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CincyKris

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  1. Perfect ending to an exceptional story! Thank you for all the time, creativity, and emotion you put in to this. You left your readers with something we will remember!
  2. Beautiful wedding, it couldn't have been more perfect for Andy and Zander!
  3. I'm with a couple of other readers thinking they are honeymooning at Eustace's. Hopefully. Grandma was a nice surprise, no wonder Andy's uncle couldn't get a hold of her.
  4. I'm excited about Nonna, Marjorie, and Eustace all meeting at the wedding! And as for the homicidal dream and pondering whether he's a future monster, yes I think that qualifies as an emergency! Call your doctor!
  5. Thank for this chapter. I think that old farmers have a very practical way of looking at things. They're much less concerned about what others think, that frees them to think however they see fit. As he pointed out, same sex attraction is something most farmers have seen amongst animals. Eustace is a fantastic character!
  6. I have been reading this a chapter or two a day, trying to make it last. I like having a good novel to fill the time in between updates of my "in process" followed stories. But I have been binging this wonderful story on my day off, instead of the many chores I should be doing. You made me tear up when Andy saw the photo of his uncle and cousins, and actual crying when he read the letter from Eustace! I'm so glad I read one more chapter! Well, I guess I'll go do some laundry now (said in the voice of eeyore).
  7. I was hoping we would see Eustace again, and would get Ambrose as part of the package. He wasn't necessarily a bad guy, just concerned about his father. Maybe he could even be helpful with his possible legal issues in Carlsberg.
  8. I googled marriage age in the US, and discovered most states allow 16 year olds to marry with parental and/or judge consent. I can see the adults trying to talk them out of it, not sure if they'll give in. I feel like Carlsberg is looming ahead of us.
  9. Ha----I was right about Mrs. Chandler and bruce! I loved the court room beat-down and the race. Andy running towards a goal instead of away from life is a great and significant change.
  10. I wonder if Mrs. Chandler is related to Bruce? Or goes to church with his family? I have faith that Garrett and the judge will protect Andy.
  11. I'm not discounting the good things his therapy has accomplished, but that one night with Zander has healed Andy in a way counseling never could! And in an aspect of his life very important to a teenager. Many victims of childhood sexual abuse never have a healthy adult sex life. Zander happened at just the right time!
  12. CincyKris

    Beanie Babies

    Such a happy chapter!!!!! My favorite line -- Bundled in their blankets, they look like burritos, not the massive things you get at Chipotle, more like something off the dollar menu at Taco Bell.
  13. Those were giant leaps forward for Andy. I hope he gets to the point when he can truly accept that he is worthy of love.
  14. I have faith that Vincent will prevail and land in Mason's arm. I'm looking forward to the battle to get there! If anyone gets reincarnated, I vote for Yakob. But not as a chicken. Maybe as a son for two alphas??????
  15. I feel like we are in the healing chapters now!
  16. This was the most satisfying chapter so far. Andy was so brave sharing his story, and showing them his scars. He has shouldered so much on his own, both with his dad and after he ran. It is time to share the burden and let people help him move forward.
  17. Finally!!!!! Thank you for this giant jump forward for Andy.
  18. I made the mistake of starting this during my lunch break. Not only did I fight years (damn allergies!), I couldn't finish it till now. Wonderful story of love, mourning, survivor's guilt, and starting over. You write emotion better than anyone!
  19. I enjoyed seeing Andy being a normal teenager! Well, other than living in the school library closet! Great chapter!
  20. I noticed you didn't answer the reader's comments regarding Zander coming out to his closest friends. We have only been told he has come out to his parents. I'm assuming he is not out to his casual friends, resulting in the bingo going after him. I'm not loving his behavior right now. It's just as easy to get up from the couch as it was to remain sitting with her in his lap.
  21. CincyKris

    Chapter 28

    I went home early from work with a pinched nerve and watched the weather channel. I'm so glad you are safe! Good luck in the morning.
  22. I'm hoping that Andy has a dreamless sleep in the first real bed he's slept in since fleeing.
  23. I'm a little disappointed in Andy's friends, though it seems realistic of teenagers to act this way. I'm guessing that Andy got locked out of the school and caught up in the storm. Maybe this is the beginning of him getting the outside help he needs.
  24. This poor kid can't go out without horrible things happening to him! I'm hoping his new friends don't abandon him out of awkwardness.
  25. I'm seriously concerned about the next chapter title, after so many positive chapters -- "Disaster"!
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