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Chapter 8: The day after!
Seraph28 commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 8: The day after!
I guess it was too soon for Leonardo to make that assessment of Adrian... The rotten apple never falls far from the tree after all.. Now that I think about it...he seemed too good to be true...Adrian I mean...He is indeed a shark too ..That part where he told River about growing in a house of sharks...he is one of those accursed sharks... At this point it's starting to become repetitive though ..I mean thats the third time that River has gotten inebriated ..he knows he cannot handle alcohol and yet he finds himself taking... You are starting to do that thing again @vanalas...you know where a smart protagonist keeps falling for a cheap trick over and over again😂😂...It's your specialty after all...I had hoped that it would not happen here...but alas! That being said ....the way Aunt Verr was being shaded at that breakfast table ..was epic!...At this rate am going to just look forward to Leonardo 's zingers😂.... At least we know Veronica and Harry are in cahoots ..they are a pair of broke losers..Was not surprised they are planning on getting their hands on the Monroe fortune...it's reminiscent of those early 2000s telenovelas where there was a scheming family member and a spouse who seek to get their dirty little hands on the family fortune. Thank you for the update . -
Each time you say..that...I get sadder😂
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Indeed...they do.
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What a sad chapter!..The silver lining is that at least Leo subconsciously knew that the ship had moved on..and they were just going through the motions...Even home didn't feel so anymore..
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I agree...that was really cruel of Jordan..to sleep with Leo knowing it was going to be the last time and yet say nothing about it...That's why I have always believed throuples or any polyamorous relationship is asking for trouble .At the end of the day one person will always be excluded... Like you I was happy that Ace finally put that Carter git in his place....he needs to be be accountable for his abuse of Ace .
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Now that is how your drop a cliff hanger😂
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The Major was thorough ..nothing was going to stand in the way of his grand ambition!..Men like that have no scruples and would do anything to make sure their plans were not interfered with
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Chapter 7: The party. What could go wrong?
Seraph28 commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 7: The party. What could go wrong?
There has been an awakening of sorts in Zayn....so maybe we should give him some leeway of sorts... Am sorry about what happened to you .. -
Finally....someone who will not take Killian's bullshit!..That last scene was epic Mr.Aterovis😂...Sometimes Killian seems to think he can fool or evade everyone...Sabrina was onto him...but let it go because she wanted out of that room...Chris on the other hand is not letting it go...
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Chapter 7: The party. What could go wrong?
Seraph28 commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 7: The party. What could go wrong?
You are not alone @Cane23...😂...Like it was hard to keep up with the last half of the chapter ....folks all acting contrary to the script😂..the fake boyfriend causing all sorts of chaos just by showing up .is what threw me .- 22 comments
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Chapter 7: The party. What could go wrong?
Seraph28 commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 7: The party. What could go wrong?
Oh poor Harry...I almost feel sorry for him..Almost!..He is going to find out the hard way that fate is a terrible bitch😂..I bet he must be having regrets of jumping off ship... Now he is going to find out he is not as Irreplaceable as his deluded mind has been making up ..- 22 comments
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Friends, family & future plans
Seraph28 commented on Robert Hugill's story chapter in Friends, family & future plans
What a marvelous chapter!...Gray is certainly having a bit of good fortune lately...Good sibling relationship Check...Burgeoning poetry .check...Relationship .Check...Basically all is going well lately for him- 11 comments
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Finally ..at least someone recognises that it's a bad decision to hide the truth about Edward from Will. Sure it's done to protect him...but sometimes hiding the truth from someone doesn't protect them but rather puts them at a disadvantage. Mel was right!..Especially when there are others who will have no scruples in using that truth .
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Good morning Sir
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Yes...but then he has people who have shown him time and again in that one month that they are in his corner....Trace told him he has gotta to start meeting people half way.
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Oh God!..that's akin to what our president possesses.Total Executive Power and we have had 39 years to endure it.. A certain excuse for a British MP tried that a few years back and he nearly lost his Premiership ..Thank God the Supreme Court there is not partisan like ours here or the US one .. Mr.Lydon...that is a really scary prospect .I.have always believed any head of state of who has the Executive authority to appoint the judiciary and members of the legislature is just too powerful..That type.of leader is a threat to democracy!
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At some point ,like Celia hinted sometime back, somethings become tired...I know some readers are all about giving Joel some leeway but I personally find this a little taxing now. @Okiegrad has mentioned Joel has fear and anxiety..Granted it's true but he is not given himself any favours.. You cant help yourself if all you are doing is putting up walls and keeping people at bay .He is doing it with Trace and his family ..In his head , they are just a stop over .He is not willing to give folks a chance, to meet them half way.That part with Coach Finn had me wishing could enter the story and tell him we don't always get what we want and that life is about compromise ...this part below pretty much irks me I probably am alone in this but I find Joel a little prickly and quite unlikeable for me..Now I know folks will say his life has been uprooted suddenly and all that but he really has an asshole streak to him .Sorry @Krista..pardon my French there🤣. I guess it comes with putting on a facade for long..it just rubs me the wrong way and that is coming from someone who lives in a country where being queer is dangerous ..not to mention that am a femme projecting guy....now I really gotta stop..am now ranting.. Thank you for this update @Krista
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Good morning Sir...wouldn't mind a cuppa of that brew too
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Hmm..Mr.Prime Minister you just crossed the Rubicon Sir.. I can say with certainty that he has signed his own political obituary.. My..did Will Carter coming out swinging with that declaration..eh... You do have a knack for ratcheting up tension Mr.Lydon🤣🤣.. Now am going to enjoy seeing that spineless man get what is coming for him
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Poor Julien doesn't know what is going to hit him🤣...I almost feel sorry for him.
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Eh..those are a lot of questions @Philippe🤣...You just made Mr. Aterovis work load a little heavier..
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Well...that last scene of the chapter definitely shows Killian has to muster his gifts lest he finds himself in a more precarious situation ... I think guessing the killer this time is going to be hard like a lottery 🤣
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Am I the only who thinks this is so far the best chapter of the 6 that have been posted so far!.. One rarely comes across characters like Reese who are so resolute and smart like him...He was able to see the poisonous allure of pills and nipped it in the bud before it had a chance of blooming into something worse .That there was marvelous! Dexter was something else too...It takes guts to admit you have a problem like he does in this chapter .that's just something so ..surreal Thank you!
