CincyKris
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Great tension! The rogue is smart, but Wirren is smarter! Perhaps kidnapping a habitat is enough of a trigger for the good guys to go on the offense, rather than continually playing defense.
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I like the beginning!
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Great chapter! We had a pastoral beginning and an explosive ending.
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For a while now, Wirren has seemed to not be fully aware of just how special and important he really is. He is now being forced to accept this new reality. I think he will handle it well due to his strong support system.
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We didn't think Marina and Val would have a problem with Noah, but now it's confirmed. I think Noah will strike up his courage when his parents begin speaking about his older brother. I think Brian and Gordon are doing a great job raising a 14 year old modern gay kid!
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I certainly wish that I could go back to my 25-30 year old body! But with my good old brain.
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It’s scary to imagine how K74 would use enhancements. I suspect they would use them to enslave populations to perform certain tasks. Rather than to uplift and empower, as is happening with the dolphins.
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That was an action packed chapter! I wonder at the fallout from Earth, but I'm mainly happy that they are safe and on their way back home.
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Well my hope that Wirrin and Akama would get to explore was realized, rudely interrupted. The bad guys are stepping up their tech, distressingly so!
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I'm still loving the story, but I think it's a little sad that our trio had never seen a sky or felt a real breeze. Such an alien thought to an earthling. I hope that Akama and Wirren get to experience some of their heritage.
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I do the same with business' planters and landscaping!
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Colin was a bit "fish out of water", but endearingly so. I like that Owain is not just patient, but seems to enjoy exposing Colin to new things. Now if only Colin would expose himself at the club!
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I had the same thought about Thom. The other two are experiencing extraordinary accomplishments, but Thom is not, yet. Hopefully.
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You have raised the bar with this chapter! I have a feeling Akama is going to be important! I was wondering why this story was being told from Wirren's viewpoint, rather than Calen's. Now I know!
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I'm greatly enjoying the complex world that has been created here. There is a convergence of humans, dolphins, and AI that is engaging and fun. I'm so happy to have found this over 10 years since it was posted!
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A 2am sleepy trip to the bathroom could become an otherworldly adventure!
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I knew a mystery was awaiting us! I look forward to seeing how Charlie and friends solve Nicklus’ problems.
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Chapter 21 One Step at a Time
CincyKris commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 21 One Step at a Time
I loved the homecoming! I know we are a ways from our guys joining the way we want, but this was a great start. A few of the other readers mentioned the lessening of tension as the chapter progressed, it was good to see. I hope the cause of the tension will come up in future conversations. They don't just need to open their eyes, they need listen, too. I have no doubt the wildings will return, they are too intrinsic to this tale!- 67 comments
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Thank you for bringing back this wonderful story. Tomas has experienced a whole life transformation over the last few months. It's refreshing to read a well-written story about regular adults, I look forward to more of Tomas and Fletcher.
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Thank you for the Christmas gift! This was a lovely glimpse of the guys’ very comfortable, very British conversation on the way to London.
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We finally got to meet @raven1’s snotty steward! It’s amazing how some people go crazy when they get even a little bit of power over other people. Fortunately Max put him in his place, and hopefully his supervisor finished the “re-education”! Restoring the Mini will be good for both Charlie and gramps, won’t hurt Charlie’s standing at work either. Although I doubt any “consummation” a la @drsawzall will be possible in the Mini!
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That was ending even @drsawzall will love!
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Wow! The tides are turning in favor of Micco, and whatever Rory had to say will help even more. Will I forgive her, probably not, we’ll see. I’m so happy for Micco and Chase, but still nervous for their future. And I’m super tense about the storm and refuge. If this were a movie (and it would make a great one), this is right before all hell breaks loose.
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Even though there were no big surprises in the meeting, the guys are dealing with the aftermath of Deirdre basically abandoning Toby. I agree with @Gary L, we learn more about Deirdre that "adds subtlety". She is obviously struggling a little with choosing travel and Jasper over Toby, but in the end she is still choosing Jasper over her own son. Regarding Ralph, it is becoming clear that our author has some plans for this upcoming storyline, but rather foggy for the readers! I guess we'll see. As for @Summerabbacat, and your 25°c (77°f), you get no sympathy from me with your perfect forecast! 🌞
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Trials and Tribulations
CincyKris commented on Karl Anders's story chapter in Trials and Tribulations
I'm relieved the judge is smart and reasonable. The boys have a great support system. We're probably in for a sad next chapter, I hope the funeral is not too rough. Hmmm, is Makani boyfriend material for Charlie?
