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That was quite the wake up, for me as well! What a nice hot start to this cold December morning!
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Beautiful chapter! They made sure that Bryce's first Christmas with them was loving and meaningful, something he had never had before.
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Darien and Elias created some good karma, hopefully it continues.
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I hope that Kendrick will enhance the team, not cause division. All their time has been spent running and reacting, Elias and Darien don't know much about each other, hopefully that will change.
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I wonder if Kendrick will request to come with the boys? He doesn't seem a good fit for the sleepy outpost. It's a good thing they don't get fresh news, I don't think the magistrate would have been helpful.
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A Lazy Day by the Pool
CincyKris commented on Late to the party's story chapter in A Lazy Day by the Pool
I'm really enjoying this story. The nonlinear presentation enhances the "slice of life" aspect. I've said it before, but it couldn't be more true -- Bryce was tremendously lucky with parents, the second time around! -
Great comments on this story we all found this year, 11 years after posting! @raven1 I'm going to guess the colonists will be less than friendly, more territorial and "we don't get many foreigners around these parts", but hopefully not. @centexhairysubI believe the engineering section was torn off in a battle, I think it's totalled! @DohaI was thinking the same thing about Elias. He couldn't be any more useful, considering their circumstances.
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Like @drpaladin, I had forgotten all about pirating, other than that episode of Seinfeld! The technology to pirate (VCRs) and sell them cheaply has come and gone in my lifetime. I don't even have a DVD player anymore. But movie theaters are still here, they just look a little different. There will always be some new way to watch tv and movies, but I don't think any of them give the feel of communally watching a movie on the big screen. The feeling is why they are still here.
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I think the bossman was just trying to cover his own ass. Dead men tell no tales. Very exciting end to the chapter!
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I went back and read a few chapters covering Essell and Garjah's visit with the Galactic Council. The following quote was our introduction to the Aqnars: Alae and Lipro were both Aqnars and could not be exposed to sunlight. As one of the oldest known alien species on the Council, they were often the ones who greeted the newest. I didn't get a feel that they were either benevolent or malevolent, they seemed sort of balanced. I find it interesting that Garjah has a second house with another safe room. It would seem that he did not entirely trust the Kardoval for quite awhile.
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Exciting start, this future feels like a space version of occupied France in WWII. What's on the surface (for show for the occupying aliens) is not the whole story.
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P is a boy! And he is a singer. Great chapter. In 4 years he has gone from a shy, withdrawn, sad little boy to an outgoing, popular, happy young man. All because of his wonderful dads.
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Master Caspian's Collection
CincyKris commented on Aditus's story chapter in Master Caspian's Collection
Who is the only other witch vamp that Caspian just discovered? Have we met them yet? -
Master Caspian's Collection
CincyKris commented on Aditus's story chapter in Master Caspian's Collection
This is the line I kept coming back to : until today I don’t know of any other successful turnings of a witch but mine.” Until today???? Is Kavan a witch also? -
I envy you reading this for the first time! You are in for a great ride!
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This chapter felt like a South Park version of Titanic. Great job evoking the feeling of chaos amidst nostalgic endings.
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I loved the chapter, but what shipwreck? Did I miss a shipwreck????
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Finally, Ash's protective armor is cracking!
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I believe this day will go down in their history books (computers?tech?) as the day the revolution spread to the people! But only if they succeed, as history is written by the victors.
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My predictions: P is a man. Although this matters little to me. That he is happy and in love is what matters. Bryce is studying ballet. It's how he made money to afford the rings. P is studying music. Alex and Nico will make kick-ass grandpas!
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I was reading this as I was eating dinner, homemade chili. The meats were cooked in my favorite skillet, a 110 year old cast iron #10! I have also trained first-ever-job teenagers over the years and have learned that I must be very very specific for many of them. What we feel is self explanatory or common knowledge, is not necessarily the case for kids. Great chapter, I'm really getting into this story.
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As great as Spirit Wolves was, I think this is even better! There is a great combination of romance, action, mystery, and comedy! I happen to like well-written shifter stories, but even if it's not your favorite, this series stands on its own as great reading. And the comments are a hoot! I felt like I was part of a community enjoying and speculating!
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As sexy as Kage was, don't forget about Jett the hot cop from When Opportunity Knocks! Sorry for being so late to the game, I was in a car accident driving home from work (no injuries, other than my car). At least the story was a bright spot for my evening!
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Kavan is movin' on up to the Silver Spire. He threw a George Jefferson size temper tantrum, although not entirely unwarranted. I hope he learns to handle (at least outwardly) his temper better, he will need control to navigate the awkward relationship between himself, Konstantin, and Katherine. And for Gideon, that's going to be an interesting relationship!
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Konstantin was attacked by some one. Delacour clan? Witch? Gideon? Why would Henri want to expose magical beings to humans? He may have been smarter than Elvira (love the name), but he was just as bat-shit crazy!
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