Johnathan Colourfield

You are in a room. You don’t know why. You see things and you hear things. What did you do?

well done KC

well when i briefly spoke to you in London you seemed like you had a strong control of your language. I think its experience with just english speakers that will help you paya Glad you guys managed to make the decision, good luck and i'm thinking of you

if its setting something up thats important to the plot then do it I'm sure your readers won't mind a bit of preaching, especially if it sthe good kind Remember not to head hop though. Focus the sermon from your characters point of view and don't let plot bunnies slip in Hope this helps

WOW. Thank you Bob! This is brilliant

Two plans are better than one. I think you need to talk it over in person It all depends on what parts of your personality you want to develop. Do you want to be louder or quieter?

Hello everyone! Its been a while since i updated my writing blog. I moved to university in September so I haven't had that much time to write. I have 'finished' Womans Game 2, i'm currently working through Cia's comments and i've kind of re-created the idea of the story in Book 2. I'm making it way more Post Modernist than originally planned but it is good Womans Game 2 currently stands at: 23600 so i'm aiming for around 23000 so the whole series is 54,500 words long This makes me very happy So it should be around 55k when i'm finished editing it and then i'll finally start posting the story It's been too long... Now Angel, I recently started writing the second half of Part 3 and i'm halfway through Chapter 4 of 6. This is always good and it stands at 15,000 roughly at the moment so should be around 20,000 words like bringing the whole series to 55k again. I have a thing with that number I swear. Recently submitted a story for the anthology over at FSO, I'm probably going to be just an anthology author over there, just because of uni taking over my life. I've started tidbits of three different stories, some more than others. My current targets are going to be: MARCH 1st - Finish Angel 3 and have it edited. Then between then and June i'm going to panic write my novella anthology entry "The Soul of Hogwarts" (A Harry Potter Fan Fiction Story. Although, it doesn't really have any gay characters.' I may use "The Best Little Whorehouse In..." for the novella anthology. 20,000 Words minimum, I can do that in 3 months. I have 875 words already on it. Only another 19,000 to go... woop So yeah, anyway back to targets. JUNE 1st - Novella Entry Finished and sent to an editor and then beta read. Fun Fun Fun! So yeah I haven't dissapeared off the writing planet, i'm just incredibly busy with uni and work. I should really do my Dr. Faustus Essay and read The Good Soldier now. Oh well. I have all day tommorow to study Thanks for reading. Review and respond for me Thanks!

thanks for the reminder. Will edit and post there now.

*giggle* i like it keep writing!

Happy Birthday Joey

we were both killed on the same night its sad

Yay Glad you got something to enter I just finished mine so i feel good. I need to edit it and then I will submit it

highly amusing

Happy Birthday

Any and all use of the word "Banter".

"Billy" should follow what he feels is right. in that situation I would say stay in the closet until after college Most parents tend to figure this kinda thing out anyway but deny it

Happy Birthday man!

YAY So proud <3 I remember sitting around a metal table with you and you saying 'Publishers don't like me.' Me: 'Why?' You: 'Because my novels have gay sex'

Been reading over the thread and I'd just like to say that each of you are wonderful people with hearts of gold. I hope you can all beat the dragon we call depression. I have had my moments of depression (mainly whilst i'm at home or if something happens at university with friends thats the one i find hard to deal with). My thoughts are with you all always

Happy Birthday Lacey :3

Hey dude Well done man; you have come so far You only have a little few steps to go but take all the time in the world. You know you have love; you know you have friends out there We all love you and we know you can do it; these things take time

oh damn hope it comes back online soon

I did it, I think

That's alot lugh but you can do it I think i need to do this sort of thing

good luck i'm just starting another story of my own