CincyKris
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I believe that Ash just verbally committed to a long-term relationship with Cove: Well, there is always next year,” Cove taunted. "I am holding you to that…." Ash griped. “Deal.”
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My favorite chapter so far! I love Bruce!!!!! Bonus -- Marc's wall is starting to show signs of toppling. Also, did I mention I love Bruce. Perhaps a story of his own might be in our future?
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I can't help but wonder if we are unaware of some hidden reason Marc is staying in the closet. I mean if it's just the town gossip, he has admitted he already gets that. If he came out, it would just be different gossip. I can't imagine sweet Aunt May would reject him. What has caused Marc to hide so stubbornly?
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My first memory when I heard Raquel passed was her hilarious episode of Seinfeld. I think Mark should take some advice from Jerry from another episode -- "not that there's anything wrong with it"! Really Mark, there is absolutely nothing wrong with being gay, I think even Aunt May might agree. Won't know if you don't try. Or is Aunt May and the town just an excuse to not put yourself out there?
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Once he realizes that Bouncer figured out how to work the elevator will Essell finally agree that he is sentient?
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I have family in Florida, where estate sales should be considered an Olympic sport! I love the start! I appreciate your writing style, you introduce information in such a natural, conversational way. I'm excited for this story to unfold.
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Chapter 7-Epilogue and Author's Notes
CincyKris commented on kbois's story chapter in Chapter 7-Epilogue and Author's Notes
I'm eagerly awaiting whythef*#knot's first story!- 95 comments
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For the record, I was screaming coconut (well, in my head, I’m reading this at work). When @weinerdogsaid Germans, I almost peed myself! Great chapter, even though The Stoners lost. I’m not going to hold a grudge.
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This is a great mystery, psychological thriller, and love story. It will catch you quickly and hold you tight. I would suggest you not start until you have time to binge, but reading as it was posted was a fun ride. I won't give away any details not given in the summary, because guessing at scenarios is half the fun of reading a mystery.
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Thank you so much for this ending, and for the whole story! I breathed a sigh of relief when I read this line: It wasn’t that he feared their reaction to the truth. He simply didn’t want to take the time to deal with it. If that was self-serving, then so be it. He deserved a bit of selfishness. That told me Jase's intentions from the start of his journey, not to home, but to closure. And he is Jase now, Michael is gone forever. I loved his encounter with Claire. I wonder if Phillip felt the same kind of soul-healing as Jase? This story is perfect as is, but a follow-up would be well appreciated.
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The Korner Krew thrives on minute details and red herrings! We have adopted you as a favored author. This has been a great ride!
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Yes!!!!! A bittersweet not quite yet ending. I'm encouraged by this not being complete. Great outcome for Macy, a better outcome would be for her to be adopted by Lucas and Jase! The best outcome would also involve your dear readers discovering Jase's background before he returns to stay with Lucas and Macy.
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Oh Essell, I thought we were past this phase of me screaming at you while you do something stupid! Please let Bouncer be smarter than Essell!!!
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I want to feel sympathy for Swift, if he is just trying to finish his last number and get his life back, but I can't. He destroyed too many lives along the way. I'm hoping that Lucas can be healed without endangering Macy.
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Well our predictions were confirmed! Swift is a bad guy, but does he think of himself as a bad guy? Is he just doing his “job”, like Jase? Is he on his final number too!
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I'd like to see someone try to send home the silly, stubborn, new vamp!
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I think Gideon is going to try to kill the remaining brother. Is he his sire? Or were the discarded ashes from his sire? I am halfway sure that Gideon knows he is being followed by his bloodsong.
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I have a different take on the boss. He was repeating what another "persuader" told him. He did kill Macy's parents because he thought her dad stole from him, but only because he was directed to think this way. Macy's dad didn't steal anything. The boss' inability to explain "he stole from me" under Jase's power is the real clue. Just like the HR guy from the hotel that was unable to explain why Macy's dad was "not a good fit" despite gushing about his skills. There is a bad guy with Jase's powers working against them. He probably has Macy.
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Macy's mom said she hated lying to her. I'm pretty sure Macy knew, and is aware of everything. I'm certain there are no drugs involved and that Macy was always the target. Macy is the key to everything.
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These flashbacks add so much understanding into Jase's mindset. His reactions in the last chapter make perfect sense.
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Engineer Benson - Chapter 3 - July 13, 1993
CincyKris commented on Wayne Gray's story chapter in Engineer Benson - Chapter 3 - July 13, 1993
I like that you're writing this as an alternate universe, you can make your own rules. If this were real life, the military would probably have already staged an "accident" and torched Knox County off the earth, with Wayne and Mark dying as collateral damage! I think the move to Bob's is a great idea. Staying at Wayne's would have been waiting to die. People need hope, otherwise why bother? -
I don’t know if Macy’s parents were involved in any drugs at all, I think they were collateral damage and Macy was always the target. I’m pretty sure the drugs were planted by the murderers. I’m not sure if Swift believes the drugs story or is going with it for cover, he is still a big mystery. Jase losing contact with Macy is troubling, but he still has his persuasive power, so I don’t think the universe is done with him yet.
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Was Macy drawn towards something or someone? Or was something or someone drawn towards her? I liked the theme of the power and evil of greed, the setting exemplifies this idea.
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I think Swift possesses the same power of influence as Jase! He made quick fans of Martinez and Scott. He may or may not actually be a cop, but was at the crime scene and at the station, he could have talked his way in. If he does have the power, then he already knows that Jase and Lucas are immune. Is he a good guy or a bad guy? This mystery is getting better and better!
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Finally! Hopefully this will start a new journey with his personal and professional life!
