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For a moment I thought it was some misdirection that they really wanted to recruit Billy.I wonder how the other student got Billy to run. For a medical Doctor Dr McMillan doesn't sound like the sharpest knife in the drawer he should have been able to tell Adam about the mix up

It might have been a typo but in the opening sentence you wrote" kids"and then "them" but later I see that Scotty clearly wasn't there...uh-oh did they leave him at the diner LOL. I heard of Kobe beef but what is Wagyu beef?

If Sean was in a conversion camp in this timeline it could explain why he was somewhat vengeful when Davey showed up the first time.Is it possible Sean could still send himself back?He might be thinking Brian may not be able to pull it off and that timeline version of Sean could be a hindrance.He would only have to go back a year or so before 2004 if that just a thought.

That conversation Brian had with Davey had so many chances to go south but in the end Brian and Davey are going to work together on the project and that could only be good. I can see them doing most of the studying at Brian's house which would also be good. OMG all that money Brian spent On HER I can see why everybody is so freaked at Brian's abrupt change.In the limited dialog we heard from Marcie I see nothing redeeming about her and I think she's going to be a vindictive B---H.It looks like for a while Trevor and Brandon's friendship with Brian will be strained.They are BF's to two girls who are friends with Marcie and I think Trevor and Brandon will be pressured to take Marcie's side.My guess is Marcie will somewhere down the line go too far and then Trevor and Brandon will try to reconcile with Brian but I think that's a number of chapters away.

I have no idea what's going to happen and why Charlie is loyal to the whale

What was Adam afraid to walk in on?His Mom went to get Ann up if she didn't find her then he would know he didn't have to yell fire.If Billy is mad about that then better not tell him about the Moose horn.

It good to have background like this on a character.I knew a few exchange students in high school and believe it or not they were both named Finn and they were both from Sweden that's what I thought of when I first saw the name in this story .Is this a common name for Arabs to name their kid ?

When I was Billy's age I would have screamed to myself in my head KILLJOY!! But I would also know intellectually that Adam was right and Billy is smarter then me besides they could still do a few things just not THE thing.

So the previous Brian allowed himself to be pussy whipped that leads me to believe he was really repressing any gay feeling he might have had.It's like he had a fear of not being heterosexual so he hung on to Marcie for dear life.If this goes the way Brian want this to go and he somehow gets close to Davey I could see Marcie outing them. There was a mention of them already doing the deed and it sounds like Marcie is going to be a constance pain so I wonder if she ends up pregnant if so that will sure complicate things.

That's about as much drama as I read in one chapter in a long time.Thank God for Rayna. It's like The Jameson's didn't hear one word Micheal was saying about how much the school he's going to is perfect for him and how he likes it here yet they were still trying to take him how selfish. It sounds like Mrs. Jameson was deliberately painting Ethan in the worse way possible and she probably poisoned Leah opinion of Ethan.Either Mrs. Jameson forgot or didn't how how bad Micheal was hurt because after she saw the pictures Rayna showed her she almost did a complete turnaround"I can do it Jack,I can't do it for you anymore" tells me she realizes she's had her head in the sand. So many people to feel bad for the most innocent victims here are Micheal and Leah the kids.After this lame attempt to take Micheal back The Gordons should speak with a lawyer and how to protect themselves in case they try something again.They have to settle some kind of custody for Micheal

Another cliffhanger.Tsuru said"You are in so much trouble".Why? She along with her husband are the ones who initially f--ed up. I loved James line "I promise I won't try anything" "Unless they start losing". Foreshadowing?

Uh-oh I don't like the sound of that

I agree with what @Petey and @Danners said about guardianship I already know how we'll get you write a sequel. We're going to have @kbois post a comment that reads "'Oh she will never write a sequel" that should do it

This should be interesting this one is in Brian's POV.The author did a good job in the introduction after he time traveled I didn't realize until I saw the word "Brian?" I thought it was Davey before then.I guess Brian forgot he was slightly jerky until he met Davey in the previous timeline at age 12.Apparently his junior high and high school years he's been an ass.Safe to assume Trevor and Brandon probably share some of the same qualities only not to the same degree. Unlike Davey in the other timelines where he met the guys when they were 12 here it sounds like they are 16,17 and it's maybe harder for Brian to change things.We never heard what happened to them in this timeline we only heard what happened to Davey and I guess Brian has no way of finding out as least not that I can see.While Davey is different I'm sure Brian having spent 50,60 years or so with him will know how to make Davey respond positively to what he's trying to do because that Davey is in there somewhere.I'm getting ahead of myself but I'm sure Brian somewhere down the line will have to tell this Davey about the different timelines.Can you imagine that conversation? "Oh and in the timeline I came from your Dad was president of the USA" LOL

When they were talking about the pray the gay away camp I thought we would hear more about Sturgis I guess next chapter.Are those camps still legal?

Who cares how short the chapter is when it's filled with stuff like this.Four Toranga's fighting side by side. What's that saying "The family that plays together......

Marie.Maybe another reason why the cabin is perfect for Adam

When Marie said the schools are seven miles away and the kids are home schooled I thought this could be a perfect place for Adam The only possible drawback?Does the cabin have wi-fi?

Wow I was just about to go bed when you posted this(I live in Socal)It sounds like from the narrative Mayson didn't want to do this if true then that lawyer is arrogant among other things. I bet he felt because of the trauma Hunter went through he would fall apart on the stand. I could see a lot of interesting things happening. Like maybe Olivia(was that her name)coming to testify on behalf of Hunter.Or maybe Mayson coming clean on the stand. These are just guesses of course.Good chapter.

I assume from the title when this was first posted it was on a April first.I almost thought it was the original chapter three.You know something they are all pretty hot and Davey had been with Trevor and Brandon in his first timeline if the stars had lined up just right and there was enough alcohol this might have actually happened.Looking forward to the next book.

For one moment, James Toranaga cupped the sky between his hands. Then, with childish impetuosity, he drove it into the surface of the sea. The ocean split. Sounds like this did more damage then global warming could ever do. James is doing pretty good considering he's winging it.

That was so cool that Billy called Adam's Mom Grandma.Does Billy have a car yet?I have a hunch he might want to get one so he can keep going to that restaurant if you know what I mean.

I'm reading a story right now where that is a recurring theme.We can't really prove that one way or another but I suspect you're right.

A lot of interesting thoughts expressed.G and Zeke discussed the possibly Tyler isn't who he says he is.Let's think about that the bad guys murdered this family including the son but then planted somebody to pretend to be a surviving family member?That would be one hell of a crazy plan but how else would Tyler not be who he says he is? I think the conversation G and Zeke had was to plant the idea that Tyler isn't who he says he is and Wyatt is saying what he's saying to make Zeke think that or maybe Wyatt is under some kind of mind control to make this look authentic.I could be way off as usual. The one thing I do know is G cannot be trusted and I think both Zeke and Tyler know that I believe both will respond to this as something G set up.Maybe that's what they want them to do that's what makes this fun

This story from what I understand was written around 2007.The reason why I bring this up is because if the author had written this today he would have wrote it differently.He had Davey's Dad winning all 50 states with almost 80% of the vote I think history since that time had shown us that it can't happen like that here in the U.S. Oh Davey's Dad would still win but it seems no matter what happens about a third of the country that would vote for the losing candidate and they would still win a few states. Reagan once won 49 states but it wasn't anywhere close to 80% of the vote. Why would Bush pardon Davey?Maybe so that history will acknowledge that he did the right thing at end or that he knew it would get under President Jones skin?After all this Davey is still working for the government. This looked like a great place to end the story but we know there's another book.This is what a friend told me that the next story had a great premise and 10 really good chapters had been written but as far as he knows it never got completed.Maybe the rest of the story is available somewhere else and it will get posted here but if it's not completed I can't see it being posted here.If somebody knows different please correct me