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Add another one to the car theory! That old car is the key!
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I agree completely with @Carlos Hazday, I really want a visit back at Pinnacle Hold after they are dragonriders! I hope that dad lives just long enough to see his son and his boyfriend exalted as heroes.
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Late to the party again! Stupid job! I like Kage, he's got that hot, rouguish vibe. As a shadow shifter he can get into tight, dark spaces!
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It's become obvious, even to Essell who can be a bit oblivious, that Bouncer can understand everything that Essell says. And as far as Essell saying things, he was a little more like whiney old Essell in this chapter. I'm glad he let Bouncer take his food with him. I still think he should be allowed to help with the interrogation!
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Chapter 20: Shaky Stalkers
CincyKris commented on astone2292's story chapter in Chapter 20: Shaky Stalkers
So does Sheila have a beef with Snyder? Could she be a cop or government do-gooder looking into Snyder's activities with rental units? A rival? I'm guessing not a shifter, or why would she send the two dimwits? The new enforcer could be a problem, I wonder why Cyrus chose him?- 29 comments
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I had the week from hell, storms knocked out power to home and work for a day and a half. My full freezers got cleaned out, contents moved, contents moved back. Temperature was about 95°. Most of my followed authors posted. I'm catching up today. I believe some grilled salmon and cheap wine is in my forecast tonight!
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So you have just confirmed that Kage is a shapeshifter! A shadow shapeshifter?
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They could be the gay Ghostbusters! I love it!
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I loved this mystery, I felt like I was watching a series on BBC AMERICA! I was surprised to find out that Trevor and Jack were an item, but I was right about it being Trevor down the well and Bob the Builder being involved. I enjoyed the realistic pace and will miss our weekly guessing games. I certainly wouldn't object to visiting with these friends again in a few years!
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The notification of this posting got lost amid all the notifications of another story I'm following, I'm so glad I found it! This is absolutely my favorite sci-fi series! You are weaving a very complex web of players effectively, without getting lost in the details. I also enjoy the realistic take on humans, as opposed to more idyllic one most often used in futuristic novels. The in-fighting on Earth amidst the fighting a genocidal enemy above earth, reminds me of what we are doing now in real life. We have people fighting amongst ourselves while we could unite against a common enemy (like global warming for instance). This unfortunately is probably exactly how we would react in the future! Can't wait to see how Shay, Mira, and Elia will handle the new Herald. Will they use Shay's new gifts from Dagen?
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Exciting start! I already want to know more.
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I am very glad you survived all that! I had much more positive experiences watching sports. Although I'm epically bad at playing them!
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This is the book I prioritized over all others. One of the most satisfying, best written, funniest stories I have read. This is better than anything you will pay to read.
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I think my favorite is when the quarterback pitches a strike to the point guard for the game winning goal!
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This was a fun chapter, though not completely free of self doubt, it was the least amount of negative thinking Alec has had. I had to laugh at poor Alec having to watch a "sports ball news show".
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I'm guessing the baby is arriving! Hospitals are not the most romantic honeymoon destination, but you got to do what you got to do.
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Nice chapter. It sounds like the major is putting his money to good use.
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Bouncer to the rescue!!! I can't wait until Essell figures out that Bouncer is way more than a giant great dane!
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Chapter 26: More Talking
CincyKris commented on Demiurge's story chapter in Chapter 26: More Talking
I think Kenji is right. Most people do so much waffling back and forth because we refuse to commit to big decisions, unless someone else supports them. If Alec wants to move back, then he should. Let Finn adjust to his decision instead of guiding him towards a different one. And I'm happy you survived the weekend.- 37 comments
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I think Christian/John coming clean is a good thing for everyone. I wasn't entirely comfortable with his decision to lie. If it was to get the guests more comfortable with him, then that blows up in in his face when they find out, which it did. I am not surprised at the mixed reaction, I doubt I would trust him if I were them. It would take him regaining that trust over time. Poor decision to start out with.
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I hope the major comes out ok, I also hope this incident will reconnect him to his friends, and to his money (of which he is still unaware).
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Chapter 11 - One Day at a Time
CincyKris commented on James Matthews's story chapter in Chapter 11 - One Day at a Time
I feel like Puppy has finally grown up. I hope you revisit their world in the future. I also hope he enjoys his outback vacation without getting too distracted by hunky Australian boys! Remember --- study, pay off debts, become an adult! I would love to see a time jump to Puppy running the group home! -
I had actually heard of that, no doubt from my many years of research in forensics (AKA watching CSI and NCIS).
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Who is in the well????? This question is renting space in my head! I still guess that it's Trevor, the only one who directly knows he went to Australia is Jenny, and we obviously can't trust her. Where is Jack's ghost when you need him?!
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Lovely story, we got to see the beginnings of The Boot and the reasoning behind John/Christian.
