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Chapter 5: Feelings on the edge. But whose?
Seraph28 commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 5: Feelings on the edge. But whose?
MVP: Leonardo I liked how Leonardo burnt Veronica in this chapter...that was a gourmet serving of insults😂😂... Well...I hoped that Zayn would not be another copy of Jace...but guess that is not to be!...What a spineless twat!...what a wuss! Like really?...even Liana and Damian called him out on his bullshit...and he just goes and does the same thing ... I feel like commiting character murder right now😂..Harry and Zayn better not cross my path.- 29 comments
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Like West is a bitter drug for him and yet he cannot help wanting more draughts of that drug.😂
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Looks like Ròkus got a lot to think about.
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That was aggressive foreplay indeed ..I pity Will,Andrew et al who have to witness that on almost regular basis😂
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Thank you..let me check it out
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In this story Mr.Lydon attempts to answer what happens when an unstoppable force of chaos meets an immovable object of order. We are introduced to Steve, a young prodigy, who thrives on chaos and Kenny ,a jock, who is the epitome of order. What follows is beautiful chaos as two opposites try to find middle ground. The pacing , the humour in this piece and the multifaceted characters are captivating . This is a highly recommended piece of work for those who like a laugh!
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I hate it when reality happens😂😂
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How is he a disappointment to you @drpaladin?...Not to seem defensive but some folks just are not cut out for the life that Brian, the Hickey siblings and now Kenny thrive in . As for their romance ,I feel that it takes a while since we are not privy of how much time passes from when they first started seeing each other .
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That was ....freaking marvelous!..the Kenny/Steve assembling...Finally Steve can shut up ...even though it's momentarily 😂😂 On behalf of Kyle and people like us...safe is not boring...😂😂...we just like our stillness because it grounds us . Thank you for this tale Mr.Lydon!
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Like an Arthurian legend....minus the sword pulling of course...or is it the same😂😂😂
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Good to see our resident dwarf bad girl back ...missed her scheming😂..It also now connects her to Josel/Zdain.. Mirror of Dreams is better....it's more profound! Thank you!
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Now what has gone and got our resident bad boy all flustered?😂
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I am 3/4 of Peter....and the rest is Jared
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I knew it!..I figured you are a cross between Jared and Andrew too... Will is just so....'mystical'😂....Do you know the first time I read Breach I got a complex from reading Will .even though he doesn't feature prominently 😂
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That last scene...of Will realising something he had planned to do in the future was happening sooner must have been a jolt to his system... Men propose, God disposes has never been so true.. By the way Sir...who do you consider yourself more like in temperament ? I mean when it comes to Andrew,Jared and Will?. I hope have not asked you that before. Thank you!
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Good morning Sir, The ride is definitely enjoyable...Now could really use some of that coffee too....just woken up this side😉😂
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Oh now you going to make this boy blush😂😂.... You do indeed need that break....this is the longest story you have written...that creative mind could use some respite.. I know when you do eventually come back...you will be a force to reckon with . To channel Cash...😂...'Do not let the road make you forget us'😉
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Chapter 4: The game continues
Seraph28 commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 4: The game continues
He will.just find a way of getting back....pimples always do -
Seth is right....Killian is puritanical...and it sucks tits.... That lad is frustrating ..eh
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Chapter 4: The game continues
Seraph28 commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 4: The game continues
Very much so....that boyo needs to go..like soonest😂 -
I could 'feel' the frustration oozing off from your end when you were talking about the General Assembly Meeting.....I imagine the traffic is heavy on a normal day ...now having that circus in town must make it hell to commute around the areas during that summit.
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Chapter 4: The game continues
Seraph28 commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 4: The game continues
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I see it differently.....the quartet actually gets more in return when you get to think about it....like Blake said...he gives me credible adult cover.. Steve gets the validation he has long sought...and Lids gets her signed edition copy .. I like to think it was a win-win situation
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You and @Cane23 always make insightful comments....It's like you were channeling Daisy Bell with the way you talked about Jackson finally growing up..... I would say Daisy Bell summed it so well Daisy said. "He finally learned to leave what he loves with grace. Took him a while to find the leaving that wasn't abandonin'." She put a hand on his hair, smoothed it back once. "I'm proud of both of you for learnin' to love a thing without ownin' it." In the end they both grew up and realised that love is sacrifice ...Holding onto someone for the sake of it ceases being love...They both come to that truth in their own ways but they eventually get there...and to channel @CasualWanderer82, live in their truth😂😂😂
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That was brutal!..Teenage angst at it worst...Emotions all over the place! For once I concur with you Sir😂😂....I know it's a story but even adults in real life do not articulate their feelings the way Jonah and Nick do in this chapter 😂😂
