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Chapter 13: The Command Test Episode
VBlew commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 13: The Command Test Episode
This was a great chapter testing these guys for leadership potential. How about something in engineering with the Chief shirtless? -
There is a future, but what does it look like for these guys, they could have a conversation about what they would like the shape of it to be.
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Hector seems to really be enjoining his friends, but Juanita brings up really valid points that they may unintentionally be hurting him when the filming ends and Brant and Sky go back to being exclusive. Maybe the porn star may have some advice for them, as it’s not just sex, but intimacy that they are dealing with and the emotional depth of dealing with that has to have been dealt with in his career.
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This poem echoes my beliefs. Beautiful.
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The prince made excellent use of winning the race to form new alliances with the emperor’s blessing. It will be interesting to see how he and AI use these new relationships.
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This is a great chapter getting ready for the Christmas banquet and a giftgiving.
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Chapter 12: The Episode With A Real Budget
VBlew commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 12: The Episode With A Real Budget
It seems the series was successful in season one and the upgrade to season two gave them an amazing new ship to have as the backdrop for all the drama. Loving it. -
Noah found Tristian in the lead vault which is why he couldn’t teleport out. But it gave them so much evidence on so much more. Noah is going to give a speech at a fundraiser, hopefully nobody tries to assault him here.
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This level of harassment is unjustified, unless Stephanie thinks Jason might reciprocate the feelings and leave her out in the cold…. Tyler has some support, and should say something so they can help him through it. Rather than pretending with Cynthia even if she is willing.
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Slowly settling into domestic bliss. Orion finally sort of apologized for his bad behavior. They learn about telepathy. Beautiful chapter.
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Peter warned Luna in the very beginning it would hurt their relationship. And now it has. Tyler really did want it, but doesn’t seem ready to be more. And is barely accepting that he liked it so much.
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Part XXXV. Thermal Shock
VBlew commented on sumtimesIwrite's story chapter in Part XXXV. Thermal Shock
Damn, both wanting to protect the other. The fact it was Robert’s creation that was attacking his lover, that he had to defend against, was tragic. Hopefully being frozen mostly, Robert will survive. -
Hector seemed to want to be in this reciprocal role, pleasuring Bransky. His first time giving like that. He said he only ever received before.
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Very interesting pledge rushing. Reminded me a little of my pledge time. Never know what the house traditions are.
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Chapter 11: The Season Finale Episode
VBlew commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 11: The Season Finale Episode
Great ending to the series… fun times. Oz like entity in this one. Getting the crews to band together for mutual survival. -
Another interesting book set amid a country in crisis. Looking forward to how they survive it.
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Chapter 15: The Wilderness
VBlew commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 15: The Wilderness
Great ending to this book. It’s filling in gaps from the books in the future. No wonder Jacob and Tommy became so close, they were practically growing up together. -
Hector/Ricky really seemed to enjoy Sky/Aaron working on his body for the first time.
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Love the beginning of this story. The twins did good protecting Nick in the locker room the prior year. Looking forward to where this one goes.
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Chapter 18 It Sounds a Good One
VBlew commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 18 It Sounds a Good One
Terrific chapter exploring the house. It is designed well and the layout is great. 4 bedrooms. The primary upstairs over the kitchen to be warm in the winter. Plenty of room for Fletcher’s brothers when they come with the sheep. Willy James speaking up for what he would like, a place away to make as much noise as he wants with his husband Runyan….- 38 comments
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Great dinner and a time to get to know the in-laws better. Did time move quicker in the veil, or was Ysolde saying they were older and Theo was just young?
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So the meet cute was a disaster…. At least they now know each others names.
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Chapter 31 ~ No Porcelain Doll ~
VBlew commented on Vcs's story chapter in Chapter 31 ~ No Porcelain Doll ~
Mannly wants to stand on his own, to be a partner with Jake, but the emotional response to Jake’s protective nature was anger and cooling off. The eagle I believe has some Native American symbolism, which has not been explained. Mannly’s self deprecation is making him nauseous and seemingly delirious. Hopefully it was one of his friends coming to see how he was doing. Seems like these guys need to talk, with someone else meditating to get their feelings out in the open. -
Did they really just do that, or was it a dream? If it was real, then Tyler as not really ready for feeling the way he did. He thought he wanted it, but could not handle the emotions… hopefully this didn’t destroy their friendship, but it may have which is sad.
