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So far everything is cool at school at how they are reacting to Jack hope it stays that way.The stuff Tracy is teaching the basketball team seems to be working.I hope Jack's comment"It was good while it lasted" doesn't mean what he implied.He hobbled home?That doesn't seem right.

Not to be off topic but I was born in Columbus Georgia I only vaguely remember it though.

Great chapter.One question that hasn't been brought up.J.C. saw"Mike" at Arlington you would think he say something to T.J. not at first of course but sometime after.Did Jack tell J.C.?And will T.J. get angry at this?

I"m guessing you're on the west coast like I am. @AquariusGuy posting it at 4 A.M. our time really now.

Of course it will.

I was typing that when you first said Braden and before you said the other stuff.Tristan Sr. would be cool.Weird but cool

Well it is someone T.J.already knows.My only guess of people who we know are alive it doesn't add up Rusty's dad may have the kind of juice to pull that off.If it is some one who is presumed dead well I won't go there yet.Please don't tell me @Wesley8890 is right.

The first thing I'm think of is there was something extra with Grandma's fertility treatment.Along with being able to read minds Tristan making adult kind of decisions.I can't wait for your scientific explanation on how this was done.

Very good chapter.Just one thing they ate at a place called The Five Flies?Is that a culture thing.Otherwise it sounds ugh.

Are you getting soft on us?Four chapters and nobody has died yet. Speaking of they may have to deal with Nate. I'm some ways Jack is still the same 16 year old we first met.

It would be suspicious if there wasn't one.

On the plane Dan said to Carlo"It isn't legal in the U.S.for two guys to marry."Is this story set in a different time?

So a couple of questions are all of them going to go to Rita's resort?And will Doug bring a BF.

My Immediate reaction to that?Jack and Emily they got drunk and.....?Could it be?

Wow will it ever end?This is all @Ronyx fault you know if he hadn't messed up Jack and Emily from the other story none of this would be happening.Seriously I'm hoping Emily is bi-polar then there would be a reason why she is the way she is.What could she have on Jack?I'm wondering if they used a sample from Jack for something.OK Kevin drop the other shoe

I've read every one of his stories save for a few.There is no such thing as a mediocre Ronyx story they are all excellent.

Just found you and your story love what I'm reading.Why couldn't I find a Dennis when I was 13? I just hope its not a case of Dennis being curious and when they get back to school he ignores Damian but I digress.Its late I'll finish this tomorrow

Good Chapter.Just a random thought after the danger has passed(It will eventually right?)Maybe you can have The Peter Charles or The Godfather 2 sail by the island.

Well since you asked.The obvious one would be TJ is related to the egg donor.But since this is you we are talking about God knows what.Maybe TJ is connected to Dr. Hottie or Jeff or one of traitors at BHO got a sperm sample of Tristan Sr. and made sure his DNA ended up in Tristan.OK that's as nutty as I can get.I can hardly wait to see what you came up with.

Sorry this is too obvious. AHEM. I heard people say you were all wet.

No I didn't see it coming especially since in the last story you said Emily didn't have an extramarital affair.But you were only talking about that story huh? oooookay lol.Still what up with Emily?I do believe TJ is over reacting firing the law firm. Is little Tristian some kind of genius?He already understands algebra terms wow.TJ would never do anything bad intentionally but he couldn't try if he wanted to Tristian would know about it. Where's @Wesley8890?

Everything looks good. Are Tony and Rita landing at the military airport?Otherwise the bad guys might have a plan.I'm showing my ignorance here Carlo mentioned how Carlos language has improved.I know Guam is a U.S.territory but is there another language spoken there?

Wonder if there's going to be some conflict with Doug's dad

“I’d like you to meet someone dad; you’ve met him before but things have changed. Meet my fiancé Jackson Paul Craft-Woolery or JC or J as I like to call him.” “Hello Mr. Michaels, a pleasure to meet you again.” J said “Jackson, the pleasure is mine.” Dad said “I promise you I will take care of TJ and make him the happiest man on earth” J said and grasped my hand “Mini, you have yourself a true and honorable man. You will grow old together and have many years ahead of you. I love you son” Dad said and I started to cry “Babe you ok?” J asked “You know how I can hear Tristan, Jake and Josh? Well dad has been responding and he said we will grow old together and have many years ahead of us” I forgot to ask about this part .The first part it sounds like J.C. and Tristan Sr could hear each other and communicate.But then T.J. explains to J.C. the he can hear his dad like he can hear Little Tristan and his brother.Am I missing something?

Nice start of a story.I'm amazed that J.C. could remember all those names.When he mentioned two of Aunt Stephanie's sons were named Hayden and Jayden I chuckled a few months ago I finished a old story where the main characters were two twin teen boys named Hayden and Jayden. Forgive my sick suspicious mind but are the dirty looks Emily and TJ's brothers gave at J.C. being there at the reading of the will a sign of future conflict?