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Well I knew something was going to happen but boy I didn't think it would be that.Mark may be educated and a Doctor but he's a ignoramus's.I would love to see TMZ report that Mark threw Kayden out and then lose patients because of that. Mrs. F---in Dee why the hell did she feel the need to do that?Was she afraid Mark was going to sue the school if the permission slip was forged.Sadly so many people who work in school offices feel the need to be busybody like that. I don't think the rest of Kayden's family will shun him.After this chapter I know any predictions I make will fall short but I can see when the Grandparents visit they will enquire about Kayden maybe even ask Ian what's been happening.I could see them being more angry at their Son rather then their Grandson.

Was the source of Billy's bullying being teased for cramping up?I would think there would be more to it then that. Any coach that doesn't tell them to warm up and stretch isn't worth their salt.Sounds like he's incompetent

I'm sure this has happened in other ways the kid likes the Dad better then Mom or he/she likes the visiting Uncle best etc. Someone I'm sure would know what to do this sounds like a great idea though .There is one thing everyone so far has been been missing they are brother's don't you know big and little brothers NEVER get along it's in their DNA lol. The way to Kase heart is...Loe?

You have a good theory I was thinking along the lines of a local blowhard preacher who organizes something with his congregation and the local TV news covers it.

In all the timelines Sean has been a good guy I don't see how when you have THAT as a father"You've been putting him in danger for the last week with that...thing you are harboring here." OMG It's a good thing Davey remembered Mary Lou's number. His memory must have had a gap because he seemed to have forgotten Mrs. Flores from Do Over until he saw her.Remember that bigoted foster family Mrs. Flores tried to place Davey in then?Davey should try to remember the name of the family and pass that on to his Dad who then should pass that on to Mary Lou.

Any good idea or policy in the past be it in the workplace,research lab, law making what or wherever has always had plenty of opposition.We need people like Adam.

Adam implied that someone being tutored might be considered by students to be a shameful thing .I never came across that in fact I respected people who sought tutoring help.The dumb things people snicker at.

I loved Casper saying "You were speaking Japanese." Son of a flip???? I never heard that one before😆 James being Japanese the word flip might be interpreted by somebody as something else.I'm sure that's not what he meant though.

Well the guys talked about what we discussed in the previous chapter comment and they didn't seem to be concerned how Freckles would have reacted if he found this out.They did say "you don't know what he would have done" well that goes for them also.And in the end the other Sean agreed with them and convinced Davey he was wrong. Freckles was going to die regardless I still think it was better to let him die in peace. If Papa and Nanny disowned their daughter because she married a Black guy well you know what the reaction will be with Davey and Brian I wonder if the conversation Papa and Davey had will make Papa reconsider I'm thinking not.

The way he's keeping these guys eligible Adam should be voted MVP of the football team

I guess we need to find out more about Jerry's dad.He didn't mention a Mom at any time.

this just keeps getting strange and more strange but interesting.Does the story Mr Grey told suppose to explain The Bermuda Triangle?

I get why the guys are upset over Freckles especially Brandon but I think Davey did the right thing.Freckles was already getting a raw deal telling him what was about to happen would have made it so much worse.I'm not sure Davey could have explained the situation to them on his own he was able to do so with this Sean's help because of the way they were speaking different languages and picking up each other's stories. But getting back to Freckles how do you tell a person he's going to die oh your body will still be here but another version of you will be in it? I say not letting him know plus going to Disneyland and later have him finding out what it was like to kiss Davey was better then any kind of knowledge of his upcoming demise.So they didn't get to say goodbye to him but if his last hours would have been hell that would be OK.I hope I made sense

He may not have got married but he has family l still the same

I'm sure Adam is a good guy and wants to help Jerry but he really has to juggles schedule to make it fit I hope something like this helps him on his college apps because he really should be getting something for this.

Wow a death threat serious enough to close down a school? And their school is under the same threat? My first reaction is does it have something to do with the people in the car with the really dark tinted windows in a earlier chapter.

The more I read this the more I wonder what is this organization?I don't trust G Maybe Zeke has to consider a plan where he and Tyler go AWOL.

This group in this timeline are easily the best group of friends yet even more so when Freckles was part of the group but even with this Sean it's an exceptional group the compassion they had for Jeremy made me misty eyed.The guys in the other timelines. were fundamentally the same people but different factors made them act differently.It should also be noted the compassion Davey's father showed.I think because Davey had been here longer and could plan things better.So like other readers have suggested how the hell will go wrong here LOL. So Davey after school is going to tell the guys about Sean and himself he could have told Sean this before he made that decision.I get that you don't want to keep secrets but do they really have to?What are the pros and cons about telling them and not telling them?I can imagine them finding out about Freckles is not going to go over well

Casper is right not to go home but if he's at a safe place like James house he could still have a semblance of a relationship with it will take a lot of time. How far back do these people with powers go?We know Hideyoshi and Tsuru had Peter.I ask this because among the adults who have these powers don't they at least have some kind of theory among themselves on what is the best way handle the possibility that your children may have powers?I'm sure none of them would have told Ray and his wife to do what they did.We are not sure what Charlie's mom did but that also seems to be inadequate.If their enemies were aware of Charlie's ability how were they so unprepared for a possible kidnapping?

Is there still more?The chapter had a feel like things were wrapping up but there is some room to continue also.Either way excellent story

Other readers will be for more eloquent then I in reviewing this story I'm just making sure this author gets his share of 5 star reviews and trust me he will probably before I'm done writing this. If you read this author's other stories you know that he's very good at taking his and other people's life experiences plus doing his due research in creating a story you can relate to.There are many stories on the GA site about teenagers coming to terms about being gay and coming out.In this our main character Rick while no age is given I think it's safe to say he is in 40's and is still in the closet.Living in a small town where most of the people grew up with him or at least knows him well complicates thing in addition to a dominating father who thinks he needs supervision even from a distance. His Job as the town's very respected Plummer has him cross path with a concert Pianist named Gus.From this point things are different and Rick tries to find a path to Gus. The one thing that set this author's apart from other good writer's is while you root for his main characters you also openly cheer for them and feel the emotions they feel. Enjoy reading this story there is no doubt in my mind you will.

Whatever Uncle 5% is wanted for while it may be serious I guess it is mid-level serious otherwise I think the police would have already checked out The parents house they better boot Him out of there. Is there a reason Chaz doesn't have a patent? He's usually so organized and on top of things

Do you think Ethan should have spoke to Jonathan first before doing this.This is something I didn't have to go though so I wouldn't know but I can see somebody saying leaving a note a cowardly way to do it. An observation those people who adopted Sophie are they qualified?Sophie not going anywhere with friends doesn't sound like a good situation. One last question Ethan referred to himself as Elliot but Sophie called him Elijah is that a middle name or something? Great chapter

This chapter made me see the time travel thing in way I haven't though of before.When Davey went back he remembered everything he experienced up to that point but when Sean came back this time it was under conditions Davey had changed so Sean knows almost nothing about the last seven years.I'm having a hard time expressing this but I guess "Freckles" is dead the guy who had all those experiences with Davey and who made friends with the others from the get go no longer exists.The current Sean is in so many ways the same person but isn't, it's difficult to put in words. Davey is going to have to go over a lot with this Sean like telling these friend are not the same guys who bullied him. I hope wrestling season is over because it would be hard to explain someone who's the best in his weight class all of a sudden have no idea what he's doing.Davey is going to have to have a lot of training sessions with Sean to get him up to speed.Davey mentioned that he will explain to Brian why he took Freckles to Disneyland instead of him that means telling him all the secrets.I wonder what Brian and I assume the others will think when they find out the Sean who was their friend isn't with them anymore

OK so call me stupid it wasn't obvious to me I don't who sent the picture message.Was it just two penis's by themselves or was it attached to a body?that would make it a little more clear. I remember other chapter comments after Tristan made Kevin and Bob goodies disappear and I remember commenting to that.I've been picking my brain and I can't recall commenting on any other author's story where I referred to the word penis so much🤔 Maybe we should have a dickcussion about that..... sorry about that.