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    Life as a Family

    CincyKris commented on Mrsgnomie's story chapter in Life as a Family

    None of us had any doubt that Loren and Jay would make great dads. I think those are the luckiest little girls in the world. I loved the dynamic between Aiden and Carson, it was 100% realistic, I could see Carson's pouts from here! Cousincamp road trip sounds like a blast, it brings back memories I have of camping with my cousins growing up.
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    Kavan has a very cool new gift! I think he was watching his brothers, he needs to be very careful! Mother, Simone, and Warren would kill or torture his brothers if they found out.
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    Chapter 1

    CincyKris commented on Krista's story chapter in Chapter 1

    My initial thoughts are that as bad as his mom is, he told Colleen to hang up if anyone else answered the phone. Just now bad is his father. He seems a little weak, which is understandable under the circumstances, hopefully he gets stronger physically and mentally. I wonder why he didn't plan his escape from his parents better.
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    Don't sweat it, you're human (most likely🐶). I was this close to a panic attack at the possibility of losing a Cernunnos sequel!
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    Part 1

    CincyKris commented on Krista's story chapter in Part 1

    You hooked us from the start! Great build up of tension. I'm looking forward to more.
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    Vincent is in a hell of a lot better position than he was at the start of this series! He is a mated alpha loved by many. He has a family now. His parents death was avenged and his sacrifice saved millions of lives. So, he's not a mage anymore. Neither is his husband, or most of his pack members. That doesn't make them any less valuable. As for the reader's bellyaching about not getting their fairytale ending, screw them! They can go write a 3 book series of they think they can do better. I'm reminded of an episode of Big Bang, in which Amy points out that nothing Indiana Jones did in the first movie changed the ending. True, but it was the journey getting to the end that made the movie. This has been a great journey, keep writing, you're really good at it!
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    Perfect ending to an exceptional story! Thank you for all the time, creativity, and emotion you put in to this. You left your readers with something we will remember!
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    Beautiful wedding, it couldn't have been more perfect for Andy and Zander!
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    I'm with a couple of other readers thinking they are honeymooning at Eustace's. Hopefully. Grandma was a nice surprise, no wonder Andy's uncle couldn't get a hold of her.
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    I'm excited about Nonna, Marjorie, and Eustace all meeting at the wedding! And as for the homicidal dream and pondering whether he's a future monster, yes I think that qualifies as an emergency! Call your doctor!
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    Thank for this chapter. I think that old farmers have a very practical way of looking at things. They're much less concerned about what others think, that frees them to think however they see fit. As he pointed out, same sex attraction is something most farmers have seen amongst animals. Eustace is a fantastic character!
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    I have been reading this a chapter or two a day, trying to make it last. I like having a good novel to fill the time in between updates of my "in process" followed stories. But I have been binging this wonderful story on my day off, instead of the many chores I should be doing. You made me tear up when Andy saw the photo of his uncle and cousins, and actual crying when he read the letter from Eustace! I'm so glad I read one more chapter! Well, I guess I'll go do some laundry now (said in the voice of eeyore).
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    I was hoping we would see Eustace again, and would get Ambrose as part of the package. He wasn't necessarily a bad guy, just concerned about his father. Maybe he could even be helpful with his possible legal issues in Carlsberg.
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    I googled marriage age in the US, and discovered most states allow 16 year olds to marry with parental and/or judge consent. I can see the adults trying to talk them out of it, not sure if they'll give in. I feel like Carlsberg is looming ahead of us.
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    Ha----I was right about Mrs. Chandler and bruce! I loved the court room beat-down and the race. Andy running towards a goal instead of away from life is a great and significant change.
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    I wonder if Mrs. Chandler is related to Bruce? Or goes to church with his family? I have faith that Garrett and the judge will protect Andy.
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    I'm not discounting the good things his therapy has accomplished, but that one night with Zander has healed Andy in a way counseling never could! And in an aspect of his life very important to a teenager. Many victims of childhood sexual abuse never have a healthy adult sex life. Zander happened at just the right time!
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    Beanie Babies

    CincyKris commented on Mrsgnomie's story chapter in Beanie Babies

    Such a happy chapter!!!!! My favorite line -- Bundled in their blankets, they look like burritos, not the massive things you get at Chipotle, more like something off the dollar menu at Taco Bell.
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    Chapter 48 Scars

    CincyKris commented on Parker Owens's story chapter in Chapter 48 Scars

    Those were giant leaps forward for Andy. I hope he gets to the point when he can truly accept that he is worthy of love.
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    I have faith that Vincent will prevail and land in Mason's arm. I'm looking forward to the battle to get there! If anyone gets reincarnated, I vote for Yakob. But not as a chicken. Maybe as a son for two alphas??????
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    I feel like we are in the healing chapters now!
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    This was the most satisfying chapter so far. Andy was so brave sharing his story, and showing them his scars. He has shouldered so much on his own, both with his dad and after he ran. It is time to share the burden and let people help him move forward.
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    Finally!!!!! Thank you for this giant jump forward for Andy.
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    I made the mistake of starting this during my lunch break. Not only did I fight years (damn allergies!), I couldn't finish it till now. Wonderful story of love, mourning, survivor's guilt, and starting over. You write emotion better than anyone!
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    I enjoyed seeing Andy being a normal teenager! Well, other than living in the school library closet! Great chapter!
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