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Kudos to Dawn in this chapter Now that Kate told her folks I'm sure Dawn's mom will tell Creeks mom. Though not as dramatic that's another conversation Creek and Kate can look forward to

There are other chapters still. It's not over yetBut for what it's worth I agree with you

My comments are going to be all over the place so I hope I make sense. the dreaded arepa – the devil’s hockey puck. That comment made me chuckle.Dona Susana was a quick study in American food she must have got the memo the way to a teenage boys heart is through his stomach. One thing that surprised me a little was that Miguel didn’t even comment on why Juan Camilo was packing heat. Take that and the fact that Miguel and Yeison didn't even think twice about the background checks tells me that is common with most of the gringo's they meet. I see things to like and dislike about Miguel at the moment there are more red flags. I'm curious if Miguel approached Hunter again after Hunter turned down the party because Yeison hooked up with him. I could see that turning potentially ugly. That our house was always open to them, whether it was sleepovers, mall trips, whatever kids did these days. Hunter's dad may regret that.Yeah Juan is there but here's a thought one of Hunter's friends might case the place on behalf of the wrong person There were no good new stories on Nifty or any of the other websites for gay teen fiction, You mentioned Nifty???You should have edited that to GA😄

And since you’re hearing me speak of abstract things such as the heart, an internal organ, being a stand-in for personality, you must know that we’re serious. Let’s get the hell out of here.” “Alexander, language,” Brad said with a low snicker. “Like, what the hell, man?” Classic Brad Many readers asked about Blanche. Never occurred to me my bad.Like @akascrubber said lots of question I'm guessing he wasn't left much. I can see both Brad and Alexander offering help financially and Lyn not accepting it which might be a factor in any kind of falling out

Yes shooting is an Olympic sport........Unless you're talking about the other kind of shooting

That might be part of the act

And none of your little faggot friends can come over.” Under no circumstances is that ever OK to say.I sure sure she has heard Asian slurs thrown her way WTH

I might have missed it.I'm all for community spirt and all but after Adam told is his diary how tough the day was Carl's dad should have gave them a little something for their efforts

nice story

Up until this chapter it was no contest Arthur was the biggest ass in the story . But then we met Lucy

There, standing in the back row of seats was Assistant Commissioner Barrett, flanked by detectives Azzopardi and Ryan. From beside me, I heard Helen let out a soft whistle. I guess those three were there to scare the crap out of Jarvis but was it a mistake to do so? Their presence sort of confirms all the suspicions At least so far this guy seemed to know where he was going, which was more than can be said for half of the taxi drivers in this city. Or he can be like some New York City cab drivers who no matter where you tell them you want to go they pass the same huge department store three times on the way to your destination

Kate sure had a bombshell eh? After what Dailan did perhaps Aiko will mellow out🤞.But say that incident with the pit bull didn't happen and then Aiko found out about Kate? Would she have banned HER from the house Happy ThanksGiving to all the American readers

Uh....Shortstop remember? Jeez you're the author

Aadan does have anger issues obviously. Some of that I'm sure comes from his dad's abuse. The other things I can't speak to but I'm sure are factors

All this would be a moot point unless.........

A thought just entered my pea sized brain. Creek really can't speak to Arthur about what he said to Marlin without risk. If Creek says to Arthur in anger what his words did to Marvin and what he has done since that could be a reason for Arthur to fire Marvin (Arthur would make something up)

I know you're Team Dailan but..... It's Marvin not Melvin😄

I bet that is close to how Forest would look

Isn't anybody surprised Joel agreed to play baseball pretty easily? “There’s no animosity coming from the guys about you joining up, they’ve been busting my ass to get you on the field.” “Really?” I asked, letting out a breath I held when he started talking. I could see that exchange being a start to Joel changing his mind but this was still too quick IMO. he grunted but smiled at me. “Braden, huh.” I know Colt was joking about that but this IS a small town who knows Braden might have some allegations. aimed his way the way people are. As far as number 0 goes 25 players in the NFL wear that these days and 2 players in the MLB wear that number so it's not that unusual anymore

It could be a motive I suppose like I said I don't tule it out

Yep, and it was Brad’s idea to keep it a secret. Damn, you should see your face, Lyn. Loosen up a bit. It’s nothing serious.Really🤔 It would be interesting to see his reaction in the future if he finds out somebody been blowing his BF If I'm Lyn I tell myself don't get involved in their BS drama say nothing, although I might make a few cryptic comment to Brad about being good to your wife .BTW I don't rule out Brad was in on this having Luke text Lyn etc.

The inspector should have read my previous chapter comment and found a way to keep Azzopardi and Ryan away from the hospital until they got Shane. They won’t see us and won’t be able to follow. Then we’ll come back later for your car. Is there any decal or something in or on Helen's car that identifies here a police officer? I'm thinking someone else should get Helen's car.Listen to me this time😄 ‘Yeah. Elvira said she was tied up and would call me back, but I couldn’t get hold of Jimmy, just his voicemail. I’ll try him again this morning.’ I nodded, but I didn’t say anything, as a somewhat uneasy feeling began creeping into the pit of my stomach. Oh crap that sounds like something might have happened to Jimmy Tan ‘Like what you see?’ he teased, while giving his – obviously uncut – junk a bit of attention. ‘Well, I’ll say this much . . . that Jimmy sure is a lucky bastard,’ I replied, while trying my best to keep any and all impure thoughts at bay. Rick has a tough job but it does come with some benefits though😄 I think I'm coming down with something ...What hospital did you say Nick was working at

Very suspenseful set up and resolution very well done. Clint isn't going to give up is he? I have to believe law enforcement is going to want to speak to the four and then there's the possibility of testifying in court so they better work on cover story, Happy Thanksgiving @Bill W and to all the readers

Yes, I meant to name the chapter SSSS... it has a meaning that we learn fairly quickly. Surely, you can't be serious. I am serious, and don't call me Shirley. When I first saw the title S,S,S,S I thought of the time I hit my thumb with a hammer ,I went S---,S---,S---,S--- “So,” Shane said, scooting closer with a grin that was pure chaos, “what precious secrets did you learn about me?” “Just that you’ve got the smallest dick of the whole bunch,” I said deadpan. That would mean he also knows who has the biggest dick of the whole bunch.....I wish I had Noah's ability

I hope Creek chooses his word carefully and finds the right way to say certain things. Yes I'm #Team Dailan but Marvin has been through some stuff he didn't deserve and if he had any thought in the back of his mind about Creek this could be a bad time to hear about the developments between Creek and Dailan