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Family Life: Church reconciliation
CincyKris commented on Robert Hugill's story chapter in Family Life: Church reconciliation
So much progress in this chapter! Owain publicly acknowledged their relationship, Colin is making himself at home in Owain's apartment, Mhairi is showing she is not her parents and is putting her son first, and Joe is following his passion rather than his "girlfriend".- 18 comments
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LOL! We were dead slow, not surprisingly people don't want to buy Christmas trees and poinsettias in the rain. I was back in the office alone and "working" on off-season ordering.
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It's a character flaw for narcissists in real life also. They go through life thinking they are the shit, rich ones have lackeys that won't tell them they are wrong, they eventually make fatal errors and their world falls like dominoes.
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You get to virtually be outgoing while still being a homebody IRL. Sound perfect to me!
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The evil pussy cat can make hybrid alligators but he forgot to buy a backup generator? Classic bad-guy mistake!
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Hot damn!!! Ok got to go back to work, no time to read the comments till this evening.
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Maybe she was busy writing us a new story! Or with real life. Which is not nearly as much fun as GA life.
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Making Deeper Connections
CincyKris commented on Karl Anders's story chapter in Making Deeper Connections
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Thanks, Noah pushed his memory right out of my head.
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This chapter really demonstrated the dichotomy of Toby's parents. He has his mom, with whom he spent the first 14 years of his life, showing how little time she wants to spend with him. Then, he has his dad, with whom he spent limited time but stayed in contact previously, arranging his whole life around his son. Toby is a smart boy, he will figure out who really cares about him, and this will influence his relationships for the rest of his life. Brian is handling this perfectly. I am feeling the last part regarding Gordon's old friend is a bit foreboding. Also, who is Justin? He was mentioned a couple times early in the chapter.
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Yes, this! I was trying to send mental vibes to Asa. How is he going to avoid getting captured again?! I instantly thought of the scenes in Shawshank Redemption when Andy escaped with the help of the thunderstorm. At least Asa didn’t have to crawl through shit to get out.
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Family Life: homophobia rules
CincyKris commented on Robert Hugill's story chapter in Family Life: homophobia rules
I think we have all had big decisions we have worried over, then wondered what all the internal fuss was about after the decision was made. I think Colin is going through this now. The coming out has been a non-event to all but his brother and mother. And excepting Miles' atrocious behavior with Owain, having Miles and his mother in the background rather than the foreground is an entirely positive outcome. I am so happy that Colin is becoming strong enough to become a partner in his relationship with Owain.- 18 comments
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I agree about all the other comments. I may not have a 'crew', but my readers are engaged and are always giving me food for thought and validation. We could be your "Barn Hands". I suspect some of these varmints can get pretty handsy!
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Please tell me you're not going to kill off gramps when we're just getting to know him!
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I think all the activity in the afternoon has taken Michael's attention off fitting in to his new life and home, but he will most likely dwell on it soon. He seems happy for Charlie, but unsure of his place. Hopefully helping Gramps will give him a purpose. I loved the new characters, Janice and Missy. The house's location near to the garage would be very convenient if the Baxter Boys were to move in with Gramps. Just saying.
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LOL this is me every time I mow! I have to duck and lean all along the treeline. But when I put the mower up, all I am thinking about is a shower! Eh, I'll do it in the spring. I can't imagine getting so much done in one day. Of course, I'm a damn sight older than Jubal!
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Jubal replenished himself with hard work, ingenuity, nature, deep sleep, good food, with some hopes and dreams thrown in for good measure! He is still doubting his gut, it will have to be Lucas making the first big gesture, but he is going to stay as long as Lucas needs him. Which will hopefully be forever. I absolutely loved this productive and positive chapter.
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The mysterious Mr Kahn
CincyKris commented on Robert Hugill's story chapter in The mysterious Mr Kahn
Just had a thought, if Deirdre and Jasper do become a problem, and I think we all agree that our author is just biding his time on that problem, having a good friend in high places may be very beneficial!- 21 comments
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The mysterious Mr Kahn
CincyKris commented on Robert Hugill's story chapter in The mysterious Mr Kahn
I think Russ has been so focused on his businesses that he has lost his close relationships and not built new ones. Big businesses and lots of money take on a life of their own, so I hear. He may be at a point where he is feeling this isolation and wanting a change. I don't think he is trying to hijack Brian and Gordon's life, just insert himself into it. Although he is doing it in rather a pushy way, but I don't think he knows how to not be pushy.- 21 comments
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I think the timing was perfect, Colin has spent too many years contemplating coming out, he needed the fed-up approach! Let’s hope the coming out to his guys goes as well.
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Well it finally happened, we all knew it was coming. One of the big questions remains, did Micco really do it or was he set up? And the looming hurricane is presenting herself. What will happen to the wolves and panthers?
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Even though we didn't check in with Asa in this chapter, I feel better about his situation. I think the guards will screw up just enough for Asa to shift. Just because Huntington's spies told him the good guys have a light shifter doesn't mean that he has ever dealt with one directly. They are very rare. I'm looking forward to seeing Nat again, I wonder what that snake has been up to.
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I'm all caught up to the rest of you! Sometimes the help we get from people that have been through similar circumstances is the best medicine. Charlie and Michael may not know about Danny and Jason's stories yet, but I think the speed of the younger boys' acceptance is due to their own years of "living rough". I think Charlie will excel at his new job, I wonder if Stacy knows anyone in the non-drag performance industry? Harry will help the boys heal and be healed in the process. I'm thinking that Michael would be a good caretaker when Harry gets released.
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I'm sure Noah is thankful for his opportunity to visit such a fun, relaxed household. We all remember how much Toby enjoyed the change. Although Noah has two parents who love him, his home is more like living as a guest in a fancy house. Kids need interactions, not more stuff.
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I agree with a lot of the comments, I think that Huntington had everything to do with the delays, he probably has the poor pups and their families imprisoned. Going off on their own was a poor but well-meaning decision. But, if all characters behaved intelligently all the time, there would be a lot of boring books and stories. And absolutely no horror movies.
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