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  1. Seraph28

    Chapter 14

    Especially when served by a dapper Mexican...who loathes barbarity😂
  2. Seraph28

    Chapter 14

    Looks Like you have a side Sir 😂 😜
  3. Seraph28

    Chapter 14

    More like ...he is fucked and he knows it😂....Even Smith was left sputtering like an idiot ..at least from that phone call.. Good morning...
  4. Seraph28

    Chapter 1

    Another supernatural tinged story...count me in already! I like Michael....he is the wilder version of Kane.. That is going to be a lot of fun..reading about these two brothers I mean
  5. You and @vanalas ought to start a club...He also knows how to wring as much despair as he can out of his characters....Chapter after chapter see his protagonists put through the wringer...hihi
  6. A life well lived indeed...I don't know why I didn't feel sad reading this chapter ,when I should have been .. They had a nice 24 years....that is a celebration
  7. Well don't blame a boy for harbouring some faint hope that it's not the case😂
  8. Two chapters?...that is going to be a lot of angst on my side..
  9. Someone is becoming a sociopath perhaps😉😂
  10. Creating a multi-universe are we ...?...one of angst riddled tortured youth perhaps😂
  11. Seraph28

    Chapter 13

    Brutal indeed....it will make Ratatouille's Anton Ego look saintly in comparison😂
  12. Seraph28

    Chapter 13

    Morning.....those Carter boys are perpetually at it anyway..😂 At this point ,I think Silas should just add Loser as his name.
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    Chapter 13

    Finally!...Its raining heavily outside and this chapter couldn't have dropped at a more opportune time like this😂.... The dragon is free at last
  14. Do be kind and easy on the lad Sir😂....He is after all fragile at the moment....any more prodding and he would go over the precipice.. Poor Ryan...indeed
  15. No statement was ever more true😂😂
  16. They are teenagers Sir....that is the part we seem to be forgetting....Am not making excuses here...At that point in time Skylar is openly gay and has accepted himself ....Ryan is just realizing that he is not who the thought he was all a long when it's comes to his sexual orientation... Can you imagine what that can do to a teenager's psyche!.... He is a jock...and playing the part of the jock is his social contract..High school in North America for that matter is all about image...Was he wrong to ignore Sky ..Definitely . One has to remember though that these lads belong to different social groups...they didn't even share lunch tables at all and if memory serves me right their association at that point was clandestine..They were meeting under the context of tutoring at Sky's home and not hanging out in public. So I ask my fellow readers, did anyone really expect a struggling Ryan at that point to ditch his usual crowd to come and hang with Skylar at that beach party?. Remember it's all about image..High school is hell after all. Plus you had taken time to show us facets of Ryan that he doesn't show to the public and that's why I personally believe that impatience on Skylar's part is what causes what leads to whatever happens after. I like to believe that Ryan was going to find a way to talk to Skylar which he was on his way to do and what did he find...him kissing and being ass grabbed by Gabriel...I would like to hear someone honestly tell me that any talking between Skylar and Ryan was possible after that.. I agree that Skylar would bounce back faster than Ryan because he has had longer time to accept who he is..
  17. Easier said than done....a crush turned into something more...even though it was not watered ...That is why I believe it hurts for both of them...it was more than a crush
  18. I believe there we disagree...the kiss would not have happened if Sky had not let things get that far....and Ryan had not been scared to be himself....so basically things are so because of bad decisions on both sides
  19. Seraph28

    Chapter 12

    I almost forgot.....the Iranian guy was fun ...however for me it was the Israeli guy,Levin..His expression had me laughing like crazy...the way you described how flustered he was .
  20. Seraph28

    Chapter 12

    I wonder do Canadians have folklore bogeymen like say Baba Yaga....it seems to me the Iranians are the bogey men of the current world...those and those pesky Russians.
  21. Seraph28

    Chapter 12

    In one of my previous comments ,I mentioned it's always the quiet ones who we should be wary of ..Good to know the point is driven home to one of the most inept fictional(somewhat😂) US presidents in History ... I for one was happy to see a mention of a Grady....that was awesome... Don't even get me started on whatever that interaction with Peter and West was😂... It was nice to see the Russians thrown off their game..and it was not even intentional..haha
  22. Seraph28

    Chapter 12

    Learnt something new....thanks
  23. Seraph28

    Chapter 12

    No Baileys this time?😉😂
  24. Oh don't see that happening...Arthur would not dare hurt his precious blood ..he would excuse him
  25. They fit well....the rodeo clown and Blake that is ... Don't forget the most important mantra of the story ....'doors, not locks'😂
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