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    Chapter 5

    CincyKris commented on Mancunian's story chapter in Chapter 5

    I think Christian/John coming clean is a good thing for everyone. I wasn't entirely comfortable with his decision to lie. If it was to get the guests more comfortable with him, then that blows up in in his face when they find out, which it did. I am not surprised at the mixed reaction, I doubt I would trust him if I were them. It would take him regaining that trust over time. Poor decision to start out with.
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    Chapter 1

    CincyKris commented on Mancunian's story chapter in Chapter 1

    I hope the major comes out ok, I also hope this incident will reconnect him to his friends, and to his money (of which he is still unaware).
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    I feel like Puppy has finally grown up. I hope you revisit their world in the future. I also hope he enjoys his outback vacation without getting too distracted by hunky Australian boys! Remember --- study, pay off debts, become an adult! I would love to see a time jump to Puppy running the group home!
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    Death

    CincyKris commented on Mawgrim's story chapter in Death

    I had actually heard of that, no doubt from my many years of research in forensics (AKA watching CSI and NCIS).
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    Death

    CincyKris commented on Mawgrim's story chapter in Death

    Who is in the well????? This question is renting space in my head! I still guess that it's Trevor, the only one who directly knows he went to Australia is Jenny, and we obviously can't trust her. Where is Jack's ghost when you need him?!
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    Part 7

    CincyKris commented on Mancunian's story chapter in Part 7

    Lovely story, we got to see the beginnings of The Boot and the reasoning behind John/Christian.
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    Part 5

    CincyKris commented on Mancunian's story chapter in Part 5

    I read your father's story, very heartwarming. I believe we are now approaching the beginnings of the night shelter? The Simons in life serve to teach us what not to do and what is really important!
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    Part 2

    CincyKris commented on Mancunian's story chapter in Part 2

    As an adult, John's response to his first wet dream seems an over-reaction, but anyone who has spent time around young teens, can tell you that extreme reactions are the norm. It's amazing the vast majority of us make it through the hormonal hell of puberty!
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    Part 1

    CincyKris commented on Mancunian's story chapter in Part 1

    Hmmm, is this our John from The Boot? But then why would his "real name" be Christian, not the other way around? Or, is the young chauffeur our hero? Intriguing!
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    Sorry, I meant to say that first, he should zip over to Alaska and catch a salmon for RJ. I have always wanted to go to Alaska!
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    If I were Vincent, I would zip home and pick up my sweetie, drop him off in my bed, zip over to Maine, grab some lobster take-out, zip back to my hotel room, eat, then unzip!
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    I look forward to the interview with Reardon, I wonder if Vincent will be able to keep quiet, and if Reardon will let him. I like RJ, in some ways he is the polar opposite of Vincent 😁. Sorry, I couldn't resist.
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    At least they are both talking, I'm not entirely sure they are doing much listening. Both are still stuck inside their own viewpoints and are having problems looking at the situation as a truly shared experience. But, it sounds like they finally have the same goal, so I'm hopeful. Alec made a huge step forward in tackling his mental health issues, most of the risks were made last chapter, but this chapter was about sticking to his decision and not letting himself spiral with negative thoughts.
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    Chapter 7

    CincyKris commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 7

    I'm out. This just doesn't make any sense.
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    Chapter 6

    CincyKris commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 6

    Sorry, I just can't get past the glaring continuity issues. It's as if the last book didn't take place at all! It's set 3 years after the last book ended (the prom was set in 2000), yet Peter is now 16???? Andrew doesn't seem to be a coach, Rajik and Farah are suddenly in the inner circle, and the engagement of Lisa and Jeff happened in 2000.
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    I got your back! And who says a zip line has to be longer than .2 acres? It's not the length that counts, it's the ride! Wait, what were we talking about?
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    Hell yea!!! Think of all the hidden spots you could hide in, the banisters that could be slid down, the turrets! I mean who doesn't love a good turret!
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    Strength

    CincyKris commented on Mawgrim's story chapter in Strength

    Is @Carlos HazdayFarrah?
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    I love it -- kbois fanfiction, we need a new tag!
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    There is if we want a new shifter story! Don't you want to know what Caleb is up to in his struggle for redemption?
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    We had camping at a small primitive campground in the hills of Kentucky with my dad's side of the family. Swimming in the river, running around with no adult supervision (the old cousins were responsible for keeping us alive). I can remember as clearly as if it were yesterday (instead of 40 years ago) a dozen of us cousins aged 8 to 15 sitting on old picnic tables drinking Dr. Peppers from 16 oz. bottles at dusk watching the bats fly around eating mosquitoes. I can smell the campfire and hear the river.
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    But the castle has a carriage house! And 10 bathrooms!
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    Strength

    CincyKris commented on Mawgrim's story chapter in Strength

    Wonderful chapter, just like the second to last act of a murder mystery. The last act will tell us the who's and why's. Just wish the end wasn't coming so soon! We all had Jenny pegged as a conspirator, but I would agree with @centexhairysubthat the lack of Trevor in this scene suggests he is down the well. Jenny certainty has turned the money pilfered from the cinema into a lot more. I wonder if Bob the Builder and Jenny are in cahoots? Will Jack's spirit get some rest?
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    JayLoe's new home even has a treehouse! Sounds perfect for cousin camp! I was seriously impressed with Loren's personal growth in this chapter.
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    Crows???
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