jfalkon
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I heard this on the radio some weeks ago and can't get it out of my head. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=P_SlAzsXa7E
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Happy 4th of July! For those outside of the USA, today we celebrate being an independent nation. Its an ocasion for fireworks, parties, concerts, etc.
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This is my favorite of the three. I sometimes have a hard time understanding poems but it was easy to grasp the message here.
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The witch got what she deserved. This story was fun to read and I loved the ending.
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Great story! It's so nice to see Terry finaly find someone who seems to care about him even if it is for only one night.
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An exiting story, well written
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I love your take on the theme. I never would have expected someone to write about a ghost. Now I want to know what happens next.
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Wiki Games - The Music Business
jfalkon commented on Dolores Esteban's story chapter in Wiki Games - The Music Business
I have never seen peoms written this way before. I would never have guessed it could work so well. Thanks for sharing these. -
Great story! I love the imp. It took a while to get used to something from hell not being all bad. In a way he reminds we a michivious pet that you can't help liking.
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There's not much I can add to the comments already posted. I hope you continue whe story!
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Happy Father's Day! In the USA we celebrate Fathers today so I want to wish the GA fathers a wonderful day.
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Happy Birthday to everyones favorite echidna!!!
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William Shakespeare: 400 Years After His Death
jfalkon replied to Drew Espinosa's topic in The Lounge
My favorite plays were Macbeth and Hamlet. It was great studying them in school because there was someone to explain things. If I were left alone with the centuries old language and layers of meaning I would have been completely lost. I didn't expect to like Romeo and Juliet because romantic stories usualy don't interest me much but after studying the play I learned to apreciate the quality of the writing. I might have been board at first but luckily my teacher gave us a lecture on the history of theater. Among other things he told us us that in Shakespeare's time even the female roles were played by men. The image of Juliet as a drag queen stuck in my head and kept me entertained. -
Good Advice: "Eat a good diet." "Get plenty of rest." Bad Advice: "Wait until you're older." This can be good advice in some cases but whenever someone said that to me they were just hoping I loose interest. When I still want to do whatever it is I was planning a few years later the wise advice giver can always say, "Aren't you a little old for that?" Strange Advice: "Don't get old." I keep hearing people at work say that. I'm not sure how to follow that advice, besides I want that senoir discount at the hardware store.
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Thank you for writing this. Your story was beautifly written. To me the story had the feel of an old legend or maybe part of some kind of ancienct mythology.
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The ending took me by surprise. It looked to me like his chances of surviving were pretty slim but it would be great if he did. There have been some cases where a skydiver's parachute did not open and yet the person survived. Maybe he could land in a human's back yard.
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Great story! I love the way you describe scents. Since I read this story I have been sniffing what I eat more carefully.
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That was wonderfuly creepy! Great job!
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Beautiful poems! Its amazing how much you can say with so few words.
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Great story! I love the imagary of the dark closet and the light. Hopefuly he will eventualy shade his eyes and peak out.
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Please write a sequel! I want to see what happens next.
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Great story! Sadly the scenes of violence remind me of news stories. The happy scenes mad up for the trajic ones though.
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There wasn't a dull moment in this story! I love the dialogue too.
