CincyKris
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You brought back the memory of the joy of seeing wild dolphins from a boat for the first time. Although my boat was way smaller, I was much older, and did not have fancy camera glasses. But the joy and excitement was the same! I enjoyed the political discourse and the usual banter, as well. Thanks for the fun chapter.
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We don't know if Huntington knows anything at all about the recovered pups or the investigation. The actions and note were from California. What if he's still looking for the damn laptop?
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I had a feeling things were going too well! It looks like Mama and Papi are going to be introduced to the supernatural sooner than later! She'll be running the kitchen in no time!
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Bonus: Auspicious Audit
CincyKris commented on astone2292's story chapter in Bonus: Auspicious Audit
Thanks for the bonus! You created a multiverse! Before you know it there will be fan fiction!- 19 comments
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This is the feel-goodest feel good story you will read! It is a multi-part epilogue to a sequel, if you haven't read Boss Nanny or Jay's Loelife, do it! Now! You won't regret. Read those first, or this one won't make you laugh and cry.
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I was having a conversation with a coworker recently about our difficulties finding good workers who will stay more than a year. She and I are in our early 50’s and have been at our company for over 15 years. Today’s 22 to 30 year olds do not patiently wait for a job to get better. We are going to have to figure out how to change or we will not have enough qualified employees. The type of employee patience shown 50 years ago is gone for good. Harold was due to retire in eight years’ time. Bill could wait it out. He was content enough here.
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I love it when arrogant chefs get a verbal smackdown! It's the best part of cooking competitions. Sometime these kids don't seem realistic (since none of us were raised by a rich, famous, socially liberal gay couple), but the temper tantrum was spot on. I can see him being teased by his siblings (and Grandpa Cap) as a teenager with "I want slimies"!
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Was @astone2292 a co-author for this chapter? One of these days I was going to get Bouncer to do something very mean to him. My friend craned his head back against my belly, glancing up where he was curled over mine and Garjah’s feet. I scratched the underside of his jaw where the skin was softer. “Later,” I said. I would swear a gleam entered his eyes.
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I forgot to mention one of my favorite parts was Aido Potato turning into Shaun White! I can totally see him following in his Uncle Loe's footsteps as an internet influencer!
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This was a joyous chapter! The girls were the stars, from the head banging on Christmas morning, the ski pros in adorable tiny ski suits, to cute little cheerleaders! Loren and Jay are the best girl dads ever!
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Yes yes yes yes yes!!!!!!!! We were right! Mates!!!!
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If Kavan could find Konstantin's sire, could she reverse the blood curse?
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We would have heard if mother was dead or injured, was she even in the battle? What about that idiot Warren? At least Simone is dead. I think the exact wording of the blood oath will be important. Kavan needs to figure out a way that mother can be killed without hurting Konstantin.
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There should not be a statute of limitations on selling your child to a sex trafficker!!!!
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So much happened in this chapter!!! The lows were so low and the highs were so high! What their parents did was so much worse than what we thought! Why???? They are just as insane as the serial child sex trafficker they sold him too! I can't wait until they (and all the other adults involved) are publicly destroyed. I love the new line and that they are going to use it to help kids who desperately need it! In all the post-Rob action, it would be easy to forget the cutest family costume ever! I can picture the Jay-rex running after the jeep with the remote at the end of his tiny arms with the frantic veLoeciraptor trailing behind!
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That sounds like an interesting challenge!
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I don't want to get too far ahead in predictions, but what if the twins are mates for E and Tyler???? One for each of course, not a polyamorous quad-mate kind of thing! But we have to find them first. The boys are going to follow the rainbow!
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Uh oh, I think he is starting to crush on a ghost! Maybe he should've googled Whoopi Goldberg's number!
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I think Essell is trying to set Garjah up as the leader of the rebels. To turn the rebellion into a revolution by making it public globally. They need help outside their world, Ases can provide that.
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None of us had any doubt that Loren and Jay would make great dads. I think those are the luckiest little girls in the world. I loved the dynamic between Aiden and Carson, it was 100% realistic, I could see Carson's pouts from here! Cousincamp road trip sounds like a blast, it brings back memories I have of camping with my cousins growing up.
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More L&L and a Gift Given
CincyKris commented on Aditus's story chapter in More L&L and a Gift Given
Kavan has a very cool new gift! I think he was watching his brothers, he needs to be very careful! Mother, Simone, and Warren would kill or torture his brothers if they found out. -
My initial thoughts are that as bad as his mom is, he told Colleen to hang up if anyone else answered the phone. Just now bad is his father. He seems a little weak, which is understandable under the circumstances, hopefully he gets stronger physically and mentally. I wonder why he didn't plan his escape from his parents better.
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Chapter 36: Mischievous Mind
CincyKris commented on astone2292's story chapter in Chapter 36: Mischievous Mind
Don't sweat it, you're human (most likely🐶). I was this close to a panic attack at the possibility of losing a Cernunnos sequel! -
You hooked us from the start! Great build up of tension. I'm looking forward to more.
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Chapter 36: Mischievous Mind
CincyKris commented on astone2292's story chapter in Chapter 36: Mischievous Mind
Vincent is in a hell of a lot better position than he was at the start of this series! He is a mated alpha loved by many. He has a family now. His parents death was avenged and his sacrifice saved millions of lives. So, he's not a mage anymore. Neither is his husband, or most of his pack members. That doesn't make them any less valuable. As for the reader's bellyaching about not getting their fairytale ending, screw them! They can go write a 3 book series of they think they can do better. I'm reminded of an episode of Big Bang, in which Amy points out that nothing Indiana Jones did in the first movie changed the ending. True, but it was the journey getting to the end that made the movie. This has been a great journey, keep writing, you're really good at it!
