weinerdog
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Wow I can't think of an descriptive word about Rita without being vulgar.I'll let somebody here who's better with words do that.We now know what her motivation was with Rick.On the positive side he literally bump into the piano teacher got to start somewhere I guess.A slightly off topic thing I want to tell you the readers here will know what I'm talking about. Through a friend the other day I met a guy named Eustace it was all I could do not to chuckle.
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This is like Deja vu like I seen this before LOL. Was the reason they had to move the RV manually was because the road was narrow ?It sounds like the story could end here but I'm guessing there's another chapter.
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I'm guessing the system won't let you post the chapter till later.Another author did the same thing once and at first he couldn't fix it but then figured out how.I could DM his name if you want
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I deleted my previous comment because now it would not make sense.I'm glad Tom and Torn apologized to Paul I can see how teenagers can get carried away.Did Tom and Paul do some of this before meeting Torn?I ask because I wonder if that was part of the reason Ollie stayed behind.They have food for awhile but due to what happened will towns and cities still be able to get supplies shipped to them?
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He did mention they were going to drop Torn off but you're right I thought that would be described.
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What is not clear about the incident is was all three of them involved ?That could have changed the dynamics of the situation. Still it sounds like Torn was wrong. I hope he apologizes. I don't know if it was mentioned yet but did get proper clothes yet because it's going to get ass kicking cold.The talk about Canadian money and me not being a traveler will there be stores there that take debit cards?And something I never thought of does the system convert your currency on your card in that case?
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Chapter 1 - Who Says You Can't Go Home
weinerdog commented on Jordn87's story chapter in Chapter 1 - Who Says You Can't Go Home
Right now there's a dry spell in new chapters in stories I'm reading.When that happens I go looking for completed stories from before I was a member of GA and based on this first chapter I think I found a good one .I recognize many readers here from comments on other stories and they seem to like the same stuff I do so I'm looking forward to reading this -
This chapter was a tear jerker.So glad Jon is in a house of love and that they took Ollie also they're the first two that got picked up so they must have bonded.So now on to Canada.Any idea how far the poison gas can travel?Detroit is close to the Canadian border so many they are not safe there unless he has a plan and knows something.Never came across the name Ephraim in another story there was the name Eustace I guess if you read enough GA stories you'll hear em all.
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Luckily he has the means to help these kids. Who in their right mind who let a kid alone with nobody in his life fend for themselves if they can help.Present day I would be able to help in the past I would not be able to and that's a horrible feeling.
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In the 90's There was a popular overnight radio show called The Art Bell show he always had topics and scenario's like you describe in this story.never get too a false sense of security it can happen.BTW we got Jon and Ollie's name but not the main character we'll find out I guess
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At the moment there's a lull in new chapters on stories that I'm reading the good thing about that is I get to catch up on stories I haven't read when I wasn't a member of GA and this is another one .Great story.I've now read about 60-70% of your stories until the next lull😀
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The name of the story itself makes this interesting to find out about it.
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As a result of that Carlos mom was living with him that could have taken a toll on her.But she was happy for her son so that's a consolation
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Hey just put some cheese and sour cream on stuff and everything would look good lol.Toby must know some Spanish if he was able to talk with Carlos friends somewhat
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oops I meant kick 🤭I fixed it and my streak of editing all my posts remains intact
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Toby and Carlos are awesome together.I was thinking to my self before I read this chapter something is different about this story and then I realized no mention of kick ass food well this chapter took care of that.
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I'll be really interested to see what Toby and Carlos will do to solve the situation. One thing is they do seem very solid. If one of them were to stray it would have already happened
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Whatever they do guard that video If it ever got out knowing the fans Oh boy.Now to see how telling Owen's Mom will turn out
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It's obvious Dr. Viego knows about Carlos but what about Carlos Mom and Dad? From what I've heard being Gay might be harder in a culture like Peru.Will there be a scene where they meet the parents?
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I was wondering if the recent co-vid positive result would mess up what you had planned to do with the chapter.JP Morgan ,The Kennedy's,Vanderbilt's,Obama's daughter?Man you don't mess around.What is Bill Gates not good enough for this bunch?
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You have to very very patient at a dig you could go along time without finding something but for Toby having Carlos there would make any long dig worth it. I'm interested in the future of their relationship🥰
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As soon as I read this the notification pop up lol
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Small world.I remember a few years back I was googled something I forgot what but I came across a link that said "First city in the new world?"And it none other than Caral Peru.IRL have t they really found something of what you describe in your story?
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I was thinking the same thing does Rita play for the same team? @jt15136 is looking at this in an optimistic way and it is certainly possible.I tend to be cynical is Rita using Rick to keep up appearances?Maybe during the course of dinner they will find out about each other.BTW I know when a guy does something like this the lady is referred to being his beard is there an expression for when a women does that?
