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Chapter 25: The Scourging
akascrubber commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 25: The Scourging
What an intense situation and the disasters are not fully comprehended by Andrew or Will. Andrew only learned of one huge problem. Dylan had emptied files from Will's computer and then poured coffee on it to disguise what he had done. But someone saw him and told Andrew. Andrew assessed the terrible situation and is leaving to find Dylan to know why he did what he did, Dylan is in danger or experiencing Andrew's wraith. He wants Will to keep sleeping because when he finds out, he will be very worried. Andrew is going to interrogate Dylan to give Will a full report. I assume the vid Dylan did not send was a copy of a recording of Will and he having sex. Since he looks like Jason , it was meant for more evidence for Merrick. Neither will or Andrew knows Marcus is out on bail and that he has injured and kidnapped Peter and Jason. They should be in fear of their lives.No one knows yet they are missing. -
Parents Weekend, Book Three of Five
akascrubber commented on Boy Mercury X's story chapter in Parents Weekend, Book Three of Five
Matt is amazing. He finds a hot compatible guy and they both find ways to sexually satisfy each other. Matt blowing a hot, well built father at the crowded steakhouse was priceless. They were very pleased and may have got away without anyone noticing. However, Hayden night be suspicious. -
Part 8: Echoes and Excuses
akascrubber commented on StoriesByTroy's story chapter in Part 8: Echoes and Excuses
The aftermath of their sexual play showed they both could not admit they really liked each other. Mattteo kept his distance which confused Adrian who began to feel Matteo thought he made a mistake. Adrian was still sexually attracted to Matteo. Matteo after trying to deny it realized he was also attracted to Adian. Neither one had a candid conversation. They misread each other and both felt uneasy It is going to come to a head soon. Jessica demanded he invite Adrian to her birthday party. She thinks Adrian was a sham BF intended to make her jealous. "....Invite everyone, including your boyfriend. Let's see how real you two are in front of an audience." What is going to happen? -
The band director is far away welcoming his new baby girl. He is so happy. Meanwhile Jake and Danny have released all their anger on each other. Danny will get a new roommate. Will their anger be contained or will they openly attack each other and hurt the band's training?
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Bravo--You cited the 12 points of the scout law which every good boy scout had to memorize in order to advance,
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Mark, you are directing me to read about the side effects of new drugs. I take several for my chronic conditions and can handle how they help me. My docs oversee me and guide my usage. This new drug Travis is taking without true medical advice scares me His new drug can induce --- drowsiness, dizziness, tiredness, and poor coordination or balance--plus trouble with memory, confusion, concentration difficulties, or depression. These last effects can place Travis in Kendo's hands.
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Travis crossed a line with Kendo by exchanging blow jobs with him in his bed. Ramon and Maria know Kendo is staying over so their closeness is not secret. Travis will not fuck with Kendo. He said it was a line he could not cross and he had promised Marie. He told Will was a good friend who had other male interests I do not think Kendo will give up on fucking. He is supplying drugs to Travis. He can manipulate him and Travis is weakening his sexual barriers. Travis had troubles with his drug mix and Kendo gave him a new pill that helped. He has yet to find out about later side effects. Will can tell Travis is lying when they talk on the phone. He realizes Kendo is around Travis more. I think Will needs to visit Travis. He might get very worried about the drugs Travis is taking. Travis is getting no negative feedback from his director who must be overlooking his drug use. Is this a Hollywood effect to accept the use if it helps the film production?
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The trip has so far has been one of great lows and highs, First Azula faced a series of black clothed assassins who were eventually killed. More were promised. Raith was surprised and impressed by Azula's ruthlessness. "His partner wasn't a fragile prize to be sheltered; he had turned into a hardened, brilliant blade. Second, Raith unexpectedly saw his two sisters embrace and really like Azula." Seeing his chosen lifelong partner, his consort-to-be, so effortlessly folded into the heart of his family filled a hollow space he hadn't realized still existed in his chest, and it warmed his heart as nothing ever could." The Basileus knows about Azula. He wants him protected from assassins and wants to meet the man who has won over the formidable Raith.
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Julian left his old life and knew he would not be coming back. He was removed from existence by his father. Three people remained in his thoughts--his grandmother who left him money to maybe take better charge of his future, the boy who was special to him who he sent a reluctant farewell letter and his younger brother , Miles, who cried before he left. Miles will need to grow up and should be tested by the increased demands of his father who does not want him to stray like Julian. The ship's long voyage will give him time to think and transition to his new life. The bosun mate, Samuel Hart, a few years older than him appealed to him and he liked him. Maybe they might talk and Hart can help him learn more about what he can now expect. Hawaii is a foreign country and he is now a student who needs to learn how to succeed. Julian realized..."I was no longer a son being sent away. I was a man being carried toward a life I had not yet imagined."
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The Star Trek crew were clueless and adorable and soon to be arrested. The police will not believe what they see at the scout camp. I do not think this will turn out well.
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Chapter 24: The Betrayer’s Kiss
akascrubber commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 24: The Betrayer’s Kiss
So, Will did not save his merger files to a thumb drive he kept safely elsewhere as a backup action ? -
Chapter 24: The Betrayer’s Kiss
akascrubber commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 24: The Betrayer’s Kiss
Dylan should be sent to the lowest and 9th level hell Dante wrote about in his Inferno. "As you go deeper, the sins and punishments grow much worse, ending at the frozen center with Satan. " Dylan deserves to suffer serious and prolonged pain -
Chapter 24: The Betrayer’s Kiss
akascrubber commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 24: The Betrayer’s Kiss
OMG--disaster --a world class disaster on two levels Dylan showed he was the true enemy. He must be in the pay of Merrick and waited for the right time to wreck Will and Jason. I imagine he notified Merrick. He stayed late when Will was distraught worrying about the kids and his job.He helped take Will to bed Jason saw them in bed and fell apart. Dylan looks like Jason. Jasson said he was not good enough for Will and ran away. Peter found him outside and comforted him Meanwhile Dylan came downstairs and opened Will's laptop. He knew how to get into his files and deleted all Will's files on the merger. He did this on purpose. This is a calculated terrible injury. Then he fled the house. Will is going to find the horrible result when he wakes up. One of the young boys can tell Will he saw Dylan using his computer. Will is going to feel violated and very upset This only add to the severe pressure on Will. -
Chapter 23: The Weighing of Souls
akascrubber commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 23: The Weighing of Souls
Yes--talking about a forecast excerpt--I am waiting to see how Merrick's wife helps Andrew to stop her overbearing husband. -
Lawrence was able to visit the village with the intention of mailing his letter/report. He found out students visited the village to dance. Maybe, he could discuss this activity with Ali and Bastien. Lawrence has a strange talk with a post office worker about historical conspiracies. He has more fodder to cover with his friends. What ideas seem to be of interest to his fellow students?
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A delightful, enchanting story of two different boys, Jimmy and Charlie, who notice each other on a very hot bus traveling toward the coast. They repeatedly look at each other with not so hidden glances and become finally aware that they are very intrigued with each other. The eventually get off the bus and begin talking . Charilie offers to buy Jimmy a frozen treat and their attraction awakens and pleases them They exchange their first kisses. Read on to find out what they do and how they better relate. They grow and blossom.
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Hooray--Jimmy and Charlie really connected and kissed at the beach after being so shy giving hints of interest on a bus ride. Their chemistry was just right after all. Jimmy was changed for the good and grew. Charlie was a great impact on him. " I was his first kiss too, I think... I was a few of his other firsts too as he was mine. "
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What a dangerous scout troop that is ready to defend Andy and Lucas. The pups are charming, ready and lethal. Esca's plan is backfiring. "Operation Shattered Glass," is going forward.
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Chapter 23: The Weighing of Souls
akascrubber commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 23: The Weighing of Souls
Merrick is not the only bad ass-- He located the photographer who is getting photos of Will for Merrick. The guy is told he now works for Tanaka. "Or," Tanaka continued, "I let my associates have a word with you. And then I bury you so deep the RCMP will need a map to find your bones." The photographer swallowed.: He will comply and Merrick loses a tool against Will he needs -
Perfect---Mark recovered from the disaster at the party and left it to find Sandro. Mark knew where he might go to take a break and found him. He told Sandro he was sorry and he was gay. Sandro was shocked and then they both realized how foolish they had been over 6 months, An alcohol covered Sandro could not go home so he went with Mark and stayed with his in his bed like they used to do. They hugged and were very happy. This is turning out very encouraging for them. So far, they have been chaste. Will they become more romantic later?
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Chapter 23: The Weighing of Souls
akascrubber commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 23: The Weighing of Souls
Tuesday is the deadline. Alistair Merrick explained his plan to Charles Levesque. He was told the plan better succeed or his blood will flow. Right now, we expect Merrick's plan will fail and his life will be at risk. Merrick will be desperate to cast blame elsewhere and lash out. He will also need a backup plan. His no longer hidden overseas assets are undergoing a federal audit. Kellerman called Merrick and told him his firm will not represent child abusers. Merrick told Kellerman he was making a mistake. Will Kellerman be killed as a scapegoat when Merrick's plan fails? -
Chapter 23: The Weighing of Souls
akascrubber commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 23: The Weighing of Souls
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Oh--this could get very messy if you are not nice in handling these two boys who need help. Can Erik handle this situation for now or does he need to consult a trusted lawyer?
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You are staying true to form. Your audience , including me, will be pleased in the end and frustrated with the twists and disruptions along the way
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Not a cowboy/ranch story... A type of romance male centered novel or a Nora Roberts mystery love story ? Do you have an author you consider a good model?
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