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  1. VBlew

    Chapter Five

    There is definitely an attraction between these two men, we only have Nathan’s inner dialogue, so there will need to be a conversation to see if they are both feeling the same. What is Brohm’s profession and why was he to be hanged? Hopefully we will find out soon.
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    Chapter 3

    Wow, an alphabetical serial killer… who has access to a jail cell, not just the house. The mystery continues. Such great writing. The suspense is palpable.
  3. It seems like Adam is possibly growing wings…
  4. VBlew

    Chapter 1

    Great premise. Those of us aging into life it seems like so many things happened and are just faded memories. This is a really good thing that Colin is doing as well.
  5. VBlew

    Chapter 1

    Interesting start to what appears to be an interesting world.
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    Chapter 2

    Is Dani just grateful for being saved by Abbie, or is there more? Besides the pressing need to relieve his pressures? Ralph seems very possessive as well.
  7. VBlew

    Chapter 26 Malibu

    Apollo may be out on the street again after that episode with Ebony?? Or will Amir be tolerant of this behavior?
  8. VBlew

    Seven

    Another interesting chapter, pulling Keith gently out to himself and others. The gay team play may be good for him to meet others with similar likes. He has had a sheltered life.
  9. VBlew

    Zolgrim

    Interesting chapter with these serpent people. What will Simon/Yidian do here to increase his strength?
  10. So this Theodore is the father of Mark and Dave, and wants to return from the dead… trick entity forced the bite to make him a werewolf. So now both brothers have been changed. Maybe the will help thwart the plans.
  11. Another interesting adventure on vacation, learning about each others likes and dislikes. Meeting new people. The gardens and villa sound interesting, something my husband and I might visit if traveling there.
  12. Interesting chapter, was the large man a Ghost? Or something else? Also where is his hunger and super speed coming from. Very interesting twist in the story here.
  13. VBlew

    Chapter 2

    Damn, another body. Whoever the murder is they are crafty. All of the remaining alive people having been interviewed. Unless they got Barry to murder Abel, then killed him…
  14. VBlew

    Fly!

    Very interesting perspective, first the birds, then the human?
  15. VBlew

    Chapter 2

    Thomas is being a great friend.
  16. Great story, loved the wedding description. Life has gone well for them, and their family.
  17. VBlew

    Discoveries

    Brutal honesty is a great way to start a relationship. Mike was in charge not letting Jamie derail the line of interrogation. And they both understand their work will interfere with social planning. It looks like they will be good for each other.
  18. VBlew

    Six

    Lovely chapter, Keith recognized that he was being flirted with not Stan, then a fun day out with Thomas. Fresh air and exercise, and some fun sex that reconfirmed his desire for men.
  19. VBlew

    Chapter 1

    Great start to what looks to be a great murder mystery.
  20. VBlew

    One Step Behind

    My hope is that Angel does not inject Otis with the drug he had for Jasper. I’m thinking the gun target practice that Otis did is going to come in handy and surprise Hudson. There is some very dark history with the perps in this story.
  21. VBlew

    Chapter 1

    This is an awesome start to what looks to be an interesting story. I definitely want to know more about Abbie.
  22. Great chapter, lots of calls. I’m not sure I read anything from Mike’s conversations that would indicate he was gay other than the late night texting.
  23. VBlew

    Chapter 38

    In the second section is this: ”“I'm glad you abandoned us,” Bryan said.” I think “he” should replace “you” in that line… As for Kenny having his own room and space, This is a great option. Hopefully Caleb doesn’t feel left out wit Bryan staying at Billy’s for 2 weeks.
  24. VBlew

    Chapter 1

    Great short with a happy ending.
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    Temptations

    It is a police story, so the details of the job they are doing important to the storyline. Mike seems to know more about police work than a typical special. And is for sure flirting… he did get Jamie’s personal number pretty quickly, and is using it. Looking forward to where this goes.
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