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Malik has a little trauma after finding his friends kissing. The blue light kind of reminded me of a transporter beam in StarTrek, but it left the flashlight?
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Chapter 3: Blessings In Paradise
VBlew commented on Grayson Rose's story chapter in Chapter 3: Blessings In Paradise
Very curious that Jamie mentions the tools they will need and they show up. Fresh water, tools for making it safe to drink and hunt. Then the big reveal Connor wanted Jamie and Jamie had freaked out on him. Maybe they both wanted it but were afraid of the social pressure… time to find out. -
Beautiful ending. Gold Album is huge. Shaun’s decision to make it all official was perfect.
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The Letter and the Weight that Comes with It
VBlew commented on Tony S.'s story chapter in The Letter and the Weight that Comes with It
Big step for Kitt, agreeing to go for the GED. He is smart, he’ll do fine. His confidence is coming back. Is Mateo going to reach out to ask Matt to get Kitt’s ID? -
Very fun chapter. Especially loved the marriage proposal at the end.
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This was a good celebration for Sam as he departs his hometown. Ser Graham is very cautious about his facial appearance. It may have been something in his youth he was teased about, which may no longer be an issue, or it could be something. He is willing to show Sam at some point in the future. I have a feeling that Sam’s imagination is not wrong about the affection either.
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Nora got what she had wanted for her birthday, Daniel is coming apart looking for Malik, if that’s even his name.
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Chapter 10 - Our Story
VBlew commented on ChromedOutCortex's story chapter in Chapter 10 - Our Story
Beautiful ending. James had to be first to admit his feeling and push the issue of them being more than friends. Glad that Marcus was able to agree this time. They really are a great couple. -
Killian does need to figure out if he wants a relationship or not, and with whom. The nightmare is disturbing, and his history with them being prophetic is even more. He needs to ask someone, like maybe Jace about it.
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Seems like the queen may have done something to the Herald for him to be acting this strangely out of character if the people around him are noticing he’s not what he normally is.
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Awesome, they won runner up and Fan Favorite… which was the non fixed part of the show. Then to get a contract with management, that’s huge. Will Gretchen and Ben still leave? Or just take a break for the baby? The $10K will help everybody. Sad to see this story winding down, but looking forward to whatever you do next.
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Finally back together, and cleared out the mess they created. Now to fix the situation, and get back home.
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Fenn is torn by what he is being forced to do now, but truly seems intent on pleasing his master so much that he can’t see how wrong it is. Fortunately Ain was able to get his family to a safe house.
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Justin was amazing. Brooding, then active in getting Tim to bed… wondered about the Adult content being broadcast. Could be an issue for the “sponsors”. We didn’t gather any drama with Ben at the debate…
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Why do they keep having car crashes? Noah back in the hospital? Meeting his father who had been MIA.
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Bearding the Lion Part 5
VBlew commented on Boy Mercury X's story chapter in Bearding the Lion Part 5
Redemption, forgiveness and a very strong desire to spend some seed…. Love the ending. -
“Melancholia (Part 3)”
VBlew commented on CasualWanderer82's story chapter in “Melancholia (Part 3)”
Will Malik be found? That service was quite deliberately hiding everything from their clients to not have this happen. The night with Max opened Daniel up more to himself. Can’t wait for more. -
Lewis & Charles in colour
VBlew commented on Robert Hugill's story chapter in Lewis & Charles in colour
Very fun chapter. Was the color drawing, just one page as a gift for Charlie? Seems like, but could not tell for sure from the description. Tom seems to have had a good interaction with the potential clients. The description of Tom in his leathers gave me images of Tom of Finland drawings.. hot… -
Great beginning to the story, opened nicely, but turned very serious with the physical abuse. Hopefully that is resolved. They have become really close.
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Fenn has been so groomed into thinking that what he is doing is best for the country, he can’t see any other perspective. It’s so sad. I wonder if he will die because of all this or will Ain be able to save him in the end?
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Now we know how powerful the CB radios are. Crazy the could use a camera in a smoke detector for surveillance. I was right about it being a reality show… looking forward to the fireworks!
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So he has two guys now interested again. He should listen to Bryan’s side of the story, seems like there is a very different version from his perspective….
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Bearding the Lion Part 4
VBlew commented on Boy Mercury X's story chapter in Bearding the Lion Part 4
Damn, why was he drinking in the first place? So fing stupid. He got exactly the wrong guy mad at him. Is it possible to fix it? Once something like that is out, it’s hard to retract. The whole gym is going to be pissed at him, he better not show up there any time soon. -
Determination and Misunderstanding
VBlew commented on Tony S.'s story chapter in Determination and Misunderstanding
One little hint was all it took. Kitt still has all of the trauma his father inflicted on him, and thought he was protecting Matt. Matt’s admission of loving him hopefully helps. Time and space but at least now Matt knows he’s alive. -
The tech and the secrecy is interesting, Will the younger boys be learning about all of this from their daily feedings? Glad Brian is awake and seems to be recovered. Interesting take on the different kinds of blood. Needing to know the family’s favorites is on the Staff to know. Also to possibly know for visiting dignitaries. I agree it seems like the Prince initially withheld info on Vampire Tech, but this household seems to be getting the most advanced toys now.
