountered was clueless. I hope there are not too many hospitals like that.BTW as an aside hospitals at this moment are at full capacity because of Co-vid which means cases like this may not get adequate care because hospitals are overwhelmed.
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I was thinking the same thing @Wesley8890 was thinking.Through all these comas and alternate universes in previous stories I lost track maybe Dylan and Sebastian are alive again.BTW Happy New Year I hope your shoulder is getting better
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So what?There are more then enough nuts in this story
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Besides that if he gets Purina then it would be less for Sandy .No way!!
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Because of Murray and O'Shea other members of the force will do their best to have Sanctuary's back they got another life long fan of that one policeman who watches out for those two kids and when you add Brad's dad being the judge then word should get around among the bad guys to steer clear of this place.It doesn't mean of course that there still may be somebody to try to cause trouble.So glad the kids were able to enjoy the show.Don't forget about the kid who has to meet his Dad one half hour after the show.
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Danny thought he was going to be punished for hurting himself?Make you shudder to think where he came from.Brad left Corky at his home he got him a ticket right?
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Something @Chris L said made think of something.Most if not all the kids are there voluntarily so they can go out an do stuff during the day if they want.If something should happen to them outside of Sanctuary is Brad liable for anything?Something else I never considered In my many years I've never seen a Bus Wash although its obvious they would exist.Not long ago I took a road trip with a roommate and for the first time I saw a service station that offered showers for truck drivers although I didn't notice anything there must have been a truck wash there also.
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Jacob is almost as much as a piece of work as Trent and Mitch are.I gotta say Kayden lied better then I thought he would.But we all know Mark will figure this out.
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Don't feel bad I made my first mistake of the new year earlier then you did.
