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No...I don't want Sarah to die...I want her to be imprisoned...For people like her,death is too easy.. We still don't know who Father is ....
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Indeed...he needs to be burnt too..
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One down ..three to go!...Brad .Sarah..Abernathy.... I almost felt sorry for Gallagher until I remembered the smirk on Sarah's face in the plane when Matt realized they were indeed being renditioned..
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He had it coming..he had it coming...He only had himself to blame..
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You Should See Yourself
Seraph28 commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in You Should See Yourself
For me this is a chapter about dichotomy...About control and vulnerability as displayed by Alexander and Lyn.. In their intimate session and the after math .. we see this dichotomy come into play with the way both take turns to relinquish control to the other .We then see the stoic and emotionally A intelligent Alexander in a rare moment of vulnerability as @Cane23 pointed out....Personally for me I felt like this whole chapter and interaction between the two fellas was a form of emotional undressing even though in the case of Lyn it's temporary for now.. -
See?...that's why I mentioned it would be an exercise in futility ..
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One would think by now am used to 'endings' but this was something else...it's more like a respite, like a stop over before the journey continues ... Like the past chapter ,this one needs to be savoured ..I feel like comment is just excess embellishment... Thank you @LittleBuddhaTW
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Please Literary Diety. Don't take away our Jake😂😂😂.. That being said ...you have really set the ball running in these last three chapters Sir...I would say we get a bet rolling with my fellow readers on who the killer is and who Paul's paramour was but it would be an exercise in futility!..You Sir don't make it easy on us.😂
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You Should See Yourself
Seraph28 commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in You Should See Yourself
Why is it always a cold.shower after a sultry scene @LeeSA....a cold beverage can equally do wonders ..😂 That being said....like you am also collecting my thoughts on this chapter ..it was a doozy of information😂 -
Chapter 2: Julian feels trapped in everything
Seraph28 commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 2: Julian feels trapped in everything
Someone once said ..sexual orientation is fluid or something of that sort😂😂...just kidding... That being said.. fact that the boy is closer or even same age as Julian speaks volumes 😂😂 -
Eh..who are we to refuse the offering...thank you Sir😂
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God..!..Brady never seems to catch a break...eh.. I hope he gets a win soon...because those hits must hurt like hell..
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Chapter 2: Julian feels trapped in everything
Seraph28 commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 2: Julian feels trapped in everything
Oh that household is nasty!...When was reading at the beginning of the chapter,I had hope that Robert was different in a way...but I guess that was too much to hope for. Imagine the pain that Julian must be going through after having been made to feel like he should feel grateful that he was adopted and all the time Robert had a biological son.. who could have handled the emotional abuse coming from the expectations.. One aspect I didn't like was a hint of a Dean/Julian romance...that would be so out of the blue and unearned😂. Thank you! -
I was watching some Chinese TV series yesterday and coincidentally there was a scene where two characters are playing Xiangqi( the Chinese chess) and then one character mentions that one must always exercise utmost calm during the most chaotic moment...Reading this chapter made me remember that scene. Hubris is such a bitch.Abernathy has always overestimated his strategic mind ,thinking he has no equal...Guess this chapter just disabused him of that notion and now the die is cast.. Hmm...super marvelous action sequence and thrill Mr.Lydon🫡
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[Memory, Junior Year, November] – Strategic Mistakes
Seraph28 commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in [Memory, Junior Year, November] – Strategic Mistakes
Oh Lyn ..you slippery lad!..Sometimes I feel like Lyn is in the wrong profession...the way he is able to negotiate that encounter with Quinn and Joe ought to have a thesis written on it😂 -
[Memory, Junior Year, November] – Strategic Mistakes
Seraph28 commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in [Memory, Junior Year, November] – Strategic Mistakes
I personally disagree with you on the first one @Geemeedee...At least we would have gotten a hint of it from earlier...Like others have mentioned many times...Lyn just over thinks and in doing so he can't see the forest for the trees.. -
And trigger an international crisis?😂
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Damn that cliff hanger!..😂
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Mr.Aterovis...sometimes I wonder how you feel about Killian Kendall😂...I don't know how a character can be equal parts frustrating, infuriating ,intelligent, dumb and likeable at the same time....That lad is a bag of contradictions....never read a character who is so self absorbed and yet empathetic at the same time.. Thank you!
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Chapter 2: Echoes of the Ender
Seraph28 commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 2: Echoes of the Ender
Well sometimes things are not as they seem....but if we are to go complex...we could argue about free will and choice😂😂 -
Chapter 2: Echoes of the Ender
Seraph28 commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 2: Echoes of the Ender
Because you had not introduced all the main characters yet...especially the one who appears in the story cover ...The boy!..For some reason I don't have the feeling that the boy is the evil incarnate ..but maybe I will be surprised😉😂 -
Oh God!...my heart broke with that story...2 years of that torture ...Brady is stronger than he gives himself credit
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Chapter 2: Echoes of the Ender
Seraph28 commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 2: Echoes of the Ender
@vanalas...I am making a new assessment...you took long in writing a story of this genre..This story slaps big time😂...and it's just chapter 2.. I cannot wait long enough for me😉 -
This is unlike your usual offerings...and am all for it! ..I have a feeling it's going to be a crazy ride... Thank you!
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Oh Elinore you have fucked up really badly!...Now I find myself excited for the family to tear her a new one.. That being said...Josh is in real trouble now.... That was really intense Mr.Burton.
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