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I was able to finally read the comments without getting "cached"! Most of my thoughts have already been expressed prior to page 6, but I'm wondering most about Kage. Is he sentient inside Elijah? Or more of an emotional presence? Is he able to see the big picture now and will guide Elijah to find the pups? To find his mate?
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Chapter 30: Tricky Tussle
CincyKris commented on astone2292's story chapter in Chapter 30: Tricky Tussle
I think all 4 characters involved in duels learned something, maybe not as much as a certain bear involved in a very different kind of duel!- 40 comments
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Chapter 63 A Brilliant Move
CincyKris commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 63 A Brilliant Move
I've read a few really good shifter stories, but Morningstar: The Malaise is still my favorite! -
Chapter 29: Mountain March
CincyKris commented on astone2292's story chapter in Chapter 29: Mountain March
Nice surprise this evening! I would love to see the sparring match between Yakob and Cyrus!- 30 comments
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I'm all caught up to this adventurous story! I'm looking forward to their next trial.
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Thanks for the CJ fix! I loved the throw down of the reporter, I would love for reality to follow fiction! I'm excited for Liebe, she's going to have a room for for a princess! It's good for the guys to be surrounded by family, CJ needs constant grounding to keep him from flying too high too soon.
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My first thought when the baddie showed up was "Trevor or red herring", I think that Trevor is most likely, but @drpaladin might be right. The boss may or may not already know about Trevor. I can't imagine he would be in cahoots with Huntington, he is causing problems that would negatively effect all supernaturals. We haven't heard what happened to the elemental lady, I think she will turn up again.
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I think that Timok is on our side. I hope he is on our side. Not all the "good guys" are wonderful people, it helps to spice things up. I also hope that Timok is right about Garjah being able to get away without help.
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I can't believe I got to read this chapter on page one of the comments! Beautiful first part of the chapter, dreadful end! I have faith you wouldn't kill off our co-hero, but I'm mad about the traitor! What about Kage's boss, does he know about Trevor? Was he in on it? If not, he's going to be pissed!
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Chapter 27: Joyful Joining
CincyKris commented on astone2292's story chapter in Chapter 27: Joyful Joining
I'm predicting all sorts of wonderful grilled meats! Who's going to make Vincent's mac & cheese? He's going to be way too busy!- 26 comments
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Chapter 27: Joyful Joining
CincyKris commented on astone2292's story chapter in Chapter 27: Joyful Joining
I wanna go to the reception!!! I'm like two hours away, just pm me the address! Very moving and satisfying chapter.- 26 comments
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Thanks for the surprise this morning. I think Brion will fit in well with CJ and his increasingly large group of satellites. I'm excited we have entered the elected official stage of CJ's saga!
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Garjah and Timok were heading to wherever they were keeping the attacker who is in a self-induced coma. So, whoever is behind the attack knows about Timok's new drug that can wake the guy, and they had to stop them before they got to the coma guy. I don't think many people, other than the Kardoval know about the drug. I doubt that Timok is involved, Essell would have recognized his voice. I love the little hints that Bouncer is sentient, I hope that Essell finds out soon!
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Chapter 26: Telepathic Teller
CincyKris commented on astone2292's story chapter in Chapter 26: Telepathic Teller
Now we know why Stefan killed Vincent's parents. Greedy bastard wants another affinity! I hope that Vinny gets his new affinity in time for the showdown. It's been a little while since he's had a visit from a god. Great news about the coven, and Dave and Stacy, and Tierney and Morinne. I wonder if the baby will be a wolf or tiger? Wolger? Tilf? No, that probably stands for for teacher I'd like to .......nevermind.- 40 comments
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We now have confirmation that Huntington is connected with the stolen pups, can we pleeeeeeease bring in the Montana crew now????? Sorry, I haven't had that much whine with breakfast for awhile.
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Chapter 32 - Len's Lucky Escape (Hopefully)
CincyKris commented on James Matthews's story chapter in Chapter 32 - Len's Lucky Escape (Hopefully)
I hope Len gets out of this ok, even though he was a moron for ever choosing that woman over her son. Funny, I didn't hear an apology to Luke for his despicable behavior. So, the stalker got dissolved in acid, not sure I feel too sorry for him, since he did try to kill Luke. I assume they used plastic drums, as anyone who has watched "Breaking Bad" can tell you that metal containers do not work well. I'm concerned for Luke, Duke, and Bear. I don't think Clyde and the others will let them just go, they know too much.- 18 comments
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Chapter 25: Bumpy Banquets
CincyKris commented on astone2292's story chapter in Chapter 25: Bumpy Banquets
Thanks for the carb load this morning!- 30 comments
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Chapter 31 - Trying To Look Forward
CincyKris commented on James Matthews's story chapter in Chapter 31 - Trying To Look Forward
I wondered over the Josh comment as well. If the point was that all of his fake mom's bio kids were tall except him, why add Josh into that. If all of Scott's bio kids are tall, wouldn't Leander be tall too? Inquiring minds want to know. -
Wow, she went out in a blaze of glory! Great job on pace and tension, I am looking forward to the showdown (and the takedowns)!
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Chapter 30 - More Fate: Leander's Secret
CincyKris commented on James Matthews's story chapter in Chapter 30 - More Fate: Leander's Secret
Ok, my yard of weeds looks lovely now, I'm all showered and clean, now I've got some questions that James won't answer. Why has Leander been keeping this secret from Luke, since he was pretty sure Elaine was targeting Len. Luke absolutely has to share this with Dad, not sharing could be fatal! Why was Luke the favorite of the cult mom when he was the bastard child of her husband? Is Duke a half or full brother? Is Josh a half or full brother? If Elaine didn't know about the beating, will she be mad? Not care? Be happy? -
Chapter 30 - More Fate: Leander's Secret
CincyKris commented on James Matthews's story chapter in Chapter 30 - More Fate: Leander's Secret
75°!!! Where in Ohio are you? I'm in Cincinnati and it's been in the 90's all week. How's your backyard grill action? Cocktails? I'm might need to come for a visit. -
Chapter 30 - More Fate: Leander's Secret
CincyKris commented on James Matthews's story chapter in Chapter 30 - More Fate: Leander's Secret
Well, hell!!!! This complicates matters! I have to think about this while I go mow my grass!- 24 comments
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Even though I know the outcome of the hatching, I am still experiencing the tension along with the candidates!
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Chapter 29 - Caught With My Pants Down
CincyKris commented on James Matthews's story chapter in Chapter 29 - Caught With My Pants Down
I wonder how much Len knows about Elaine, the lying, evil, scam artist. If she brought her son to hang out, then Leander and Duke also know him. What is Elaine's relationship with the other evil witch? -
Chapter 28 - It's Good To Talk
CincyKris commented on James Matthews's story chapter in Chapter 28 - It's Good To Talk
I'm glad that Luke is on better terms with his dad, but unless (hopefully until) he ditches Elaine, I have no respect for the man. She is a deal breaker for me. Sad news for Leander, but he seems determined to walk again. He's also going to need that determination to deal with his criminally insane family. I wonder where Duke drove off to? So, you ran out of "L" names and now you are going with rhyming names? Good luck with "Leander" !
