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Chapter 7: THE KILLING GROUND
akascrubber commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 7: THE KILLING GROUND
Is Lukas gone after the CSC attack? It looks like it, but looks can be deceiving Will he be captured flying in space with Dio alongside? Lukas is being tracked, Are you creating a deus ex machina scenario rescue for Lucas? -
Wylan/Ishan's cry that the rain and ending of the heavy calvary charge was God's will had to unsettle and discourage Khalid and the Turks. No one considers he had anything to do with the weather disaster. The Turks knew that their last major offensive force was no longer effective and they had to see it will be inevitable that the crusaders will take the city. I do wonder what huge device the crusaders were erecting.
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A major event happened unexpectedly. The tide turned in favor of the crusaders A sudden rain shower disrupted a calvary charge lead by Khalid. His men and horses were mired in thick mud. The Turks were forced to retreat Darien headed the shield wall that was ready to face the charging horses, It would have been a horrible fight. Darien knew Wylan/Ishan created the storm. Wylan/Ishan did it to save Khalid and Darien The Turks must be upset and worried
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Raith and Azula finally meet. Yulin is healed. Raith told Azula what happened and went over his five years of hell fighting against the evil courtier while protecting the Sura Clan. He told him of his long terrible forced marriage and love lotions that gave him 2 children. Raith explained his wife and son were poisoned Azula heard about the offer of a full investigation that could clear his clan. Azula countered he wanted a meeting with Basileus Dio. A meeting will be held with the coucil tomorrow to see what happens next. This is going to be a very important meeting. Raith feels much better knowing Azula is not married. Azula seems still restrained and conflicted and not ready to forgive Raith. Let us see how they feel after all is revealed the next morning.
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Fenn has just learned he is a key part of the survival plan, For now, he is being tortured by Stankova and his blood is being withdrawn He returned to his cell sick and in great painn Fenn learned Petre is one nearby cell and the Herald is in another adjacent cell Fenn will face more torture, but at some point when he is recovering in his cell things will change. Varilik will find a way to let him out of his cell. Fenn is to silently and secretly move and find the queen and kill her. One of the queen's children will take over. The conflict between the two countries will end. Varilik told Fenn he will not seek to run his former country and will silently disappear. Can he be trusted?
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Chapter 6: THE EXTRACTION
akascrubber commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 6: THE EXTRACTION
Let us see in practice what form of intimacy is most satisfying and rewarding for the longest period--a long cuddle or a good fuck and cuddle. -
Tell me this is not a porno film? It is too detailed and graphic to be sanitized into an R rated movie, I think. This description is so intense and almost over the top "My cries dueled with Brant’s wails and howls as we drove inexoribly toward a gut-churning, mutual orgasm worthy of Eros and Aphrodite. My balls slammed up into my taint as my rockets fired and burning cum raced through my cock into Brant’s hot, moist, clenching ass. His screams and the pulsing I could feel in his cock highlighted his great orgasm at the same moment." Will parts of this movie end up on the dark web or some very restricted pay site?
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Chapter 6: THE EXTRACTION
akascrubber commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 6: THE EXTRACTION
But, if Eriks will not fuck him when he really needs intimacy, he has to seek out Tripp. Right? -
Stephen must have the joyous, blessed look of awareness of the young monk who first had glorious sex in the Name of the Rose movie. He could want lots more experiences with Ashot.
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Birdsong can be really calming and appealing. I used to live where Robins were very common. Now, my first song of the spring day is from a mourning dove.
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Chapter 6: THE EXTRACTION
akascrubber commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 6: THE EXTRACTION
Tripp should not feel guilty. He and Lukas had sex as they acted to calm Lukas before they would save Eriks, He could not have been so smooth acting otherwise. Eriks and Lukas have not had sex and Eriks refused to consider having sex with Lukas due to a bad experience with a past boyfriend. Lukas sensed something had happened between the two and said he did not to know what happened. Tripp probably will tell him at some point and Lukas will need more intimate care again from someone. He will be open to both Tripp and Eriks. How will this need be satisfied? Will both Tripp and Eriks talk it out? -
Our aspiring actor has grown to be at peace. His love for Bruce undergirds him. His training and friends enrich him. He is blending his past with the present. "In every audition, every late‑night script study, every whispered “Better,” and every tender call from Bruce, I was writing a new chapter — one that wove the passion of the coast with the vast, uncharted possibilities of the city."
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Chapter 6: THE EXTRACTION
akascrubber commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 6: THE EXTRACTION
Eriks and Lukas are now both targets and the connected pair will be a much higher priority, Trip will help them find out why the construct program wants them. Lukas told the agents they are leaving the system to throw them off. Going after the construct transport ship will really put a target on their backs -
He said more than he meant after the heat of practice battle defeating the three squires. I hope it does not come back to hurt him later. "I learned," Ishan said softly, "from a master who made me do this blindfolded." Maybe, Ishan will again teach the three squires. He will be a fierce opponent in real battle
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Yes, Varilik wants to be an advisor for the one the queen picks to rule his country. He will give up military secrets, terrain features enabling attacks and hidden passages and secrets of the people and ways to handle opposition. He says he will help her. He hates he was arrested on rigged charges. The queen says she will consider the former herald's offer. She assigns Denir to watch him and study him. Neither the queen and Denir trusts him and Denir hates him. The queen failed to find out why he was arrested. Varilik has the ability to drug people into compliance. I am sure he intends to regain his control by using plants to create a tonic to control others. The queen and Denir do not yet know of Varilik's ability..
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The crusaders have more reasons to be hopeful--new supplies from the Egyptians, promised aid from new ships and new motivation. After the victory at the lake, Darien is called the hammer and considered the one who will lead them to enter Antioch "Darien looked at the embassy, at the baskets of fruit that would be gone in a day and the grain that would last a week. "They are offering what we need. That is what matters. There is word that ships are arriving in St. Simeon bringing siege equipment and more supplies from Emperor Alexios."
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Graeme and knight and his new squIre in training , Sam, embark on the next adventure. Graeme is away from his native land and Sam joins up with his knight to find a new life after his parents were killed by bandits. As they start their travels, they rescue a couple attacked by robbers which leads to a task to help eradicate a terrible drug that has taken over parts of a town. Playing detectives and spies they investigate the people and places connected to the drug trade, They face danger, endure beatings and face death threats. They are victorious and their story continues Read how they proceed and adapt and learn a great deal more about themselves. I think you will like them and will want to read the promised next story of Sam and Graeme later this year,
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Thank you for Book 2 in a series, Graeme and Sam conducted a successful investigation. Sam learned quite a bit. They both faced danger and survived. Sam spoke openly about his deep feeling for his knight. They both are growing closer together and helping each other become healthier This was an encouraging story of two interesting people.
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Chapter 5: THE BLOODHOUND
akascrubber commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 5: THE BLOODHOUND
They have to find Eriks. They need a break and hopefully Tripp is going to find a great lead, It seems Tripp will be a new crew member. There is room. An angry Lukas is going to be motivated to find Eriks. -
Wylan went to Khalid and told him about his brother's plot to turn the emirs against him. In addition he sad Rashid was delirious from the bolt shot and is going to claim he is not Islan and is really a sorcerer, Khalid took it all in and came to the emirs and denounced Rashid as sick and poisoned, He had him taken to his quarters under guard. Ishan handled this problem very well Wylan reached out to Ishan and Darien. He found them after they were married. Ishan wanted to experience the intimacy that Darien and Wylan shared. The three linked minds. Wylan agreed with their union so Darien fucked Ishan. Ishan was eventually very pleased, Ishan slept well that night for the first time. The three are closer together than ever before.
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The Shadows Grow Longer
akascrubber commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in The Shadows Grow Longer
The fake wisdom tree told Jack and Vince he is not the powerful one they have to defeat. The Black Forest trees are on the move to go after the pack, They want to stop Theo from giving his father the flint, -
Chapter 15 - Family
akascrubber commented on ChromedOutCortex's story chapter in Chapter 15 - Family
I I hope Book 2 covers the people who stayed together as they move ahead facing challenges and good experiences, If Sam is mentioned, maybe it would be an obituary notice saying he was killed in a police raid on an illegal drug manufacturing center -
Chapter 15 - Family
akascrubber commented on ChromedOutCortex's story chapter in Chapter 15 - Family
The men are together 90% married and very happy with three supportive parents. They have their acts together and are following the right priorities,Good for them I hope there will be a book 2, -
Mom is secured for now. The lawyer gave them good, supportive advice. He was practical and realistic. Evan and James are ready and are going to be living together--even if there are too many coffee grinders
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Chapter 13 - After The Storm
akascrubber commented on ChromedOutCortex's story chapter in Chapter 13 - After The Storm
Sam is a true scoundrel and has been found out. It looks like g he has run through all the money he stolen and is trying to take more from unknown places. A report has been filed with the police. He is in real trouble.
