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  1. dboggs9700

    Crossfire

    I do not think it was ever said either, just that he inherited Ken's portion also.
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    Part 1

    Great start to a story but sorry it is going to be so short.
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    Crossfire

    Marvin is going to lose it when he does find out about the pictures after making Kent promise to tell him everything. Keeping Marvin in the dark is just putting him and Devon in harms way.
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    Crossfire

    I hate that I mentioned Niran involving Marvin and Devon in my comment in chapter 14. I think not telling Marvin what is going on is a mistake. Pete needs to meet Marvin, and he will see that Marvin is worthy of his trust also. Great chapter Tony.
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    Go Home

    Great work as always Joe. Appreciate how you filled more of the story in between this and Jake's Story. Not quite a HEA but an optimism that Junior, Sam, and Boon can become a happy dysfunctional family.
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    Chapter 43 S3

    Definitely a fun trip today. Good to see a little more focus on Daniel and see a slightly more mature side of him. Great chapter.
  7. Truly a wonderful story with such great well-developed characters. It brought back some really bad memories from high school but also help me put those memories to rest. Most of all, thank you for a HEA because it easily could have gone the other way.
  8. Russell is a little cryptic (no pun intended). He is really looking out for his old band and the guys he cares about.
  9. I am surprised Marcus did not attempt suicide. Thank God he had great understanding parents.
  10. He is definitely one I was thinking of.
  11. I know of a couple writers on here that could probably come up with inventive ways to get rid of the three of them.
  12. I know "family" is important, but it should end when it is cruel. J needs to stand up for himself and allow Evan to be with him when he is dealing with the "family".
  13. Just started reading this story today and this second chapter has hooked me. I have doubts about Evan's maturity level.
  14. Beautiful ending and story. I plan to read more @ChromedOutCortex.
  15. You have out done yourself @Boy Mercury X with this deep and thought-provoking story. @akascrubber and @Cane23 beautifully expressed their feelings about the story. I totally agree with what they wrote. The two stories you mentioned at the end of the story, will you be posting them here on GA? As always, looking forward to your next story.
  16. We need our threesome, Jack, Theo, and Vince, to come together. Hopefully united they can overcome the evil spirits.
  17. I absolutely love this story but unfortunately you said it is a short one. I hope your comment regarding sequels applies to this one too.
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    Chapter 13

    Don't feel bad, I missed it too until a couple weeks ago.
  19. Niran now appears to be seriously after Kent. I understand Pete and Kent not wanting to get Marvin involved but not knowing could put Marvin and Devon in danger. Niran seems the type to go after someone like Devon just to get what he wants from Kent.
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    Chapter 14

    Beautiful chapter seeing Patrick welcomed back into his family. Anxious to see where the rest of the weekend goes.
  21. Great ending and left rather open. The characters are so well developed. Hope you come back at a later point with a sequel.
  22. Beautifully written chapter that is really emotional. Jake is such a strong and fearless guy and has really held himself together. Hopefully meeting with Griff Junior will be a positive experience for Jake.
  23. dboggs9700

    Chapter 1

    Great chapter and I will probably binge read the rest of the story. I have no idea why I have not read any of your stories before @ChromedOutCortex.
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    The Staying

    Very happy that Kent is following the doctor's orders with the prescriptions. Too bad he second guesses all of his feelings right now. Only time will tell. Did not mean to copy you Joseph, we must have been typing in comments at same time.
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    Chapter 12

    You take way too much pride in your stories here to shortchange them.
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